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Kavyasarun

@Kavya_sarun

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#151

Superb update.
Loved it.
As tis is ur first attempt in writing in IF... Wish u al the best fr ur future update. Waiting fr nxt update eagerly.

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nivii

@nivii

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Posted: 11 years ago

#152

I absolutely love the story! Pls continue

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@EchTee

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#153

This is getting interesting
Continue soon

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#154

Another brilliant chapter Jigs, my heart was racing with excitement with every time she felt his gaze at her , or when you described her emotional state and her reactions to him, the effect of his voice, his look like it was me out there and not Khushi.

I love the effect he is having on her and me. I could feel that thrill and could identify with her feelings.

That moment when you know there is something you feel which could possibly be the starting of something. The anticipation and that flirtatious nature, the need to impress, saying things spontaneously and analysing every word that comes out from the other person's mouth, his every gesture and his approval of you suddenly feels so important.

Second guessing the real meaning behind what could be an innocent comment or remark. I liked her awkwardness, it felt so real and natural ...I liked the fact that it seems mutual and I love when he surprised both La and her and took her bag from La. I loved her disappointment when he does not show her around personally. I loved her anxiety and her realising that this is not normal for her and admitting to herself that she is attracted to him.

What a beautiful stage and you have captured that to perfection.

Loved the description of his office and I could vividly imagine it. The glorious setting and decor of his office.

Loved La and I look forward to her and Khushi forming a strong bond.

And needless to say I am so looking forward to them working together in close ( very very close) proximity.

And wow...she knows his Di? How brilliant can this get!?

P.S - does he have a penthouse apartment ?

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Parvathi Devi

@honey-sweety

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#155

That was excellent update...

Seems Arnav likes Kushi, thats the reason he is mixing personal and professional questions and wanted to know more about kushi...😉

You should about more frequently as this is getting too interesting 😆

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saschades

@saschades

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#156

OMG this is interesting!!! Please keep me updated!!

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BSRaizada

@BSRaizada

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#157

Juhi's recommendation can never go wrong!
Wonderful n very interesting prologue n ch1!
Only question is it really Anjali manohar JHA ???
If yes , u can blame it on IPK , so used to poojali snakewa JHA !!

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Moumita Mukherjee

@fangurrl

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#158

saw your tweet on Juhi's TL!
and i must say her recommendation can never go wrong!!
just read the prologue and chapter1
and I absolutely loved it!
it's very interesting!
would love to read more About A&K :)
already waiting for the next update ;)

p.s. have sent you a buddy request! please add me :) x

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pinkly

@pinkly

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#159

Very nicely written. Loved the conversation between Arnav and Khushi and the interview went very well. I was smiling when Khushi asked how would she fit in the equation and Arnav's reply was perfect :-)

Lavanya seems like a nice girl. Could not understand why Arnav took Khushi's bag from Lavanya?

Anjali and Khushi know each other! That's nice. Waiting for Chapter 2 already... Continue soon.

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Arnieanu

@Arnieanu

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#160

Nice update, its not like your first ff . Characters of this story are well explained. I think Arnav and khushi fall for each other first time itself. As usual anjali ruin their moment. Waiting to how the ladies know each other?

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