Frozen Desires-An Arshi FF- Chapter 13 Updated - ON HOLD

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Basriya

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Posted: 10 years ago

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pls do pm me your updates dear..

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ranjanatripathi

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Thanks for the pm...

Lovely FF

Your flashes of the past give a better understanding of the present!!!!!!!!!!!!

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aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

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It snowed here today and I decided to come read your story.. just finished the prologue and the setup is very interesting and well written. haha you used Samrat as the person Khushi loves.. I used to like Sanaya from mile jab hum tum..

One line that caught my attention was when Khushi thinks about how the ASR she knows in different from whom the rest of the world see.. eager to read ahead.. thanks for the PM

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Shalini

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: aarwen
It snowed here today and I decided to come read your story.. just finished the prologue and the setup is very interesting and well written. haha you used Samrat as the person Khushi loves.. I used to like Sanaya from mile jab hum tum..
One line that caught my attention was when Khushi thinks about how the ASR she knows in different from whom the rest of the world see.. eager to read ahead.. thanks for the PM

Thats like the loveliest thing I heard dear (sorry dont know your real name?)...honestly i have not watched Miley Jab Hum Tum butI couldnt really think of using NK or any other guy against the 'ASR' 😆. 'Samrat' seemed to better make the cut...but anyway very nice of you to quote the line...from prologue..I had kinda forgotten it 😉

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javeria

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Interesting story. Read all parts in one go

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Sisbamboo1

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Posted: 10 years ago

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I am looking forward to more flashbacks. It's hard for me to react to the present events without a complete background. I don't know which things to give significance to. I wish there was more of Samrat in the present though. It would help in giving a contrast between the past Khushi and the present Khushi. You mentioned how she had changed in this chapter so what caused the change?

I'm liking the story so far! Looking forward to the next update :)

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 10 years ago

#247

Nice part 👏

Love the Jalaibi making talk in between Arnav and Khushi...no way that he will cook for her...😆 but the care in between shows a real connection in between them in the past ...

present is bitter...and hope soon we will see why

BTW, you forgot to PM me...

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aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#248

Read through all the chapters shaliniranjan.. lovely.. the simplicity with which you showed Khushi and Arnav falling in love in the past was beautiful.. I specially enjoyed how Anjali and Arnav's amma consider Khushi his bride-to-be.. and she wore the bangles all along..

The conflict in the present is also exciting.. when he kissed her last chapter it was unexpected and absolutely thrilling.. the way you chose their dialogues using some from the show was very nice too..

And no I did not guess that Shyam would marry Anjali.. interesting twist to the story shaliniranjan..

ooh forgot to mention my name is rhea

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Shalini

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: Sisbamboo1
I am looking forward to more flashbacks. It's hard for me to react to the present events without a complete background. I don't know which things to give significance to. I wish there was more of Samrat in the present though. It would help in giving a contrast between the past Khushi and the present Khushi. You mentioned how she had changed in this chapter so what caused the change?

I'm liking the story so far! Looking forward to the next update :)
Please add me to your pm list.

Hey sure thing. thank you for pointing it out...noted!

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Shalini

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: .ArshiHamesha.
Nice part 👏
Love the Jalaibi making talk in between Arnav and Khushi...no way that he will cook for her...😆 but the care in between shows a real connection in between them in the past ...

present is bitter...and hope soon we will see why

BTW, you forgot to PM me...

hey thanks faiqa..hope I can call you that? 😉

And I did 'PM' you..it was ten days ago though, so probably my Pm is resting in your forgotten pages of the past..hehe!