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@--Kkkhushiii--

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#211

Amazing as usual

Precap was super cute!!

Waiting for Randhir to come back

Update soon

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ShefaliMalhotra

@ShefaliMalhotra

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#212

This was SO heart wrenching!
Right now I am in a state of complete confusion
I don't know whether I should punch you or kiss you
Whether I should regret not reading it earlier or should I be happy not reading it earlier
Since, I could read all the parts in a go
This is just exquisiteness personified!
I am really happy I landed in here!
You have become the most read writer of this forum
Waise it was not the reason I started reading you
It was Arushi di's (PrussianBlue) comment which startled me
She always comments a line or two
But then I saw her giving a long review on you FF
And comparing you with Arpita di (Arpitaa9)
For me, Aru di has always been the best writer in every aspect
And she compared you with Arpita di whose writings are always fun to read
That was when I knew I had to read you at any cost!
After that, I started reading your FF
And the rest toh you know!
I won't compare you with Arpita di because every writer has their own essence
But You are an awesome writer! Indeed!
You made me cry by your writings!
I was sobbing when I realized what Randhir has gone through!
Due to that Alisha, everyone has suffered
And to top of it, when she confessed she was smiling
She did not have a tinge of guilt after playing havoc in everybody's life
Arghh! This gal -___-
The flashback of Randhir and Parth was wonderful
I was laughing as well as sobbing!
The way you described their bond was just a WOW
The dialogues were beautifully penned out! Ah! I so love that chapter!
That was the best among all!
My heart aches to think how a stupid misunderstanding spoiled their friendship
The son-father bond is really adorable ^_^
Awww!! Ranveer is really cute!
Though I still don't understand why you named him Ranveer
I am pretty sure Ranveer is Sanyu's son
I was suspecting that by the little clues I found in your writings
But I was sure the day you said Ranveer's smile resembles her mother's

Your ideas are so unique and amazing!
The date was beautiful!
Randhir held her protectively by her waist *blushes*

I am so looking forward for the next chapter since Randhir is gonna come home
I am waiting for his reaction when he sees the entire dream team in his house
I just want that you don't make Randhir soften towards them
Whatever I say would be less, it is just that I really love u :*
And the length of the updates are satisfying!
If you just got bored with this long comment,
Then blame yourself, not me 🤣

DO update soon
Because I am craving for more

Lots of love,
Shefali ^_^

P.S. Haila! I didn't even realize how come I wrote such a long comment! This is the longest comment in my history of comments! *pats my back mentally*

Edited by ShefaliMalhotra - 11 years ago

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ShefaliMalhotra

@ShefaliMalhotra

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#213

Originally posted by: -Ms.Rocker-

Sorry. i'll decrease the length next time! :)
Lets see! :)
I will ASAP :D

Hell no!!

Don't you dare decrease the length!

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lovelynanu

@lovelynanu

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#214

awesome it must be wonderful if randhir while coming to see ranveer find sanyu and ranveer sleeping soundly together his heart just aches ryt na 😛

update soon 😭

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Angela Jacob

@Stana_Katic

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#215

Oh My GOD!!!!

I am so idiot and lazy!!!!!

I was passing through the pages of this forum

when I found this!!

I thought '''Oh ya!! Once I commented on this ff. Lemme check it out"'

And you know what happened!!!

I cried!!!

I just felt numb reading your FF!!!!

I am NOT just applying some butter!!!!!

This is the truth!!!!!

I read this ff in a go!!!!

ANd the Sandhir betray part!!!! I cried over it!!!

And when Ranhir hurt - Canteen scene came I was almost near attack!!!!!!

And when I came to know the TRUTH!!!!

And when I came to know that all are selected!!!!!

RAnveer- Sanyukta Bonding scenes!!!!!

Ranveer is Sandhir's Son!!!!!!

I love you gal for writing this ff!!!!!

I LOVE this ff and love the writer!!!!!!

But I am really sad!!!!

I thought your name is Amanda Jones!!! Because even my name starts with A and my surname starts with J... My name is Angela Jacob!!!!

But I love the name Vani more!!!!!!!!!!!!

I am really very excited about the precap!!!!

Love you even more!!!!

Angela

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rajasree suresh

@lovemymanan

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#216

Its very good ff and I luv to read it again and again update aeap

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panchan

@panchan

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#217

I jus love thiss yaar!!

How do u manage to write so well!!

You really got awesome skills buddy!

I just cant wait to see Randhir back & the biggest suspense to be revealed!

I'm desperately in need of an update! Update soon!!

Love

Roshni

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panchan

@panchan

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#218

Unressed on pg 1 and above😉🤣

Edited by panchan - 11 years ago

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Ritika_A

@Ritika_A

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#219

Lst part ws awesome !!!!!
Plllzzz update soon !!

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manalee

@manalee

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#220

Originally posted by: priiy

even i hope that kiddo to be their son...but how come sanyu dosnt know about him...when she would have given birth to him.

mystery jaldi reveal ho jayegi ab.i hope in coming part .