ARSHI TS - BELONGING TO YOU COMPLETED

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yeshyeshna

@yeshyeshna

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

nice ts

loved the story line

deep inside, khushi is still akid who wishes that everyone cares & loves her like payal

luckily arnav is there for her😊

waiting to read more

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sheemaparveen

@sheemaparveen

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Ow di just amazing loved it a lot continue soon

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hira2050

@hira2050

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Beautiful update:)

Loved it

Desperately waiting for next part

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

@DMGFan-2b-not2b

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

heynice to read something that touches on a part of the story that got glossed over

not just arav, the garima, buaji and payal ended to redeem themselves as well...

waiting to see how to deal with this

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sweetfairy16

@sweetfairy16

Explorer

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Wow loved that can't wait for second part!

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Anu567

@Anu567

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

So beautifully written...take a bow. The concept is something that thoroughly irritated me with IPKKND also, how they never gave the beautiful person Khushi was any credit, and always prioritized Payal. Buaji of course was always the most scathing. They could have explored the aspect more thoroughly, but of course TRP rules probably did not allow them to follow that track. Waiting for the update!

Anupama

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Titaliya1234

@Titaliya1234

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Fabulous shot ankita! Loved it to bits! Poor khushi had to go through so much! Arnav s always there for her! The way u described khushi's feelings was so hearttouching!
I loved the quote at the end!
Thnx fr pm!

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

awesome update

loved it

thanks for the pm

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#39

It's beautiful Anku... So emotional... Nd touchy... Love you for noticing this detail of Khushi... Which our CVs conveniently overlooked... Haven't found necessary to bring in pictures... Neither the Guptas ever needed to realize their wrongdoings... Nd they said 'the story ran its course'... Huh... If only... It's so sweet of u Anku to close these loose ends... Nd fulfilling many of ours wishes knowing-unknowingly... Brilliantly written... Finally her facade is broken... Yeh toh hona hi tha... Nd I'm so glad she has her Arnavji's arms around her to be cared, loved nd cherished... Woh kehte hain naa, if fate takes with one hand, returns back with two... She has got the best partner anyone can ever wish for... He'll take away all her pains... Hum e bharossa hain... Waiting to see more... Nd I really hope, Guptas too will realize their fault some day, not by someone, but of their owns...

Risat Apu, u said it all... WOW...