SanDhir FF: || Running Away With You|| Part 3 Pg 28

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Sonaparam29

@Sonaparam29

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#71

Loveeely update..ohh gosh i jus cnt stop laughing man!!
Jab ek firangi babu n desi kudi sath mein ho..u cn imagine d fun dat is awaited fr us!!
😆 😆

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Irij55

@Irij55

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Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Amazing loved it update soon

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#73

loved it, well done, dialogues and descriptions, well written, keep it up!

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samy18

@samy18

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Posted: 11 years ago

#74

Wow its so different yet so same story actually its very different loved the way you have described sanyukta and randhir here both are going through some what same phase u write so beautifully that i could imagine each and every scene seriously sanyukta has a standard and only Randhir fits in it love u a lot for the amazing update do continue soon and thanks for the pm

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everywednesday

@everywednesday

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#75

Zoo zoo.

Sorry rey. Exam chilo. And BSNL braodband yesterday to be auspicious enough for a complete crash. -_-

Here I am. :3

Sanyukta ke ki kore dili! Purro jhalli baniye diyechhish. :D

She is a mess and surely a beautiful one. I'm realyl liking how you're building her character! :D

And Randhir. Sounds hot. :3

Oh. And. i wonder how miraculously Sweta is the first one to RES. =,=

I'm sure you told her pehle se. :3 xD xD XD

LOL chori pakdi gayii! :D :D

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Sushmita

@sushie166

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#76

res unres...

mein aa gyi..😃

guess what, my brother blocked IF in dad's laptop...so I took his laptop only 🤣 *smirks*

I akways love the length of your story 😉

Gosh!! Sanyukta wearing lehenga with boots 😲.. you made me remebr June from Knight and Day. she too was wearing the dress with shabby boots before her sis's marriage.. 🤣

Haww Jenny rejected Randhir 😡 so lame!

I liked how she spoke his name wrong, and then Randhir's reaction..

I too do the same when someone takes my name wrong

"Choco chip cookie"😳 why you wrote dat 🥱 *m hungry now*

"Palat" that scene was perfect, I loved randhir's face at dat time...

"tera dhyaan kidhar hai yeh tera hero idhar hai" this was my WA status once...with Randhir's pic as my dp! 🤣🤣

Sanyukta's narration...awesome again

chomu- male hindi version of bimbo 🤣

Claps for ur awesome dialogs.. 👏👏

I want to know Randhir's story, please update soon! 😆😃

P.S- Dekho iss baar dhamki bhi nhi dia, update kar dena! 😭

Love

-Sush 😳

Edited by sushie166 - 11 years ago

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Neha Kashyap

@-ParamHolic-

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#77

Zoo Zoo😃

This was so amazing..

I m just loving this care free sanyu..N guess even RD is liking her..

His sweet smiles makes me think that..

Loving the way story is shaping up..

Thanks for PM

N zoo zoo..plz update the other FF (Incomplete) too

Love

Neha

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arshifan2012

@arshifan2012

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: angel_anisha
Res
Unres 😎
Oh sheets mane.
Thees is awesome!
Zoo zoo.
I love it xD
This FF will take Anu's FF's place jakd hi agar ussne update ni kiya 🤣
I loved it.
*Edited*
Mane xD
Palat is my fav song too xD
I jus Looove it!
Upd soonish :-)