#2 Arshi SS: The Last Place On Earth Ch 11 pg100 7/22 *Completed*

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#521

wow a really griping update...keep it up

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Anupama

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Posted: 11 years ago

#522

Amazing, Jenny!! Loved it! :')

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hydsri

@hydsri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#523

wow. lots of action. I am presuming Aman to be dead. It seems like he actually believed in what ever he was doing.Wonder if Shyam is also a crook.

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Mysticaldivine

@Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 11 years ago

#524

Jenny to get the gist of this story I have to go back some chapters...

Thnx I like romance with a bit of suspense and this story of yours is like that...

The fear of losing him made her come forward , very close to human nature as we take things granted till those start disappearing or the feel in us starts alarming us ...

I am sure these both will confess soon...😊

Edited by ArshiHamesha - 11 years ago

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Archna

@archnahardik123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#525

Brilliant update. It didn't feel like you are writing action for the first time. It was awesome.

Hope Aman gets his punishment. What about the deal which happen to take place there? Can't believe people could brainwash people like Aman for their benefit. And don't know how they do it.

Finally they get together and arnav could get there in time. I am so relieved.

And Khushi also forgive him. But I've want to hear his story, how they got separated.

It's really sad that this story is getting to its end. Let's see who else is involved in this scam.

Thanks for wonderful update and pm.

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#526

very interesting, can't wait to read more

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AquaSandhya

@AquaSandhya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#527

Really? Is this your first time writing action? You are kidding, right? Hehehe...

You did a fantastic job on the action sequence and the emotional confessions, Jen. Hopefully, this chapter inspired you to consider writing action thrillers in future :)

Enjoyed it thoroughly 😎

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

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Posted: 11 years ago

#528

Well done Jen! Very different from your style and you nailed it. Love how quick events took place to Arnav's escape. I just love his call to her and Kushiro finally admitting her concern for him. This reminds me of Indiana jones a little bit and I am a huge fan of him.