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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
SRYYY...
for the late update ...dis part will be big...i mean i m nt sure but i'll try to make it big as one suggested me by comment...so let see how much patience i hav..

part 5
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precap-

rey came too rescue taani ...from shivam's house ...
nd rey nd taani's convo...(emotional)

rey tried to open the door with a jerk ..it opened ...
rey doubted dat something was wrong as it could'nt be so easy...there is definately a catch...
but nywayss..he did'nt wasted a single moment nd holded taani's hand ...nd went out of the room...nd by the back gate of the house they went out... nd they sat on the car...
while driving taarey were quiet ...they both were lost on thinking

rey's thinking- shivam...naam sun kehi daar lagta hei...i feel ki kuch to hai ...shivam ko mai janta hoon ...he can do ny thing...but wat is he upto?????aakhir kyun mujhe aur taani ko aalag kar na chata hai...does he luvs taani ...no ye kaise ho sakta hai..he is a casanova...he cant luv nyone

taani's thinking- he..krishna ji...p[lsss kass ye saadi thik se ho jaye plss...

rey thinking- kahi woh saadi me kuch garbar na karde...

taani- rey stop ...we reached..
rey -yaa...

they both got down from the car...nd went to rey's mom ...
rm- taani tum thik to ho na beti..
rey- maa me bhi toh gaya tha na baayar...
rm - jealous ha..woh bhi teri wife se..
rey-mom..
rm- sry sry i mean hone wali ...
rey's mom left them leaving them blushing nd blushing...

rey's sis- came - kya ho raha hai yaha
there was a look look hawa sequence going on...waahi interrupted the sequence...
waahi- ahem ...(coughing in teasing sense)
w- chalo bhaabi ready hona hei...
taani- ha..
waahi was taking taani away from rey...but rey nd taani were still looking at each other...
waahi- oi majnu ..tu bhi ready ho ja...tujhe ye kapre pehenke saadi karni hai...
rey gave a angry + blushing luk too waahi ...

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in taani's room:-

waahi- woww bhabhi ..luking awwwsome...
taani smiled..
waani- ye saadi kitni magical hei na..sarur aap ke liye ye aapke life ka best moment hoga...
taani- ha woh toh hai...
taani- yese tumahare liye bhi hoga ...
waahi became red in shame...
taani- ohooo...lagta hai tum hara bhi koi hai..
waahi -😳
taani-- kyon hai woh ,,,humari saadi mein aarahe ki nahi..
waahi- his name is shivam...ha saahed aaraha hai saadi mein...
taani thinkng- shivam...nahi nahi yeh koi or shivam bhi toh ho sakta hai...
rm- taani...
waahi- chalo chalo saadi ka time ho gaya...
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saadi mandap-

the pandit was reading his mantra ...
rey was wearing his marraige garment ( similar as he wore in d3)

he luked.. at the direction...were noise was cuming..
it was taani who was cuming down the stairss...with rey's mom, taani's mom, waahi...nd other relatives as company...
rey luked only once nd turned back so dat no yone notices his sight...
taani came nd sat beside him...
waani from back to rey- jaanti hoon bhabhi etni aachi lag rahi hei ki aapke toh palke jhuk hi nahi rahe ...
rey- bhuk lagi hei...
note- here the imaginative waahi's character is little foodie..
waahi- haaa...mujhe toh hamesha lagti hei..
rey- aacha ,...jhuta khayi gi...
waahi then gave a tongue luk to rey😛 nd then sat were the audience were sitting...
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the rituals were almost over..
pandit- aab larka aur larki khare ho jayi ye...aur larka kanya ka haat pakar li jiye..
rey stood up including taani,rey holded taani's hand...
suddenly a voice came-
girl- roko...ye saadi nahi ho sakti...
all eyes were on dat girl..
rey nd taani together - ruhi...
ruhi - ye saadi mere bina ,...incomplete hei...
rey nd taani shocked

ruhi - kya hua chok gaye aare ...mei tum logo ko aalag nahi karna chatti thi it was just a joke
taani- joke..dan wat was ur plan b...????
ruhi- aare yahi toh thi..plan b...
actually me aur mere bhai toh invited hi nahi the toh humne socha kuch revenge liya jhai...
nd frankly speaking i use to love u rey...
rey nd taani got shocked including the whole audience ...
infact mene kuch ulta phulta karne ki socha tha par...
i luv u rey aapne luv ko mei dukhi kaise dekh sakti hoon...
essiliye meine bhaiya ko kaha ki chalo kuch revenge liya jhai..
rey- ufff..ruhi...i got scared nd by the way tum logo ka pura number switched off tha esiliye tum log invited nahi the samjhe..
suddenly shivam's voice came -aab toh invited hei na.ruhi turned back nd there was shivam standing wearing a very georgeous dress...
rey -aare ..offcourse yaar ...than shivam nd rey huged each other ...ruhi went to taani
ruhi- taani i m very sry ye bas majhak tha...i hope m appolojised
taani- ya offcourse ruhi
nd then they huged..each other
rfather- chalo jab sought hoyi gaya hei to...saadi continue kare we dnt hav time
nd savitri(rm)
guests ko swagat to karo..
rm - haa...haaa...aao na shivam aur ruhi betho...

the whole saadi was done nd finally rey ne taani ko aapna karliya...
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par pikchar abhi baki hai mere dost ...
aakhir celebration baki hei ...
nxt part is romance nd hawwt part for which u were waitting nd for which i promised u all...
so chapter 6 hawwt wala okk..
so keep waitting for the suhaagraat sequence ☺️ ☺️ ❤️

wish u all hav a gr8 day 👍🏼

byeee ...


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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
ANNOUCEMENT-sry for not making taarey ishqaana with more chapters...so ended here as u all were waitting for an happy ending...

nd besides a new os is gonno cum ...nd my os hate story 3 could'nt be continued as i needed response which i did'nt got so much so if i get a gr8 se bhi bigger response then i will continue...dat one after completing the upcuming one ...so
the members who will continue with me is priyanka saha nd if more members r interested than scrap me ..nd i will allote u all wat to do nd which part u will update...
nd dnt worry u can write wat ever u feel when u r writting the part but offcourse the plot should be same...

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Posted: 10 years ago
#23



It was the last part ,,,,guyss so decorations banta hai...
so here i go

ACKNOWLEDGEMENT

For this os i really want to thank all the IF members who readed my os...nd mercied my mistaskes..which i made in my writting...nd also the oldest member who wrote there os
which inspired me...a lot...😊

prologe for this part

rey now have achieved a gr8 thing in his life ...dat gr8 thing is taani..his wife ,,his life partner ...for whom he can sacrifise everything...
as all story as complications dis also had ...so after solving all the complications dis couple is just marriade nd its time for the suhagraat

part 6

SUHAGRAAT

it was the night of love ,,romance nd passion...nd excitement...
after having all the rituals finaally now they r alone in the room ...
the room is decorated with rose petals...nd decorative which created a gr8 sensation sensuality among them...
the rooms image link is below



rey shuted the door ...taani was blushing so much dat it was difficult for her to face him so she was turning back
rey came nd stared at her with passion...she was still turning back...
then rey put both his hands on taani's shoulder and made her face towards him...
rey- taani...luk at me..
taani luked at him...

imagine dat a song begins...

(labon ko labon pe sajaao
kya ho tum mujhe abb bataao) - 2
tod do khud ko tum, (baahon mein meri - 3) baahon mein
(baahon mein meri - 3) baahon mein

taani huged him ..passionately...

tere ehsaason mein, bheege lamhaaton mein, mujhko duba tishnagi si hai
teri adaayon se dilkash khataao se, in lamho mein zindagi si hai
haya ko jara bhool jaao, meri hi tarah pesh aao
kho bhi do khud ko tum, (raaton mein meri - 3) raaton mein

then rey brought his face forward to taani's face she slowly closes her eyes...nd rey puts his lips ...to her ...
first it was just a touch then they started smooching ...

tere jasbaaton mein, mehaki si saanso mein, ye jo mehek sandili si hai
dil ki panaaho mein, bikhari si aaho mein sone ki khaaish jagi si hai
chehare se chehara chupaao, sine ki dhadkan sunaao
dekh lo khud ko tum (aankhon mein meri - 3) aankhon mein

❤️
Read more: KK - Labon Ko Lyrics | MetroLyrics

rey made her sleep in there decorated it felt as if the petals fidgeted a little when taani lied on the bed ...
then he opens the blouse hook of taani...nd removes slowly everything...
nd now both r naked ...they r kissing each other ...nd enjoying the night with full of passion nd sensuality

labon ko labon pe sajaao
kya ho tum mujhe abb bataao

❤️ ❤️ ❤️
Read more: KK - Labon Ko Lyrics | MetroLyrics

the song ended nd mercely the sequence too...as u know i m not a gud writter ...so hope i hav explained the sequence properly...
nd i have'nt briefed it as u know wat is gonna happen...nd frankly i was muself blushing hard so could'nt write more...

so ,here i bring to the end of dis os...hope u njoyed...
keep waitting for my nxt update with priyanka...

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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
lovely updt...
passionate and full of romance...
loved it...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
awsome
love this concept...
plzzz continue and pm me...

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