Hey Vani,
Ik its been a really v long tym since I commented bt sry*puppy eyes*. I was really busy wid the admission process n stuff. Bt nw I m back. I love ur fic to d core. Its one of d most emotional one I hv read. U simply rock!!!!!!!!!
Nw Ik dat ill hv to compensate 4 nt being able to comment,so here I m trying too,hope it does*fingers crossed* I guess I stopped commenting frm 8th chp so I m gonna comment on each n every chp frm 9th one,Here I go(lets begin)
CHAPTER 9
Well to begin with, u hv a way wid words. U manage to make me laugh n cry at d same time n this was no diff. The frndship which Parth n Randhir shared was amazing, no1 cn ever replace a bestfrnd in life. Its jst impossible n u girl, u portrayed dat brilliantly. Hats off. N I also loved Randhir saving Sanyu, God how much I wish this to happen with me*Dreamy Look* . I mean falling n sm1 is always there to make sure u dnt!!!!!!(metaphorically n e1 physically.Innate nut shell cute update:)
CHAPTER 10
I was jst spellbound n doing a happy dance. I mean two Sandhir kisses in 1 update. It couldnt hv been any better. It was v obvious dat dey both feel 4 each other. Love like they share doesn't errode with tym, it jst gets more beautiful n stronger e1 if u dnt want to believe it urself. Bt I hv 1 complaint frm Sanyu,is she blind?????(sry biased Randhirian in me speaking),I mean couldn't she see Randhir's feeling. I mean d guy is all bonkers 4 u.Wake up!!!!!!!!n bdw d kiss was hot.I loved it:)
CHAPTER 11
First word dat left frm my mouth after reading this update was :SHIT MAN,y ill tell u...Coz Randhir was nw broken beyond repair. I knew dat whatever happened in d past. Randhir might hv never been wrong. N their fight.I mean I was shocked like hell!!!!!!. My heart was like actually aching after reading this. I personally hv experienced wat happens when sm1 u trust d most breaks ur trust bt in this case no1 actually did. It was pure misunderstanding,they actually n literally hv d power to break a beautiful relationship. N u penned it down brilliantly:)
CHAPTER 12
After reading this update. I was like hell no!!!! Randhir cn never do this to Sanyu n dat too when she was pregnant(Nw dis explained Ranveer's confusion in my mind). I was clearly blowed away bt there was a part of me which knew Randhir vl never do such thing e1 d evidences point contrary.Bt it jst made d anxiousness in me grow wilder!!!! THANK GOD I read all updates in 1 go orelse I would hv died of anticipation*winks*.
Nice plot Vani!!!!!
CHAPTER 13
After reading this chp I jst felt bad 4 Parth n Sanyu. Randhir was innocent. Well sometimes like I said misunderstandings ruin everything. I couldn't e1 imagine wat pain Randhir might hv gone through!!!!!!! Though feel bad 4 Sanyu. Bt she should hv atleast let Randhir explain himself once. I actually dnt e1 blame her solely as d evidences pointed dat stupid n utter lie.Anybody would hv lost their cool.Bt trusting ur loved 1 is imp... n dat too blindly n d lack of which smtimes leads to devastating situations like this. 1. Beautifully covered every emotion,Rocking as always:)
CHAPTER 14
Well,I would jst like to say amazing story line,Dats all. The interview scene was jst perfect.No doubt Sanyu will b selected. Thank God Randhir went to london. Gripping plot girl:)
CHAPTER 15
This update was jst fab!!!!!! Harsh supporting Part N Sanyu. A dad's TRUE conecern n pure love 4 his son ,made me damn emotional. N RANVEER!!!!! wat do I tell abt him. D cute lil devil. D prank acc to me was brilliant!!!!! N bdw dat part where Ranveer asks who Sanyukta is jst made me go all mad with joy n d reason well...I could die 4 such love.Randhir speaking Sanyu's ne in sleep*Dreamy looks* ...I mean like c'mon 1 cnt find love like this easily ...rather its rare these days bt loved dat scene:)
CHAPTER 16
I was like OMG!!!!!!!!! How Cuteee. Ik it was a reallyyy long update btbinwas yearning 4 more. The Date was jst out of d world kind of thing. How much sweet Randhir is!!!!!!! N moreover he noes Sanyu sooo well. N I personally love d dhaba's food( I jst had it twice wid Dad without mom*winks* our secret n enjoyed it to d core, U made me recollect those cute n awesome childhood memories of mine. Love you 4 dt). How much I wish I get Sm1 like Randhir ,rather every girl should:)
CHAPTER 17
U hv become d official cliff hanger queen. I was dying of anticipation abt watbis gonna happen ... how would Randhir react when he comes to bow. Wat vl Parth n Sanyu say???? Vl he jst simply forgive them out of love he has 4 them.Damn U*Angry looks*(kidding) bt Coming back to update. The bond between Ranveer n Sanyu is brilliantly portrayed bt agiain 1 confusion is Sanyu nt smart enough to understand dt Ranveer is her son ...n dat mole thing jst proved it + Randhir is nt married n to top it off he is d exact copy of Randhir...Wat more confirmation do u need girl!!!!!!
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