Thrd-2:AR/ARSH OS#30: Khoobsurat Hai Wo Itna/Page55 - Page 5

Created

Last reply

Replies

364

Views

79.3k

Users

81

Likes

607

Frequent Posters

..oneOone.. thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 11 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: ATTITUDEBABY

Good one.. like the change in Shilpa


Thank you dear...shilpa gonna show attitude...but just a little
..oneOone.. thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 11 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: .Optimism.

awesome OS dear..😊



nd congrats for new thread.. 😊


Thank you so much dear for the wishesss😃
Mpakeez thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Commentator Level 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#43
Thank U Thank U sooo much...
I have to say so much..
Fir soonchte hai ki chaddo yaar aap ko kyu pakaye apni bakwass se..
Do u knw hum do din se yaha waha dhoondh rahe hai koi to OS mille...
Upar se i lost ur 1st threads link nahi to koi purani waali hi padhte..

Humme kya pata tha itta wadda surprise millega..
Thank U sooo much 1's again...
Yaha abhi subha b nahii aur hum aap ki OS padh rahe hai..
Hahahahaha

i knw i am mad.. But when it comes to ur writing i luv to being mad..
U r just supreb...
D way u show AR feeling itzz just awesome.. Especially Ridhima's feeling..
& dn Armaan ko kaese apni mistake ka ehsaas hota hai aur fir wo kaese manata hai...
Last bit was funny... I laughed soo much... Life mai pehli baar kisi OS/FF mai yai connection use hote deekha...

& i got 1 lesson frm ur diz OS.. Ki Husbad ko khudh se durr nahii hone dena warna pagal hone k full chances hai... Yai marraige k baad kaam aane waala...
Hahahahahahaha

Thank U 1's again dear..
& keep writing i luv ur writing...
Take care...
Keep smiling...
Stay blessed..
Bye...
sameera_12 thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
#44
Completed reading it to full!!!
And it was marvelous Ana!! He returned back, had a small taste of his own medicine but its a fact or we call a practical thing that sweet words and closeness do always removes bitter to bitter memories with the same person we have... Ofcourse if the initiative is taken from heart...

When you are far the bond somewhere fades away... Main jab choti thi to... kisi k ghar rehne jaoon i mean uncle aunty and all... mama was always like k yeh to ja k bhool jati hai... phone pe baat nahi karti and all... Maine unhe kabhi nahi kaha k unse phone pe baat karna mere liye kitna mushkil hota tha as mujhe unki awaaz he ajeeb lagne lagti thi, aise jese pata nahi par bohat ajeeb mehsoos hota tha... shyness may be not the right word but it was weird...

Lekin phir saamne... mama k ilaawa kabhi koi nahi hota tha... i mean i was free to talk to her even about the lamest thing.. Lekin ab adat hogayi hai... muma!! kuch laana to nahi hai while coming back from institute and all... I think choti thi to wo cheez thi ab chali gayi hai...😆

So... poori story ka matlab... k door reh k naraz rehna ya ignore karna ya karwi yaadein palna asaan hota hai lekin pass, ek saath reh k mushkil hojata hai... you give in soon... nahi???😳

Really loved this OS Ana!! You already know you are my favorite writer...
Keep Writing More!!😊


P.S The moment when they were walking on the beech and he remembered his mother and then realizing the thing said sorry to her... You nailed it!!! It was the most perfect moment of all and a very realistic too!!!

Aurrr uski jo harkatein thi naa when she tried to work and he started whistling and all... i enjoyed it alot... Bilkul imagine kar pa rahi thi main k yeh ho raha hai!!😉

Sameera
😊😉
😳
Edited by sameera_12 - 11 years ago
LoveArsh thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#45
Awesomeee os,loved it,poor shona,armaan was a careless taking her for granted,glad that armaan father blasted on him,loved that armaan realise her importance,loved i the os alottt, do write more :)
shonayaa thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: ..oneOone..



Thank you dear...
Hope u will like the end too


I loved the end
portray of emotions were awsme
ZIKRASHAH thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#47
Hey nice os.
love it.
do write more.
nilusoni thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#48
superb loved it
ending is too hot
plz pm me for other work or os
continue soon
sammy4u thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#49
nice part dear
great that armaan made up with her
lovely os
crazysky thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 11 years ago
#50
it was awesome loved the story line

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: PeachyPisces

1 years ago

ArSh(Armaan-Shilpa/DMG) ff:

Is there anyone interested in reading ArSh(Armaan-Shipa) ff, it's such a old show that I'm not sure if there any fans left in this forum.

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: sakshi5050

9 months ago

Ranveer's unsaid feelings #14 updated Episode 1007 page no 21 Ranveer's unsaid feelings #14 updated Episode 1007 page no 21

Welcome to the new thread of Ranveer's unsaid feelings. Keep enjoying the world of Ishveer. Their unconditional Love, their friendship, their...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: sakshi5050

3 years ago

Ranveer's unsaid feelings #13 updated episode 971 page 155

Welcome you all to the new thread of RANVEER'S UNSAID FEELINGS #13 Keep Travelling in the world of ISHVEER LOVE Warm Regards sakshi ❤️ Index...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse

8 months ago

PreRish FF ~ Purity Of Souls (ch 6 - page 5)

[NOCOPY] P U R I T Y O F S O U L S T E A S E R "bungle ke piche teri beri ke niche aha re aha....kanta laga!!!" The song was too loud in the...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: SillySoni

1 years ago

Sarang | AarYa FF - Chapter 28 page 24 - 27/1/25 Sarang | AarYa FF - Chapter 28 page 24 - 27/1/25

Hi guys, thanks for loving Dolent!! Here is my new story. As the title suggests this ff is about love and affection 💖 Soon I'll post the first...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".