You're Mine, Forever :) - A Sandhir FF! (Thread 2) THREAD 3 STARTED. - Page 23

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Posted: 11 years ago
Update Please!!
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Aisha😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Mane 🤣
I was laughing during the whole update 🤣 🤣

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Ms.Rocker-



*wipes khushi ke aasu*
Kyu Mahak? Kyu? Kyu udaati ho?
Mai neeche aake sab se milna chahti hoon! 🤣 - That was lame I know!

Coming to your comment!
Gosh tum toh mere har ek chapter ka summary deti ho!
If anyone doesnt want to read the FF then they can just look at your comment and get the story. Thanks mann! :D
I dont know ki tujhe mera FF itna kyu pasand aaya but hey Thanks for all the support and love you have showered on me! MEans a lott and bohot accha lagta hai! :D

Love you! :*
Par flashbacks toh saare cute cute hote hai na? Acche nai lagte?
Haha, me and thoughtful ? Meri maa ko bologi toh she''ll start laughing. Jo dimaag mein aaya woh type kar deti hoon! :P
I dont even proof read! :P

Arey tum PM ke liye thanks mat bolo yaar varna next time nahi karungi! :(
Aww. thanks! :D

- Vanii ^_^

Frst of all i luv ur ff
Coz its wrth it
Nd its my vaani's ff
Pasand to ana hi h
Nd most importantly
U hv given so much attention to
Ranveer ...this fiction character
That u hv introduced is so good ...
So there is a fun element u c ..
I jst love his antics
His innocence ...
Nd who d hell in dis wrld cannot lyk rd's son
Nd ha ab to pakka ho gya
All d moms r d same
Hehehe ...
But still i love dem ..
👏
Nd ya .. each nd evry line of ur ff is so well written
Ki i cnt stop myself expressing my views on it
Mera bas chale to ek ek line pe comment du
Hehe ...
^_^ MAHAK


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: LoveRantara

Amazing as usual

Precap was super cute!!
Waiting for Randhir to come back
Update soon



Thanks! :)
He will :D
I will ASAP :D
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ShefaliMalhotra

This was SO heart wrenching!
Right now I am in a state of complete confusion
I don't know whether I should punch you or kiss you
Whether I should regret not reading it earlier or should I be happy not reading it earlier
Since, I could read all the parts in a go
This is just exquisiteness personified!
I am really happy I landed in here!
You have become the most read writer of this forum
Waise it was not the reason I started reading you
It was Arushi di's (PrussianBlue) comment which startled me
She always comments a line or two
But then I saw her giving a long review on you FF
And comparing you with Arpita di (Arpitaa9)
For me, Aru di has always been the best writer in every aspect
And she compared you with Arpita di whose writings are always fun to read
That was when I knew I had to read you at any cost!
After that, I started reading your FF
And the rest toh you know!
I won't compare you with Arpita di because every writer has their own essence
But You are an awesome writer! Indeed!
You made me cry by your writings!
I was sobbing when I realized what Randhir has gone through!
Due to that Alisha, everyone has suffered
And to top of it, when she confessed she was smiling
She did not have a tinge of guilt after playing havoc in everybody's life
Arghh! This gal -___-
The flashback of Randhir and Parth was wonderful
I was laughing as well as sobbing!
The way you described their bond was just a WOW
The dialogues were beautifully penned out! Ah! I so love that chapter!
That was the best among all!
My heart aches to think how a stupid misunderstanding spoiled their friendship
The son-father bond is really adorable ^_^
Awww!! Ranveer is really cute!
Though I still don't understand why you named him Ranveer
I am pretty sure Ranveer is Sanyu's son
I was suspecting that by the little clues I found in your writings
But I was sure the day you said Ranveer's smile resembles her mother's

Your ideas are so unique and amazing!
The date was beautiful!
Randhir held her protectively by her waist *blushes*

I am so looking forward for the next chapter since Randhir is gonna come home
I am waiting for his reaction when he sees the entire dream team in his house
I just want that you don't make Randhir soften towards them
Whatever I say would be less, it is just that I really love u :*
And the length of the updates are satisfying!
If you just got bored with this long comment,
Then blame yourself, not me 🤣

DO update soon
Because I am craving for more

Lots of love,
Shefali ^_^

P.S. Haila! I didn't even realize how come I wrote such a long comment! This is the longest comment in my history of comments! *pats my back mentally*




Oh god. This was real long now! :D
Hah, I loved it! Thankyou for such an amazing review. :D
Whoa. SO many contrasting feelings? xP
But yeah please dont punch me :P

Aww thankyou sooo much! :D I am happy you landed here too <3
Me? Naah, there are many more out there who write 1000 times better than me! :D
That is just her sweetness :) She is a real sweetheart!
She is too. I agree with that. But I am even a fan of Arpita's writing :)
Haha, glad you read this piece! :D
Yeah, my scraps. How can I forget those? :P
Aww. thanks!
But getting compared by one awesome writer is like really good eventhough I know I am nothing compared to her. She is one of a kind! :)
Thanks! :D I'd deny that but. :)

She's the typical bitch types in my story :|
Haha, that is one of my favorite flashbacks too! <3
Yeah, I think that is something people like about my FF - Randhir-Ranveer's bonding!
Randhir normally is protective only :P

Well, thankyou soo much Shivangi!
This comment today made my day. I loved it to the core.
I will post it ASAP :)
I won't make you wait :D

Lots of love,
Vanii ^_^

Your longest comment is for me? Yeah. Obliged mann! :D
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ShefaliMalhotra


Hell no!!
Don't you dare decrease the length!


Haha. I'll try not to! xP
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lovelynanu

awesome it must be wonderful if randhir while coming to see ranveer find sanyu and ranveer sleeping soundly together his heart just aches ryt na 😛

update soon 😭



Haha, let's see! :D
I will ASAP :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
AMAZING AWESOME WONDERFUL...
there is no words to describe this story i love it ...
please now no more misunderstandings ...
i want some sandhir scene next please please please...
and ya also a family seen with sandhir and ranveer ...
please please please...
thank you ...
love the story ...
i hope randhir will see ranveer sleeping on sanyukta's lap and her love towards raveer please please please ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
mane 🤣
Jaldi sab ko reply kar 🤣
AND update fir 🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Stana_Katic

Oh My GOD!!!!

I am so idiot and lazy!!!!!
I was passing through the pages of this forum
when I found this!!
I thought '''Oh ya!! Once I commented on this ff. Lemme check it out"'
And you know what happened!!!
I cried!!!
I just felt numb reading your FF!!!!
I am NOT just applying some butter!!!!!
This is the truth!!!!!
I read this ff in a go!!!!
ANd the Sandhir betray part!!!! I cried over it!!!
And when Ranhir hurt - Canteen scene came I was almost near attack!!!!!!
And when I came to know the TRUTH!!!!
And when I came to know that all are selected!!!!!
RAnveer- Sanyukta Bonding scenes!!!!!
Ranveer is Sandhir's Son!!!!!!
I love you gal for writing this ff!!!!!
I LOVE this ff and love the writer!!!!!!
But I am really sad!!!!
I thought your name is Amanda Jones!!! Because even my name starts with A and my surname starts with J... My name is Angela Jacob!!!!
But I love the name Vani more!!!!!!!!!!!!
I am really very excited about the precap!!!!
Love you even more!!!!
Angela




Oh god. Thankyou for such a lovely comment Angela. I loved every bit of it! :D
The gif images were fun to watch.. xP

Aww. Thankyou soo much man.. Means a lott to me! :D
Aw. That was again cute now! :D

Sorry! :(
I used that name simply. I dont know why.
But my real name is Vani :)
Gosh, you like my real name? You kidding me right? I HATE IT!

Love you too. :*

- Vanii ^_^

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