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pinal_TaaRey

@pinal_TaaRey

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Posted: 11 years ago

#151

Awesome update
Loved taani's answer and their little romance in kitchen
Update soon

Edited by pinal_TaaRey - 11 years ago

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anaghchavan

@anaghchavan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#152

superb update.

dont get disturb, no one can write as u write, then can
only copy u, so make ur self calm and then update.

we love your all stories, like the way u write superbly,
u write very well, dont get disturb.

update soon.

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pran28671

@pran28671

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Posted: 11 years ago

#153

superb update

loved it 👏

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tamanna-azaan

@tamanna-azaan

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#154

superb update..
rey is totally changed..
i want to see more naughty side of rey..

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vishali

@Vishu45

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Posted: 11 years ago

#155

awsm update
Love it the way Rey try to erase pain of taani
loved it
Update soon

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Natasha

@...Natasha...

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#156

I'm so happy for Taani
Finally little by little she is getting the happiness she craved for
Whatever she said to Rey was true. He was hurt but Taani was right ;)
Rey finally acknowledging Taani and treating her as his wife was superb
It was a emotional moment...
Aww Taani eagerly waiting for her kids is so cute
I love the way Rey reassured her they are fine and will be back soon
His affection to Taani is lovely ;)
Awesome update, I love it

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ONLYTAAREY

@ONLYTAAREY

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Posted: 11 years ago

#157

Awesome update...taarey finally coming close ..

Edited by ONLYTAAREY - 11 years ago

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skfirdous

@skfirdous

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#158

wow awesome update
loved it
TR pov is nice
kitchen part awesome
update soon

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Gunjan

@shona25

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#159

first of all congrats for 2nd thread😃

another amazing work of your...u r a wonderful writer👏👏👏

i hv read some of ur stories and all of them r amazing...👏👏

this stry is emotional & u hv penned it down so beautifully👍🏼

u described each n every emotion so beautifully that i got lost in the story...😊

the way u described taani's pain, her frigth whenever rey comes near to her and rey's emotions, his guilt...everything is superb👍🏼

rey meeting his kids for the first tym was superb...he was happy meeting his kids😊

the flashback where rey throw taani out of his house was so emotional😭😭...poor taani she has to suffer so much😭

rey convinced taani to come to his house...& the kids r so much excited😃

loved rey's care for his kids and he loved them so much😃

the gang entry was great

their kitchen scene was awesome😳

taani is scared of him because of her past memories😔 but rey will surely remove that memories and will make her forgive him...

waiting to read future updates...

update soon and pm me😊

P.S: someone copied ur stry😡...report about that

and dont get upset...u r a wonderful writer & ur readers love u🤗😊

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hangok

@hangok

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#160

another great part,

would i sound bad when i would say that i liked it how taani said that they manage alone for 3 years...

sorry to say it but its good to see even rey hurt, he had hurt her alot...

great work and thanks for pm

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