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Natalia

@Natalia

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Posted: 11 years ago

#161

The new and improved version Khushi 2.0. Great way of introducing Khushi's hidden self to Arnav! I love the way the story is progressing.

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1chilly

@1chilly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#162

The story is getting better and better.

Loved the Anjali Shyam conversation.

Shyam atlast has someone who is there for him.

She is with him thriugh good and bad.

Really liked the way Arnav teeats Khushi.

He is gentle and kind.

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canapoem

@canapoem

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+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#163

I am loving this story more and more. You are writing it in such a matured manner, not rushing into things and maintaining the flow, Archi,your writing is just superb.

Firstly so happy that Garima's surgery went on well. I really want her to recover. I dont want Khushi and Shyam to become orphans. Particularly Khushi, I want her to start a new relationship with her mother.

Shyam and Anjali's story is also progressing so beautifully. He saying that she is the first person he thought of sharing his happiness meant how much she means to him.

Not only Arnav, I love this Khushi 2.0 too. She is more sensible, listens to others with an open mind and her heart, body and soul is more relaxed now. Loved the scene where Arnav bandaged his hand assuring Khushi that he is fine and their conversation and gestures after that. Looks like they are coming closer to each other day by day.

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@flowers4u

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#164

awesome update ...glad to see kushi opening up...continue soon

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Sutapa Sarbabhom

@sutapasarbabhom

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Posted: 11 years ago

#165

Butiful updt arnav n khushi equation is geting beter

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mayabhi

@mayabhi

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#166

Awesome! Im so glad khushi opened up to him. It showed him a. It of the real khushi. N it will probably help her start to get over it too.

Anjali was nice too. She is being the perfect companion to shyam. Wanting to share not just his joy but his sorrows too

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napk

@napk

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Posted: 11 years ago

#167

Anjali really concerned for Shyam... I don't know when she started caring so much for Shyam but she sure feels hurt that he didn't tell about his mother... well shyam is someone who keeps things to himself... so I guess it will take time for him to open up himself instead of her asking him... but this was much needed for him to let it out... hes been suffering alone since a long time in his own way and also with all the responsibilities... this change is needed and I'm glad Anajli is there to listen...

Khushi 2.0 is quite a change... no arguing and finally respecting Arnav... and again without doing anything intentionally Arnav made her reveal her inner most fears and he is so patient and surprised... but he always knows how to give good advice which helps her

Aww he's attracted to her and now we have rabba ve... and damn the phone

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Sisbamboo1

@Sisbamboo1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#168

This is a wonderful story! I particularly like the balance you've crested between each character. You give the right amount of attention, nothing miscellaneous. Even when there is no Arhi, it does not detract from the plot but enhances it. The gradual build up between Khushi and Garima's relationship is done very well.

Please PM 😊

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pmpm1

@pmpm1

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#169

Finished reading until chapter 21... it was hard to stop once I got started with it. Loving the change that is coming onto Khushi from knowing the truth. How will she break up with Akash eventually though? And will Arnav feel guilty about dating his brother's ex?

I don't know if you send pms, but if you do I would love to get one when you update next!