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purnima209

@purnima209

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Posted: 11 years ago

#481

1) AMAZING PART YAR NO WRDS FOR IT 👏

2) REALLY YAR UNBELIEVABLE OF UR WRITING SKILLS DEAR 😃

3) CANT WAIT FOR NXT PART YAR

4) LAST FEW SENTENCES ARE AMAZING YAR

5) Cham..champ?" Randhir told and hiccupped.

"Haan?" Ranveer told as Randhir sat on the bed.
Sanyukta was just standing there adoring the duo in front of her.
"Tum mujhe hamesha puchte the na ki tumhari mom kaun hai?" Randhir told. Ranveer and Sanyukta both stiffened this sudden line.
"Haan?" Ranveer asked slowly, careful not to hurt his dad.
"Woh tumhari mom hai," Randhir told and pointed towards Sanyukta.
Ranveer's jaw dropped. Sanyukta froze.

THESE WRDS ARE AMAZING YAR

I CAN FEEL THE PAIN OF SANYU AND THE RANVEER 😭😭

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Unknown

@AnatomyAddict

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#482

Mein ek innocent si jaan, iss cling hanger se pareshaan!

Ye kyun kiya Basanti, urr, Vani!!!! Ye bohat badi na insafi haai!!!!

Yeh tune kyuuu kiyyyaa🤣🤣

I don't know, I am in a weird mood😆

Anyways the dynamics you have described between Ranveer and Sanyukta were just sooo adorable!!! So cute these twoo aree

And Randhir is really going to take his time before actually opening up nah?! In intoxication every character is just hilarious and I love drunk scenes for absurd reasons!

They always manage to bring out character feelings and I just ADORE that! The way you ended though! I am going to haunt you in your sleep if you don't update tomorrow!

Sach mein huh! Warning samaj lo!

Love,

Pari 😈

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DreamAchiever9

@DreamAchiever9

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Posted: 11 years ago

#483

I had this speculation ki Ranveer is Sanyukta's son... but truth itni jldi woh bhi randhir ki drunk state mein... Awesome!!!!! Gr8 writting skills girl... Keep up the good work..

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Vanii

@-Ms.Rocker-

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#484

Originally posted by: sandhirlover15
Hi Vanii <3
I am Sorry for Unreserving it so late after your posted the next chapter then I unreserved it. I am Sorry. But what can I do this hectic schedule doesn't let me do so.

Hiii Harshu! <3
Do you want me to slap you? Sorry kyu bolti ho yaar? Waiting for your comments is worth it. You make them worth waiting. I love these. Please stop apologizing. :/

Mehnn Vanii please stop writing so flawlessly. You give me Heart Attack and even make me stop Breathing.

Eeekss! :D Thankyou ssooo much mann!
I looove you! <3
And these, are soo cute! :D Just like you!

Now coming to the update as usual...
Jaisa baap vaisa Beta. This phrase totally suit the Rd-Ranveer duo. They are so cute.

I know right. Ranveer ko maine Randhir ka microxerox bana diya :) haha.

Aww how sweet sanyu packed lunch for Ranveer. He is a true shaitan "iska result aapko shaam ko doonga" LOL😆

Mommy's lovve! :D Hahaa, I love shaitan bacche. They are fun to be with! <3

Those Blue Flashbacks Mehnn They truly Rock...!!!
My Favourite Colour and so are those Flashbacks. They make me feel awestruck.

Aww Harshu, thanks! :D
Mine toh you know na? :P
Then I will write more flashbacks in Sanyu's view. :D

Haha RD is so demanding. Sanyukta keep cooking food for RD. You guys are truly an ideal couple...

Randhir hai. Demanding toh hoga hi! :P
They sure are! I sssooo agree! :D

Yay...!! I get another Cute Moment between Sanyu-Ranveer. Aww I wish I could see the picture LOL.

Haha, I wish I could imagine some guy in the place of Ranveer but koi mind mein aa hi nahi raha. Even me. I wish I could get a pic! :P

Hehe Randhir doing sit ups. You deserve it RD. Aur aao Late mil gayi naa saza. 😛

Haha, I wish I could make Randhir to do sit-ups instead of Ranveer! :P

Yeh toh vahi baat ho gayi Bade Miyaan Bade Miyaan chotte Miyaan Subhanallah. 😉

Mahn, I was just thinking about that statement! *hi-fies*

Haha RD fighting with a kid that too his son. How can he afterall the kid is shoo cute. Lol

Haha, Randhir randhir hai! :P
However that cute chutku also belongs to Randhir only na? :P

I was like this while reading those cute moments...

I have the same reaction when I read your comments...

You Love cliffhangers!! Arrrgh...

*smiles evilly*
Oh yeah, I do! xD

Anyways great update and Great You..!
Sorry for less images. My mood is kinda ruined now...

Oh shut up! STOP APOLOGIZING.
You even type 2-3 lines now? It will make my day. So please STOP APOLOGIZING! :/

Please Continue Soon Sure madam! :D
Love You :* Love you more! :*

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Jane

@Jane523

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Posted: 11 years ago

#485

AWES0ME DEAR...

SUPERB UPDT...

SANYU IS RANVEER'S MOM...!!!!!!!!!!!!

HOW COME SHE DOESNT KNOW...??????????

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Vanii

@-Ms.Rocker-

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#486

Originally posted by: DoubleH
RES
UNRES

Ok. I'm fourth. But that doesnt matter. Coz all 3 of us commented at the exact same time xD
See how many stalkers you have, Vani? 🤣
Better close all your doors and windows. You never know what'll happen! >.>

Ok. So coming to the update,
What can I say reey? Words are not enough to tell you how good your updates are :')
This chapter was ama-zayn! *_*
The angry, arrogant MCP's baack! xD
Your flashback, as usual, was very cute ^_^
Randhir trying to make food for Sanyukta 😆
And then, the holi part!
Meyn! Randhir actually has a room with all of their photos? T_T
So. Touching! T_T
And the last 4 lines 😲
See! I knew it! I knew it!
*starts dancing* 🥳
I told you na, that I'm shore Ranveer is SanDhir's son only!!
And wow, Cliffhangers are back!
My happiness about you leaving cliffhangers was short lived 🤣
Now, the stalking game shall continue tommorow also (If I have net, that is) xD
Waiting like...a duck 😆
Hana ^_^

Exactly. Everyone wins! :D

Haha, glad I do have! :D I love all of them! :*

Thankyou soo much Hana Banana! :D

Words aren't enough? How about a basket full of bananas then? xP

Yes finally he is back! :D

Aww. Thanks banana! :)

I wish he makes food for me?

*goes to Randhirland*

*borrows a computer from there and continues typing*

I always wanted to have a room like that. So I gave him one! :P

Haha. He would obv be! :P

*joins you*

Yes, they are! I apologized beforehand only. :P

Haha, yes it was! :P

Next it will be a bigger cliffhanger.. Warning you! :P

Haha, will wait for another game then :P

Now like a duck?

Haha,

- Vanii ^_^

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Vanii

@-Ms.Rocker-

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#487

Originally posted by: anyania
A luck by chance spot..
sorry guys..
shivi u r the first one..followed by others..
i luv u all :*

We love you too Rii! :D

Par change kyu kiya tune? :|

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@krystel21

Alumni

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#488

Happened to spot this and read it at one go. I love the way you write, and the plot is so gripping! I can't wait to find out what happens, and how does Sanyukta not know that Ranveer is her son!

Keep writing xx

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Vanii

@-Ms.Rocker-

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#489

Originally posted by: ShefaliMalhotra
Moi second!
*glares Rii*
Wait u didn't res you just replied to hana
So technically I'm first 😆
Yayy!
aur karo chat
*shows tounge to every1*

Edited~
So, this chapter is dedicated to my sweet little sister, Shivangi (ShefaliMalhotra)
Breath Shivangi! Breath! I will read if I get over this line somehow! :O

Did you get over it yet? :P

No? Okay. x(

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Vanii

@-Ms.Rocker-

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#490

Originally posted by: anyania
Res as i did before🤣sowwy😎
unres...
this chappy made me speechless...
what should i say..
u blew my mind..
Randhir is back again wid his arrogance..
hahaha
and welcome to hell dialogue was awsm.
the flashback scene was dreamy..
randhir made sandwich..so cute! And c nw every1 is licking their fingers..
thandaai ne asar dikhaya, thanks to yoyo and lollipop! Paran's convo was so gud..
and the last line freaked me out..
i knew it, i knew it..
he officially declared it and i luv him:*
waiting for every1's reaction..
Update soon.
joldi joldi🤣