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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#141

awesome update

loved it

thanks for the pm

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Iru_Arshi

@Iru_Arshi

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#142

Is that all? I didn't want this chapter to end.. 😔 You just keep getting better and better meri jaan ❤️

I loved certain lines you have included to describe Arshi. "He hid his true feelings beneath the mask of anger and she with her fake smiles" so perfectly describes them.. And the term "double edged sword" symbolically explains the depth of love. Love is such that every emotion can be felt so intensely, when you're in love.

You have beautifully presented this through Arnav. Lets say even if Arnav didn't go through the same as Khushi, still he would have felt every bit of her pain.

Loved how you have penned down both ASR and Khushi's anger in this moment. What I loved most about it is how you have justified their anger.

Arnav explained in the simplest and the most effective way he could to make Khushi understand that they being orphans could never affect the lives of their children. Hopefully these words of assurance will make Khushi realize the importance of what he said.

Jaan reading this made me feel that Arshi could have been the best parents EVER! Looking at what they have been through it seems they would have driven away even the shadow of the darkness of their past away from their children.

Super awesome update! 👍🏼

Now I feel sad because its going to end soon. 😭 So I don't mind if you take time to update. Hehe.. 😉

I would say this is your best TS so far. 👏

Its just too beautiful..!!

❤️

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Sana Sultana

@sana11

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#143

khushi was not happy arnav took her there..

but he had a way to show her what she needs to see..

and the love they share..

excellent update 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

next update awaited😃

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..Anita..

@..Anita..

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#144

Their feelings are portrayed so beautifully

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Crazy4IPK

@Crazy4IPK

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#145

Sorry for replying late. AD is too hectic because of ramadan.

Very beautiful writing.

You always perceive the deepest emotion of them.

Arnav and khushi's love is not common, it's so divine.

in walk of life how Arnav understands khushi, supports her, be there as a mentor is amazing. Khushi's agony being an orphan is very normal. she is scared for her children's future. I can understand her turbulence. But as long as her beloved Arnavji is with her they can make their life a heaven.Their kds will not be just happy, but will be proud of them.

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Titaliya1234

@Titaliya1234

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#146

Emotional yet amazing chapter!!!
Arnav s there to hold khushi and support her in every walks of life!!!
She s really lucky to have him..
He is gem of a person...
Hope she leaves all her worries and fears behind her and lead a happy life with him...
Thnx fr pm darling!!!

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Hetal

@Divyahet

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#147

Simply awesome work Ankita.👏👏
thanks for the pm.

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pia-loves-sarun

@pia-loves-sarun

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#148

Heyaa ankita..:D

First of all m so very sorry..I know I haven't cmntd since ages..

Believe me darling ,asli duniya is getting hectic day by day :(

Now coming on Ts ...m spellbound..!!

His love for her is eternal..

I just whole concept n ur thought behind this..

M just amazed..hat's off sweety...

I just loved it...

His love,care,support is just so amazing...

They are truly made for each other..<3

Once again,great work!!!

M awed..

Thanks a tonnn fr PMS..n so very sorry for delay.!

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Divya Bharathi S

@divyaarnavsr

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#149

Just came across and read all parts !! Arnav aur khushi- redefinition of love !!

sent you buddy request, please pm me your work if possible and thanks in advans

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Fau Zi

@lazylad8-FauZi

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#150

Loved it, what a wonderful concept.

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