Thrd-2:AR/ARSH OS#30: Khoobsurat Hai Wo Itna/Page55 - Page 6

Originally posted by: Mpakeez

Thank U Thank U sooo much...
I have to say so much..
Fir soonchte hai ki chaddo yaar aap ko kyu pakaye apni bakwass se..
Do u knw hum do din se yaha waha dhoondh rahe hai koi to OS mille...
Upar se i lost ur 1st threads link nahi to koi purani waali hi padhte..

Humme kya pata tha itta wadda surprise millega..
Thank U sooo much 1's again...
Yaha abhi subha b nahii aur hum aap ki OS padh rahe hai..
Hahahahaha

i knw i am mad.. But when it comes to ur writing i luv to being mad..
U r just supreb...
D way u show AR feeling itzz just awesome.. Especially Ridhima's feeling..
& dn Armaan ko kaese apni mistake ka ehsaas hota hai aur fir wo kaese manata hai...
Last bit was funny... I laughed soo much... Life mai pehli baar kisi OS/FF mai yai connection use hote deekha...

& i got 1 lesson frm ur diz OS.. Ki Husbad ko khudh se durr nahii hone dena warna pagal hone k full chances hai... Yai marraige k baad kaam aane waala...
Hahahahahahaha

Thank U 1's again dear..
& keep writing i luv ur writing...
Take care...
Keep smiling...
Stay blessed..
Bye...

Originally posted by: sameera_12

Completed reading it to full!!!
And it was marvelous Ana!! He returned back, had a small taste of his own medicine but its a fact or we call a practical thing that sweet words and closeness do always removes bitter to bitter memories with the same person we have... Ofcourse if the initiative is taken from heart...

When you are far the bond somewhere fades away... Main jab choti thi to... kisi k ghar rehne jaoon i mean uncle aunty and all... mama was always like k yeh to ja k bhool jati hai... phone pe baat nahi karti and all... Maine unhe kabhi nahi kaha k unse phone pe baat karna mere liye kitna mushkil hota tha as mujhe unki awaaz he ajeeb lagne lagti thi, aise jese pata nahi par bohat ajeeb mehsoos hota tha... shyness may be not the right word but it was weird...

Lekin phir saamne... mama k ilaawa kabhi koi nahi hota tha... i mean i was free to talk to her even about the lamest thing.. Lekin ab adat hogayi hai... muma!! kuch laana to nahi hai while coming back from institute and all... I think choti thi to wo cheez thi ab chali gayi hai...😆

So... poori story ka matlab... k door reh k naraz rehna ya ignore karna ya karwi yaadein palna asaan hota hai lekin pass, ek saath reh k mushkil hojata hai... you give in soon... nahi???😳

Really loved this OS Ana!! You already know you are my favorite writer...
Keep Writing More!!😊


P.S The moment when they were walking on the beech and he remembered his mother and then realizing the thing said sorry to her... You nailed it!!! It was the most perfect moment of all and a very realistic too!!!

Aurrr uski jo harkatein thi naa when she tried to work and he started whistling and all... i enjoyed it alot... Bilkul imagine kar pa rahi thi main k yeh ho raha hai!!😉

Sameera
😊😉
😳

Originally posted by: LoveArsh

Awesomeee os,loved it,poor shona,armaan was a careless taking her for granted,glad that armaan father blasted on him,loved that armaan realise her importance,loved i the os alottt, do write more :)

Originally posted by: smj7

I loved the end
portray of emotions were awsme

Originally posted by: megha_kajen

awsume OS dear

Originally posted by: ZIKRASHAH

Hey nice os.
love it.
do write more.

Originally posted by: nilusoni

superb loved it

ending is too hot

plz pm me for other work or os

continue soon