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damon fan

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Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#121

NYC START! Would love to read further!

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tinkleby

@tinkleby

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#122

Jigs, you are really outdoing yourself every time 🤗

It was simply fantastic! Everything was so real and the importance you give to detail is truly amazing.

The scenes were so well written that I could see them play out in front of me. And of course you had to end with a cliffhanger, of sorts.😉

I can't wait to see how this plays out.

P.S. I am so sorry for the late unres my net stopped working and I typed this from my phone

I probably shouldn't have reserved in this page .

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bea_rom

@bea_rom

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#123

LOVE IT

this is such a great start

I would love to live in NY

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Heavens_Flower

@Heavens_Flower

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#124

Beautiful update and beautiful words are chosen to tell the story... 👏

Something feels fishy with the image Lavanya is portraying to Khushi about ASR and what Khushi had experienced so far about Mr. Raizada / Sir... I will wait for you too unfold this mystery in time but I cannot help wish that I already know it...

I don't know if Khushi is having a heart attack or not but the tension was so very well described that I may probably get a heart attack... and drop dead... and it will be all ___________ fault

BTW... are we also going to have cliffhangers at the end of each chapter... 😲

Edited by Heavens_Flower - 11 years ago

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esamoe

@esamoe

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#125

UnRes

Arnav is extremely nice to Khushi and judging from what his other employees think about him,it seems out of his character. Is it sparks at first sight or just professionalism?either way I like your Arnav very much and I'm glad that you did not portray him as the unnecessarily arrogant boss!

Judging from Khushi's behavior she's definitely affected..I enjoyed the subtle flirting during the interview.. And the office loved how you described it.

How does Anjali and Khushi know each other,so curious why did you stop there lol..😭

I love your writing style and I know its just going to get better with time.👏

Edited by esamoe - 11 years ago

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momoahmd

@momoahmd

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#126

wowww...

thats such an intriguing start, dear...

m in so much love with ur khushi...

plxxx continue sooon...

kindly pm me ur future updates...

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please6

@please6

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#127

I love the concept of the story it seems pretty interesting and the teaser sure is a teaser ;) anyways love it and can't wait for the update so plzzz update soon

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#128

Ah.

Its New York.

Its a hot, sexy and not wanting to tear your head off (at first glance) Arnav.

Its an independent Khushi (with a not so pleasant past experience?)

And she has a crush on her boss.

Me likey.

And me want interview. *Nods vehemently*

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#129

Oooh!

They flirted and how! Very subtle but very there and very nice! ;) :D

And Arnav is an arrogant ass according to Lavanya but he seemed rather different with Khushi...? In any case, I am really liking the story - quite fresh and hip :)

And Khushi and Anjali know each other! One can only hope that its in a good way! :D

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IPK007

@IPK007

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#130

I was waiting for it:)

Wonderful update. Really enjoyed reading it. If I loved your Khushi in the prologue, I really liked your Arnav in this one. Besides making him so smexy, I love that you aren't showing him unnecessarily arrogant. Loved their interaction in the office and the way they're so aware of each other from the get go :D

Loving the whole NY background.

And wow, Anjali and Khushi know each other..this opens the doors to a multitude of interesting possibilities!

Love your writing style:)

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