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Pastellitesoulx

@xMIC.Dropx

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#621

wow khushi and payal talked with each other and khushi shared her secret to payal 😲
hope akash falls in love with payal.
shyaam's proposal to anjali is awesome <3
that was amazing update :)
waiting for next one.

Edited by -Angel.Candy- - 10 years ago

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shree10

@shree10

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#622

Oh.. So it is Payal who showed mirror to Khushi.. But will Khushi tell Akash atleast now?? I think she owes that to Akash big time! It's gonna get difficult if delayed more.
I wish you update fast enough.. with your promise of Arnav in next update.. and yes do keep the Khushi in.. too..

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1chilly

@1chilly

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Posted: 10 years ago

#623

I really liked and appreciated the way Khushi came clear about all her misdeeds with Payal.

Loved their honest talk.

Hope Khushi speaks to Aakash too the same way upon his return.

Shyam and Anjali are ready for the next step in their relationship.

Are you preparing us for a new twist in the story?

Why is Shyam's two day trip a problrm?

I have a feeling something wil happen.

Will be waiting for the next update.

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#624

amazing story just loved it

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arnaushi

@arnaushi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#625

nice update...really liked how khushi put forth her emotions that too in front of payal her one time foe..

liked anjali n shaym part too

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KtotheM

@KtotheM

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#626

Awesome update
Just caught up with the story, read the last four chapters
Liked khushi's and payal convo, they both know whom they love but still confused
It's getting really interesting
Pls do continue soon
Thanx for the pm

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loves_aishu

@loves_aishu

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#627

Wow this was such a fabulous story,

so deep and touching!!

Just simply Fantastic!!!

Loved the in-house Tom and Jerry,

the Sweets & Flowers couple

and everyone one else!!

All of your characters have so much depth,

so many feelings, emotions,

it's just fabulous!!!

Also Loved your Dialogues,

most of all how Shyam repeats Sashi's dialogue on getting an appointment,

or any of the verbal sparings between the characters,

like Shyam, Khushi with Shashi,

the party scene,

or Arnav- Khushi lift deal scene!!!

I really have become a huge fan of your writing!!

Hope to see you soon!!

Take Care!!

😊

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canapoem

@canapoem

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#628

Archi, another wonderful chapter.

Even I have experienced this in life, sometimes we can share our deepest secrets with strangers we hardly know instead of even family. I so agree with Khushi for sharing her heart with Payal and also clearing the air.

So looks like Akash might not be disappointed in love afterall. Payal is heads over heels in love with him.

I agree with Payal, its high time Khushi sorts out her feelings soon and come clear with everyone.

Shyam and Anjali do make a cute couple.

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Jyothi Rockzy

@jyothirockz

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#629

Hey Archi..

That was a great update...especially Payal and Khushi conversation... That had to happen and Thank God...Payal is more mature and less insecure... But if Payal knew so would Akash too.. how will he take the news...? I only hope Khushi wont do something more stupid and continue her relationship with Akash in pretense of not breaking his heart... because he is meant to have his dream with Khishi broken...as said by Payal ...Akash will find out that Khushi never lovved him...and infact had feelings for Arnav...the damage would be much worse then...