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Posted: 11 years ago
Confessions, confessions!
Really liked this!
Keep writing!
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Hello all,

Am back with the next chapter...

Chapter 18:

Mein bhi nahi chodunga us kamine ko...

R: agaya dramebazz... slapped his forehead.. Ami...

Ami: Oye chasmesh itina sab kuch hogaya aur tune kuch nahi batayi.. Kaustu, what do you think of yourself... ha & how dare he to make my Sanyu's & urs MMS.. he was full on rage & shocked..

R: Hello chill, nautanki. ab band kar tumhari bakwass.. & no need to shout on choti..

Ami: Ohh right ab ye chasmesh tumhari behan haina..bodyguard to tu hai hi..

R: abbey chup tu ab... nahi to..

Adi: guys stop it.. & Ami, how come you are here... & wat are you doing here??

R: ye to chipkali hai...hutch dog jaisa.. where ever Adi goes he follows...

Got a sharp glare from Ami.

Adi: Randhir pls.. Ami are you spying me? how come you know am here?

Ami: Yesterday night itself I have seen you so much disturbed.. understood something is wrong.. & also tomorrow morning you said have some urgent work & don't want to attend classes.. then I suspected something is definitely wrong.. so I have followed you & heard the whole convo. & Randhir, tum itina bhi bure nahi ho, jitna meine socha... Not bad. & thanks for taking care of my sister & this chasmesh.

R: whatever... & rolled his eyes.. Guys, it wont be good if any sees us all together.. so lets disperse & meet somewhere outside the college.

Ami: good idea... even we can celebrate for the couple.. lets do one we all will go for a dinner today.

K: wow that's a good idea... what say Adi?

Adi: As you say my princess & holds Kaustu's hand...(Kaustu blushed some & at a time both Randhir & Ami said Ahem Ahem..) he then leaves her hand.. & Randhir we will start here by 7PM. be ready. But how shall we go? let me book a cab..

Ami: no Adi, that wont be a good idea.. lets go on bikes... long drive & can have fun...

K: Oyehoye here someone is being romantic... kya baat hai... Adi... is something wrong... & winked at Randhir. Randhir smiled.

Ami: chasmesh, I had this plan only for my Adi.. already you are such a stupid so planned for you.. we can do onething ... you both go on one bike, Sanyu & me on one & Randhir on one... this will be good. Randhir made a face & Adi smiled by looking at him.. (Randhir muttered aagaya kebab mein haddi... bewakoof..)

All decided & went from there..

Adi messaged Sanyu that they will be going for dinner today & Sanyu got surprised by this sudden plan.

In girls room...

Sanyu noticed kaustu is very happy.

S: Kya baat hai Kaustu, looking so happy.

K: wo wo kuch nahi.. just like that.. excited for today's dinner. & Sanyu, pls help me in selecting the dress..

Sanyu selected her some dress & thought something is definitely something is there.

In the evening boys were waiting for the girls outside the college. Kaustu & Sanyu went there. Bye seeing them Adi & Randhir's mouth were open.. both were staring at their angels..

Ami: guys apna muh bandh rakh nahi tho macchar ghuss jayega..

both came out of their dreamland.. Sanyu got surprised on seeing Randhir there...

S: Randhir tum, yaha...

Adi: Sanyu, I only invited him, he is alone in the room, so thought he will have some fun.. & have even Kaustu suggested it.

S: Kaustu..

K: ha Sanyu, wo bhi meri bhai jaise haina.. so I asked Adi to call him.

S: bhai... ek min ye sab kya hai... guys you all hate Randhir na.. den suddenly how come... tell me what's happening..

R: Farzi, kitine sawal poochte ho tum? pause it.. & lets go for dinner... always you eat my brain to be friendly with them.. now am doing it & you are questioning... ab chup kar & lets go..

Sanyu self thought:

May be you wont say anything but am not stupid & unable to understand what's going on.. you all became close & Kaustu calling Randhir as bhai.. that's unbelievable.. something definitely happened. its hurting me guys, you are not sharing with me.. but I will wait for the day till you all open up... will wait for it..

She came out of her trance by Ami's voice..

Ami: Sanyu where have you lost, chalo come & sit.

All moved towards bikes.. for a sec Sanyu saw Randhir & their eyes met which has been noticed by Ami. Sanyu came near Ami's bike & about to sit.

Ami; bacchi can you come with Randhir? I have a small work.. hearing this Randhir got smile.

S: With Randhir? np I will wait & go with you & suppressed her smile making Randhir anger.

Ami: oye mein kebab mein haddi nahi hu aur bewakoof bhi nahi.. so you go with him I will join later.

Sanyu got confused but Randhir understood why Ami is saying..

S: Bhai wat are you saying am not able to understand.

R: Farzi, if you are done with interrogation can we start, already I said am feeling hungry.

Sanyu sat on Randhir's bike & he started (Randhir thanked Ami in his mind😉)

After few min Ami also started & all reached the nearby dhaba.

All ordered for the food & waiting for it. meanwhile Sanyu noticed the looks exchanging between Adi & Kaustu..

S: ye wat you both are signaling?

Adi: wo Sanyu, wanna tell you something... its very important.

S; ha bolo..

Adi: wo kya haina ki... (stammering for words)

S: Adi baat kya hai? & why are you stammering???

Adi: wo Sanyu, mtr is... hmm.. ha Kaustu will tell you.

K: me what I will say, you only tell her.. both were arguing like this & Sanyu is totally confused. & Ami & Randhir were irritated.

Ami; abbey chup kar. shut up you both. Sanyu they wanna say that they love each other. that's it.. itini simple hai & you guys are creating mess...

Sanyu eyes were opened widely by hearing & totally shocked. she pinched Randhir.

R: Aaa.. idiot.. why did you pinched me?

S: just wanna check am I dreaming or is this real.

R: they why can't you pinch yourself, why pinching me??? Farzi kahiki...

S: giggled then will get pain na so pinched you... & turned to Kaustu.. foolll you haven't tell me... & you Adi... what the... when why where... she started all WH questions...

Ami: Sanyu, first take a breath.. then ask... calm down

Then Adi told he loves Kaustu from long back & so proposed & she accepted... he didn't say much of anything... Sanyu felt very happy for her both best friends... & hugged them.

Food came & all started eating...

Ami: chasmesh I never thought you were this slow... after your proposal & you guys came near thought some hottie kiss will be there but no... such a normal one...

Adi& Kaustu both felt embarrassed.

Adi: chup kar besharam... how come you became such shameless.. seeing all this.. don't even close your eyes... & now discussing about it.

Ami: iss mein kya galat hai... & you say Sanyu is lollipop... you know without even confession they had a li Ami is about to say but Sanyu stomped on his foot.

Ami: aaa Sanyu ki bacchiii... Ooch its paining.. how much hard have you stomped... why you did this..

S: shut your mouth & eat first.. & for god sake tell me how come you know all are you spying on everyone????

Ami: I already told you whomever I felt they are mine, will never leave them.. I have seen you on that night gng... & followed you.. I know you very well when you said you trust Randhir, you will definitely go & meet him. So I have followed you to make sure he doesn't do any. But instead I saw something else... ha but sacchii I have closed my eyes (said in a mischievous tone) tu tho ekdum pataka hai... Sandhir felt embarrassed & Sanyu turned red.

Adi & Kaustu were confused.. and looking at all...

Adi: Ami, wat are you saying unable to understand any..

Ami: arey chod vo sab & lets finish the food soon & we need to reach early...

All had their dinner & came out of the dabha.

S: hey Ami give me keys now I will drive the bike.

R: Farzi are you gone mad? don't do such stupid things... come & sit with me. lets start.

S: No means no.. I know bike riding & love to ride a bike. Ami gimme the keys.

Ami: bacchi pls I cant take the risk. so you go with Randhir & ha its very romantic climate also.. so enjoy with him.

S: shut up. she snatched the keys from Ami & started bike. bhai come with Randhir... I am leaving now...

rest also followed her...

Adi: paagal ladki... hamesha sab ko pareshan karegi..

Ami was sitting on back of Randhir as they dnt want to disturb other couple.

Ami: wow Sanyu you were driving nicely... good good I will come & sit on your bike.

S: Nahi bhai.. I cant manage doubles... will learn soon & definitely take you.

Randhir was irritated with this..
R: Farzi, stop your nonsense.. drive silently, you are not any professional one.. so careful & not much speed. With an angry voice.

Sanyu understood Randhir is totally angry & worried so she decreased the speed.

Randhir POV:

I can't believe this... in this chilled night after a good dinner long drive with a stupid boy instead of my girl... this farzi is impossible, what is the necessary to drive, cant she sit with me & enjoy, don't wanna spend some time & romantic moments... stupid girl.. & for irritation this stupid fellow...

Ami: hello mann mein gaali mat de.. feelings are mutual... just baring you only for my bacchii.. or else won't even be with you..

All reached the hostel girls said bye & went to their room.

Ami: Randhir, once you are done with all work, come to our room. we are leaving now. wanna discuss something with you.

Adi & Randhir noticed the seriousness in his voice.

In boys room..

R: could you pls tell me why have you called me here?

Ami: guys we have lied to Sanyu, but she definitely got doubt something is wrong. so we should find the culprit asap before she comes to know about all this mess. We only should explain her or else she will sure feel bad.

R: hmm he is right.. even I am trying to find out the person.. even checked seniors & Juniors also.. Other branches guys.. no I don't think they dont even know Sanyu much. the person who did this definitely knew sanyu & Kaustu well... so checked our classmates.

Adi: have you checked with our Dream team? because Vidushi & Jiggy are from DT, have you checked with Sahil, Yoyo & parth?

Ami: Adi they are our team.. no no its not possible...

R: did we ever expect JIggy will stoop such low? I am damn sure its not Yoyo. because he never do such cheap things & also he respect Sanyu & knew I have feelings for her. So its not Yoyo.

Ami: we have to decide its Sahil or Parth.

R: No we cant come to a conclusion as one from them did that. Hmm I have an idea...

Adi & Ami: What...

Tadaa... am done... so how is it.. good bad worse????? yaar pls comment. will be very happy to read ur comments..

Love you,

Mickey

Edited by amulbaby06 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Resss
Unresss

😊 I had a smile on my face the whole time when I was reading it... Suddenly I realised that I was smiling...
I swear you make the scenes so real that it feels like we're in there👏👏
This update was awesome...⭐️
Ami... Hehehehe...he's so funny...
They're getting close to find out the culprit... EXCITED😲
Awesomeee part

Update soon
Love Sana
Edited by sana07 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update
adi and kustu
bike ridding
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
It was superb yaar...just loved it
Update soon :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey! Mickey
Lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely,
lovely, lovely, lovely update dear😳😳
Lovely, nicely and beautifully written👏👏
love it to the core❤️
keep it up👍🏼
Update soon plz
Thanks for pm
Love
Bushra
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Posted: 11 years ago
superebbb update...
love it to the core...
just love amis crackter...
i know who is he...
waitinvg for heros plan...
love sandhir scene...
con.sooonnn
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Posted: 11 years ago
Good ami and randhir funny
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb update...
loved it to the core...
love Ami n RD's bike ride... lol
plus when Sanyu pinch Randhir.. aww that was the cutest moment in this update..
you are an amazing writer I must say..
plzz update soonish..
love
Ashka...
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved it mickey!😛
i knew it will be ami.😉.he is such a besharam..jab uski setting bhi ho jayegi tab pata cahlege..but i like him..😆
fun n joy time!!🥳
RD comes with an idea to catch culprit...wow!😛
thanks fr updating..waiting fr next
love suchi🤗

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