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Posted: 11 years ago
#81
wow that was awesome...
everytime rd calls sanyu bimbo, I literally start to float in air! 😆
Edited by moonlight3094 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
loved ur update...
keep up ur good work!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
read last three parts in one go... loved it... I m liking the way story is shaping up... thanx for the PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
Oh My God, such an awesome writer you are man. Read all 14 parts in one go. Awww Randhir getting all possessive and hahahahaha bechara Jiggy, must book a bed yaar. Update very soon. Will be waiting. And please pm me when you do so.
Lots of love xxx
Posted: 11 years ago
#85
O NOoo all d parts r over

i read all the parts in 1 go

and trust me it was mind blasting

u used all d silly words they both call each other

u kept the story d real and same i loved that thing

i just loved d commic parts i was laughing my heart out and my mum kept on asking me wat i am reading

this story is really awesome i loved it

specially d hostel night part

vidushi and jiggi r simply mad ...

now i seriously wanna read next part soon it was mind blowing to read all d parts at1 time

i could imagine all d sceans in front of me as they wer looking natural nt any fantasy type

plzzz update soon and scrap me dnt pm as i dnt check pm most d time

plzzz update soon

my names Maggie

i am new to this forum

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Posted: 11 years ago
#86

ALWAYS CARED FOR YOU: PART 15

Randhir: " abe jiggi ..ab tumhe sanyukta ki bimari lag gayi kya ...going in flash back ...give me some food I am too hungry ..."

Jiggi was shaken back to his senses ..." haa...haa randhir bhai ...app kahana kalo..."

Randhir unfortunately had broken his right hand and could not hold food properly in his hand ...

Jiggi held the plate...for him ...and was even making him drink water...jiggi in his mind ( aggra randhir bhai ki thodi sava kar dunga tho... thodi mar kam pade ,,,!!...still quite shaken up by the imagination he had earlier ...)

Randhir heartily had his dinner and was cracking jokes with yoyo and team...

Suddenly a yoyo gang member ...said " arry yoyo paji...app randhir bhai ko appna gift tho dikhao...woo trailer" and he winked ..

Yoyo ( had completely forgotten about it ...he quickly removed his mobile from the pocket )...

Jiggis hands started shaking ... he was going to have the worst time of his life ... and already kaustuki ...was not ready to talk to him..

Randhir little excited to see what yoyo had got for him...

Jiggi sat quietly in the corner chair burring his head in his hand ...( he was just thinking why the heal he ever agree to vidhushi and ...try to be smart ...and why the hell he was right now in this room)...

Yoyo played the video ...and it was vidhushi on the table ...with her drama ...

Randhir was completely stunted...in his mind ( hmm so madam vidhushi tasted her own plan ...and lucky me I can see what exactly happened in my absence )...with a surprised look turning into anger as the video moved further ahead ...he could see how vidhushi was trying to get his and sanyuktas image spoiled ...

With parth defending ..he was more agitated ...( why the hell he has to defend sanyukta ...I can handle the situation ...myself ,)...still patiently watching the video ...and passing few annoying looks at jiggi...

Yoyo finished his trailer session ...and asked .." kyun ...paaji ..kyasa laga..."

Randhir ...little stern in his voice ..." good job yoyo .. waise bhi ...we cannot find out who talks what behind your back..." he looks angrily at jiggi...

Jiggi is nodding his head buried in his hand ...

Randhir " yeh dekho ...video ka ek seen tho live chaal ...raha hai... " pointing towards jiggi ...

Yoyo" koi nahi ...bhai .hum hai naa...app ka hukum...baas maje lete hai ..uuse vidhushi ke..."

Randhir downloads the video in his mobile and than get backs to getting some rest ...

Yoyo and gang leaves ...jiggi is too afraid to go near randhir ...

Randhir ...is internally happy ...for blowing the plan of jiggi and vidhushi...but annoyed seeing the video..

Suddenly his mobile beeps... its sanyuktas message " how are you...sadu..."

His frown turns into smile ...and he messages back " theek hun farzi...and you"

Sanyukta " I am ok...kal vardhan sir ne extra practicals rakhe hai...and I think he wants to see the project we did.."

Randhir " ohhh its ok I will be there"

Sanyukta " what !!!...are you mad you need rest and now you have a broken hand so please don't try to be a like RAMBO"...

Randhir " aur tum ...langdi ghodi ...kya udde kar jao gi... please...you know you have to stand there...don't try to be super women ...oh main bhool gaya tha that your newly found boy friend will help you naa"

While all this conversation was happening there was this faint smile increasing on both the faces with every beep...coming on the phone ...

Randhir ( what is wrong with me why am I smiling ... and yaa this silly girl should know ...about the video ...as ...miss vidhushi Is right now her room and might cause more trouble..).

Randhir " by the way ..sending you some good night movie ...have a look"

Sanyukta clicked on the video sent ...and was completely horrified ...so now she knew it was parth and kaustuki are her well-wishers...

Sanyukta " how the hell did you get this video...???"

Randhir throwing some harsh language on her to maintain his image " its non of your business ...and let me handle this ...vidhushi is going to get a tough time in the particals ..."

Sanyukta : " you MCP...JUST cannot talk straight...bye "

Next day in LAB:

Randhir is already in lab...

Sanyukta entered the lab limping ...with kaustukis support ...

Followed by parth , jiggi sahil...and lastly vidhushi...

Vidhushi ( had no idea about what had happened last night and she was remembering vaguely ...the memories of her failed mission )... but the real horror about the video been ...shot by yoyo...was yet to be disclosed to her...

Jiggi had no conversation after the last nights incident with randhir and was afraid to even look at him...but some how he wanted to warn ..vidhushi..that their detective role was ended...

Randhir now had to share the table with parth as jiggi was dead scared to be around randhir ...and kaustuki refused to be jiggi...

Vidhushi seeing the changes in the partners ...quickly shifted to jiggis table (where even sahil was standing )...

Jiggi ( " arry yaar yeh musibaat phir aa gayi...randhir bhai tau ab ek missile tayar karke ...is table pe chode denge...ik teer se dho nishan )...at least I will tell her about the last nights performance ...

Before he could say anything vardhan sir enters the LAB ...seeing the new partners...on the table

Vardhan sir:" INTRESTING VERY INTRESTING..."

To be continued :

Feed back please ...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
Ress
Unres


Yipyy im the first one!


Ahahahaha wjat a nice new nick... langdi ghodi 🤣

Vidushi babyy will be all rocked and shocked after the revelation
Now update soon. Lots of love xxx
Edited by mariya.kamran - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
ohh y did you end up there ???? it was getting funny !!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow dear... such a beautiful one... Awesome... update the next part soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
thanks for the pm
good update!
bichara jiggy

updat soon

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