Arhi TS : Picture Perfect [ Part 2 : Pg18 : 21/7 ]

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.ButterCup.

@.ButterCup.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#111

Tujhe pyar krte krte meri umer beet jaye...

Tera naam har zubaan pe mere sath sath aye..

Yep, it was picture perfect second part...❤️

Thoroughly enjoyed...Loved every bit of it..

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#112

I love these one or two shots you write, Mints.

Do write more of these.

I'm reading all your updates early in the morning, and you really did make my day brighter.

Loved the way Arnav proposed.

Such a unique way to do so.

But then they both are photographers, so this should have been expected.

Loved the picture perfect moments.

Loved the story, Mints.

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rvas

@rvas

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#113

brilliant part 2 to the os...the emotions both characters were felling were so well written loved it

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#114

That was so so beautiful...😳 Loved it.. The process of being in love and away from each other.. They missing each other & Arnavs surprise for her.. Everything was way too beautiful...

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momoahmd

@momoahmd

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#115

yayyy...

you continued the OS...😃

its just beautiful writing dear...

thnxxx a lot 4 pm...

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Meerah14

@Meerah14

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#116

that was too awesome and romantic...

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1987Trisha

@1987Trisha

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#117

Loved it dear...
Thanks for the part 2

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#118

wow... its lovely Mints... brilliantly written... to get a picture perfect life everyone has to go some ups & downs... and thet too have to go through that... but finally only the best came out of this separation, it has made everything more worth... loved it...thanks for the PM... and by the way, TS ki epilogue possible hain kya???? or making it a three shot... i am greedy u know...

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kondhili

@kondhili

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#119

Ahh Mints what a perfect ending to such a sweet story.

Loved it!

Thanks for taking time out of busy schedule and writing this story for us.

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#120

Mintu just about how many times have you visited the Arizona desert or the Grand Canyon or any of the places you mentioned here? You write with such flair and confidence yaar 😲. To illustrate "Its fluid grace was a stark contrast to the crude grandeur of the land." 👍🏼

I have never been in love so I dont know but I would like to believe that it is what Arnav and Khushi experience in this OS- the 'tadap' to be with each other, the 'bechaini' which comes with missing the other, the 'ahsaas' that being together is more important than anything and everything else in life...

And I loved the proposal and the acceptance ❤️ 😳 So true to their career and personalities 😊

Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 11 years ago