'The Forgotten' - Swaron SS part-8 page 35 - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
#61
it was painful to read this part
u are a great writer
and it didn't sounded like ekta kapoor serial so thanks
thanks for the pm

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Posted: 11 years ago
#62
oh no---
plzzz kuch karo
get them back together
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63
Varsha dear ...
really liked your writing more than now days D3 ..keep going girl .


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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
Nice update.
Too emotional. Luvd it.
Plz update d nxt part soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
It was nice piece of work
I read all update at once
nd I really loved them
u wrote this work magnificently
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
I swear I've become one hell of a fan of ur writings...just loved loved loved it...I always wait for ur writings be it OS, SS or FF...u simply nail it...and trust me I mean it...I mean the kind magic & essence u bring in all ur works is just outstanding...& we end up asking for more...ok now coming back to this SS...well as usual I've no words to describe how I felt reading this...just one word...Epic...so please please continue asap...& yes don't forget to PM me...

P.S. sorry for late comment...
Cheers...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
sorry for the late comment but i was a bit busy with my college
this update was just superb...
the complete truth behind the present situation and how ruthlessly MRP tried to take swayam away from sharon's life...
sharon's pain and agony was penned really well
hope everything gets back to normal with swayam gainig back his memory...
cant wait to read more...plss plss update soon
thanks for the pm😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
amazing FF
swayam doesnt remember anything about the past n its all bcoz of sharon's mom
luved the way u described Sharon's pain d inner turmoil through which she is passing
Waiting 2 see tat how will Swaron meet in future n when will Swayam remember Sharon
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
Hey its been long since u updated...please please update the next chap asap pretty please...can't wait to read more...update soon n plz PM me wen u update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70
Hii guysss how are you all??😊😊 Sorry for the late update i had to travel beacuse of my work i kind of wrote a chapter in hadbadi it is not so good and chapter is painful. And ya next chapter will be up soon and Swaron will be meeting soon and aap logon ko acha romance bhi milega😊
And thank u sooo much for ur love guys..sorry mein reply nahi kar pathi hu person by person but i read all ur comments and it motivates to write more and more 😊😊😊



PART 4


Sharon wiped her tears and started her car. She parked the car and went back to the locked room. She switched on the lights. She went and opened the cupboard and looked at it ... Sharon's Corner... in which she has placed their photos everywhere along with his photo's. She opened the adjacent cupboard took a shirt and wore it and went and sat on the cushions which were near the window. She sipped her chai hugging herself fighting the tears which didn't take the name of stopping. She kept staring outside thinking of her life how it has changed.

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Flashback

One storm has changed lives of many.Even gang couldn't concentrate on their academy.Especially Rey he felt as if he lost all his confidence. He missed his brother a lot. Sharon didn't come out of her house for couple of days. She didn't speak a word to her mom. She has locked herself in her room crying all the day.

Sharon's mom was really concerned for Sharon. One fine day Sharon came out of the room acting normal. She spoke to her mom about the academy. And left for academy. After her work she went to D3 academy. She saw how it gang is not concentrating on the upcoming competition.

Sharon: What the hell is going on??

Sharon took gang by surprise with her anger.

Simmi: Sharon...kaha thi tum...u didn't lift my calls or anything..how are u?

Sharon: Yeh sab kya hai...competition ke liye ek mahina bhi time nahi hai..and u all guys are so casual...

Vicky: Sharon out of all tum yeh keh rahi ho... how the hell..

Sharon: ha mein hi... she said wiping her tears... guys i...i know he is not here with us..aur pata nahi ayega bhi nahi...but yeh academy...it is our dream...his dream...and yeh competition bahut important hai ...it will be our first stepping stone... Swayam...was our pillar of strength...uske jaane se...aise rehnse...we are insulting his friendship... lets move ahead...with..with his spirit.. he..

Rey went and hugged her tightly...

Sharon cried holding Rey... Rey wiped his tears...

Rey: Ya we will do it...hai na..guys...we will work ...what say..

Everyone came and hugged them..wiping their own tears.

Sharon started living a mechanical life only with dance academy's and friends around.

Sharon's mother has tried to clear things out so many times but Sharon didn't give her a chance. She didn't let her talk about swayam or anything else.

Sharon has reached her home little late after her work and catching up with D3 academy. She went straight to her room as and changed and tried was about to sleep she heard someone entering he room.

She turned on the light to find her father smiling at her.

Sharon: Dad... she went and hugged her dad.. aap kab aaye bataya hi nahi

Sharon's dad(Gautam Rai Prakash): Hmm bahut pehle shyam ko...was waiting for u from that time

Sharon: Really..aap call karlete..i would have come...

GRP: tumhari mom ne call ki...but u seemed busy...

Sharon: Oh ..

GRP: beta u had dinner??

Sharon: Nahi woh mein...

GRP: this is not done Sharon...chalo...

They sat on the dining table where Sharon's Mom was serving them. Sharon's dad could sense the disturbance between them both. He decided to ignore the as he felt it was some small fight they had. Sharon spoke with her dad for few minutes and went back to sleep.

This continued to be the routine for some days.

GRP: i see my daughter is working real hard...for her academy...

Sharon: dad...aayiye andar...

GRP: nahi tum aajao bahar..lets walk for sometime...come...

Sharon: ya...

After walking in silence for long and taking about lots of things ...

Sharon: papa how is the business now...

GRP:okay thats surprising now...tumhe business mein kab se interest aane laga... though im really happy im just surprised ...

Sharon: no dad...there is nothing like that...woh mom ne bataya ki...we are not in god condition...loss period chalraha hai...and debt...

GRP: Mom ne bataya...ya i agree we are not doing that great but debt and all ...beta zaroor kuch mis communication hai..aisa kuch nahi hai...we are doing ok...

Sharon: woh 60m crore ka debt aur ghar ka...

GRP: tumhari Mom ne batayi yeh sab...let me call her...tume uski muh se sun lo...

Sharon just closed her eyes in frustration . She snatched away phone from his father.

Sharon: koi zarrorat nahi hai dad...i understood it all

He father could see the sudden change in her expressions and tone.

GRP: Sharon...beta are u ok..kya hua...

Sharon: kuch nahi dad

She told fighting the tears which were brimming in her eyes...

GRP: no beta kuch tho baat hai...please kya hua...and maine dekhe u are not even talking propely to avantika...kya hua...

Sharon hugged her dad narrating all the incidents... she couldn't hold herself back but cry in his arms. Her father hugged her tightly trying to calm down his daughter..

Sharon: Im sorry dad..i know aapne mom ne mere liye bahut kuch ki hai...but..im sorry i cant forgive her,..she took away the only happiness in my life...she...i m suffocating each and every day...i just cant... i cant hate her i love her..but i cant forgive her...

Sharon's dad looked at Sharon's mom who looked away. He took her to her room and made her rest and stormed in to his room confronting his wife .

GRP: tumne literally u wanted to kill that guy...

MRP: Gautam aap kuch nahi jaanthe...u should have seen Sharon..har baat pe Swayam Swayam... and he was just gonna spoil her life i didn't have choice...

GRP: Spoil her life as in was he a bad guy..

MRP: aise nahi..na koi class na koi tatse... i brought up my daughter like a princess.. i have given her everything..may be more...she was a diva..us ladke ke saath..sadak pe chai peena...cycle pe jaana...common...i had to separate them...sharon might see me as a villan now but im sure time ka chalte hue she will forget him she will move on...and..

GRP: Avantika.. i don't know why mujhe nahi lagta it is that easy... Sharon is tarah kabhi nahi thi...even when she got astma... she is so lost how can u not see that...i think u have made a very big mistake... she really loved that guy

MRP: Gautam please aap bhi... all this will look important for her..usne kabhi paiso ki kami mehsoos hi nahi ki... She has got what ever she wants... He would have never made her happy... na koi...

Sharon: sab kuch diya usne mujhe...sab kuch...

MRP: Sharon...

Sharon: aap sahi they mom i don't if he would give the lifestyle of ur dreams for ur daughter...but u know what he is the only one guys ur daughter has ever dreamed of ...Mom... aap ko pata hai he made believe in love me made my life beautiful...he just gave me his love...wgich i craved for all my life... that love and support which i wanted from you guys...

MRP: Ok Sharon im sorry dekho beta jo hua...

Sharon: Please...aap kuch mat kahi...pata ha ii feel disturbed suffocated...thinkinh that bas yeh paise...class style ke liye my Swayam is not with me.. it just eats me...you know what Mom...mujhe nahi chahiye yeh sab...mujhe kuch nhi chahiye...

GRP: Beta kya bol rahi ho...

Sharon: sahi bol rahi hu...dad. ... i don't want to live here being Sharon Rai Prakash any more,...being the Rai Prakash has took my happiness away from me...so i better be Sharon...saying that she just took her wallet as walking away..

MRP: Sharon don't be silly... it is not easy to live beta... and dotn behave chidish andar jaao...

GRP: ha beta we will talk in the morning...

Sharon: bye mom..bye dad..

Sharon's mother felt that Sharon would come back the very next day. She didn't know that Sharon was pretty serious about her decision.

She went to Kriya's house and stayed with her.

Next day her dad came to meet her in kriya's house.

GRP: beta yeh kya bachpana hai...pleaseghar aajao...

Sharon: nahi dad... mein nahi aungi..dum gut tha hai waha...

GRP: Sharon... ab mein kya karu beta...we can talk..we..

Sharon: dad can you do me one last favour is ke baad i wont ask you anything else...

GRP: Sharon...what are u speaking..kya...

Sharon: i don't want to work in St.louis academy anymore...mein apen doston ke saath kaam karna chahti hu... i can't...but im bound by a contract...i can you please..

GRP: Ho jayega...beta but ghar aajao...

Sharon: Thank you dad..thank you so much,...

Sharon has actually moved out of the house and St.Louis academy. She had to struggle and had to think of money now and then but she loved the new freedom. She worked in d3 academy where her heart lies. She visited Swayam's home everyday just to revisit the memories. She spoke with kaka and she used to come off.

While visiting oneday she found out that Shekhawat family is gonna sell the house. She heldher head in frustration . She couldn't hold back her tears which didn't go unseen by Rey.

Rey: Kya hua..

Sharon: kuch nahi...

Rey:Sharon...ab...

Sharon: They are gonna sell the house Rey,,,

Rey: what...

Sharon: thats the only thing left Rey...Swayam ke yaadein... i that house is so special...it is ...mein chah ke bhi kuch nahi kar sakti... kal koi aake usme rehe,.. i dunno it is killing...i,

Rey: Hey Sharon...please calm down..we will think hum Rishi uncle se baath karenge..kuch na kuch...

Sharon: nahi Rey,..please...there is nothing we can do..and i don't want any favours Rey,,,,,,

She stood up and walked out...leaving Rey in deep thoughts...

After a few days Sharon got to know from kaka that the house got sold out.and he will be moving out soon.

Sharon has visited the house for onelast time and she went to Sharon's corner and saw it... she opened his cupboard and traced her hand through all his belongings.. she took hold of a shirt and hugged it...

She turned back when she saw someone at the door. She was surprised to see Rey and his dad.

Sharon: Rey tum yaha kya kar rahe ho...

Rey: dad na naya inverstemnt dekhe aaya hu...

Sharon: i didn't get u...

Rey took out the keys of the house showing it to her...

Sharon: yeh chahbhi...OMG..u u bought the house...

Rey: ,dad ne ha...

Sharon: OMG thank u ...thank u sooo much Rey...u don't know

She turned to his dad ...thank u so much uncle

Rey's dad: anytime beta

Rey: tho yeh lo keys...

Sharon: nahi yeh ghar tumhara hai..

Rey: arrey Sharon yaar...

Sharon: nahi Rey...itna bada favour nahi...im happy i know yeh sab tumne mere lite kiya hai... but itna bada favour nahi rey...

Rey looked at his dad defeated...

Rey's dad: beta as a favour nahi... ...you take the house and pay me

Sharon: uncle ...aap sab kuch jaante hai.how can i even think of paying you... it will take me 10 15 years atleast...

Rey's dad: i don't think i will die in next 10 15 years...so u know..

Rey: dadd..

Rey's dad: sorry...kya bolte ho...and i will take each and every rupee from u so deal...

Sharon smiled and hugged Rey's dad

Sharon: thank u so much uncle... thank u so much...

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Sharon looked at her own reflection in glass window. She rested her head on the cushions thinking about how she had managed her life these 5 years without Swayam. She moved in to the along with Kriya. She felt indebted to rey for helping her to keep Swayam's house as the same one. She took special care of the house. She didn't let kaka leave. Sharon's mother was more shocked that Sharon didn't return back to house even after an year. She couldn't even meet her daughter propely... she craved for her daughter's time and love. Sharon and rest of gang have pulled off D3 to a great level after an year. Sharon has participated in several reality shows and won them. She managed to pay entire money to Rey's dad by end of 5 years. Kriya had to leave Sharon once she got married to Rey. Gang became really close to eachother especially for Sharon for her they were her family. She used to search for her happiness in their happiness...

Sharon wiped a small tear and got up and went and slept hoping that Swayam will come back to her one day .

Sharon: I love you Swayam...




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