'Last days.' SanDhir SS(Complete.)Part 7-12 Pg 25 - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: SamC

This was awesome!!!!
Exactly patients need care not sympathy!!!

Update asap dear!!

Love,
Sam!

thanka !
yeah ! I know ! :)) !

will try ! thank you again !
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: mahdin

u defined Sanyukta'$ memories all very well n it really made me cry...!!!


aw ..thanks <3 ^.^ ! ...oyye teri 😕! sorrie -.- !
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: SWA1992

hmmm well she z in 1st stage: its tretable-- bone marrow transplantation-- nd she doesnt has secondaries yet!!!! so chill gyuzzz...


main kuch nai bolne waali -.- !
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: manalee

Hi there,

This part was very emotional 😭😭😭. i hope she gets treated and her cancer is gone.
the main highlight of today's update was the way sanyu was remembering all her college memories...you summed up everything.
It was painfully beautiful.
Keep updating and thanks for the PM.

helo ^.^ !
pura SS hee h vessa :P ! 😆
...abb I cant comment on tat -.- ...
yeah memories 😳..tried to least :P !
awww ..thanks !!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: 123456me

wow...it was tooo good..

i m lovng ds childish Sanyu..
ohhh why is he ignoring her...
really great update...
keep writing n update soon
love,Shreyasi😳

thank you ! :))
...:D ! I too ^.^ !
...arrre -.-
thanks :D !

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Posted: 11 years ago
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thank you !

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Posted: 11 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: -pearlblu-

hi archita...first of all, i apologise profusely for nt replying to ur previous pms or commenting ong on ur posts...due to some reasons, had been completely away from sh n if for these couple of months...but, m back babes...n this ss rocks...the whole equation of cancer n their impendinng confession n love...really fits...n poor randhir, everyone has left him alone whoever he felt close to...the same things gonna happen again...hes just trying to save himself from further hurt...hope they come to know of each others' love for em...till then, plz continue...n keep sending me pms...😃


hey !! ahh ! it's okay ! doesn't mattr ! you are commenting now na ! ohh okay ! ... well its fab you're back ^_^ ! ...
aww ..thanks ! thak you !! .. yeah ...Rd <3 ! ..hmn ...hope they do :P ! :D ! ohh I will en thanks for liking it ! :)) !
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey guys ! thank you for your loong long comments ! they mean a lot ! hope you're liking it ! here is the 3rd part ! :))


Recap : Rd is ignoring sanyu ..


Part 3


The day ended ...with some sympathy eyes ...some fake carings ..some wide eyes ...en a lot more !!

I was dragging myself to my room ...caus I was to tired to walk normally !! ..as I entered my room ..I kept my books ..en turned to take my night clothes out ...as I was moving out of the room ...I saw a Tiffin kept at my bed ... it read farzi' making me instantly realize who has sent it ..I hadn't had the lunch ...en he knew it .. I opened it ...en saw aloo ke parathe ..!!

I smiled en sat down eating ...as I closed the Tiffin I took a long breath .. "..least you still care .." I said to myself ..having a sad smile on my face ..!!

Days went like this ...he never used to talk to me ..but always a Tiffin would be kept at my bed without a miss ..!!

We used to latch our eyes ..en ask million things ..which were only left unanswered ...

I tried talking to him ..but it wasn't of any use ...soon I was much irritated en angry at his this way ..!! I stopped eating the Tiffin ..but yeah I never skipped my meals ...

I started changing routes when he used to come my way ..I started ignoring the sentences ..which had his name in them ...I started ignoring his gazes ...which now craved to meet with mine ..but I was stubborn as him ! If he was going to be silent towards to me ...I had no other options !!

Days changed weeks ..succeeded by months ...en no one of us two talked ..

We looked at each other at times when the other was looking away ..

One day ..as I entered the college ..every gaze turned to me ..! I felt weird ..since it had been two months ...en now everyone had started behaving normal ? then why all of a sudden this ?

I walked up to lab ...since it was the first period ..I looked up from the ground ..en my eyes widened at what I saw ...

My favorite's had like embraced the lab ..red !! the lab was filled with it ..!! from the carpet to the balloons ..the table cloth ..that jasmine's aroma which I loved since foreva had made it heaven to smell ... those machines ...which I wanted to experiment since I had learnt about them ... en there stood another of favorite's ..another of my belongings ...something which was closest to my heart ...!! Randhir Singh Shekhawat !! in a white color shirt ..matching the top that I wore ...like always !!

(Rd's POV)

I stood there ...admiring the most beautiful thing eva created ..her !! her eyes ...they spoke what not !! ..she entered with a tiredness filled in them ..leading them to widen in shock ..en surprise I hope ..later they turned to an innocent one ..as they met mine's ..!!

I walked up to her ...as close as possible ...she took a deep breath out ..as I held her palms ..still looking into her orbs ! I pulled her more to me ...en left her hand ..trailing mine to her waist ..!! I kissed her forehead ..as we both closed eyes ...en a tear dropped on my shirt ...I opened my eyes ...as I found my eyes too ..had been watered ..

I cupped her face with other hand of mine ..!! while she kept taking long breaths ...

I touched my forehead to hers... as we closed eyes yet again ... en I snapped this moment ...in my brain ... my heart ..my soul ..

I moved the down part of my face forward ...as my lips brushed to hers ...sending shivers down my spine ...I tightened my eyes ...as tears rolled from them ...I deepened the kiss pulling her more by her waist ...her hands reached my hairs ...en pulled me into her ...we kept kissing ...en left each other after a time ...gasping for air to breath ...

I opened my eyes ..as my lashes brushed hers ...she blinked ...as I said those words ...every girl wants to listen ...she left me ...with eyes widened ...

I caught her palm ...en kneed down ...taking the ring out ...I chirped those words again ...tears again came running down her cheeks ..as she shacked her head in disbelief ..en hid her mouth behind her hands ...she sobbed louder ...I stood up cupping her face ..as she shrugged my hands en ran away from there ...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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unres
omg its awesome dear
it is so imotional one i love it so much
next part soon
Edited by cuteparsh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ohhh sooo romantic moment!!! that too in rds view...

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