ArShi SS : When the past haunts (Chapter 4 and Epilogue : pg 12) - Page 11

Originally posted by: GAURI29

awesome ending dear...

Originally posted by: Moumita_2014

One beautiful SS... good work... you really write well. It was fun reading also very sweet, crazy and cute like KKGSR and smart and cool like ASR ;)

Originally posted by: rulama

That was a lovely update that tied up loose strings in their life.

Originally posted by: Rasgulla_sp

Res

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You can call me really petty but I started reading this chotu sa story, even though I dont like to read stories on the original IPK tracks (esply Sheetal's), only because of your QH dp. I just wanted to know what would a very-QH fan write for an ArHi story 😛

I am sorry for my prejudices and let me tell you I thoroughly enjoyed this take on the Sheetal track. Haiyye kaash yeh huwa hota show main... Sigh...

Firstly, what I liked the most was that you didnt forget (like the CVs) that ASR was shown flying in a chopper in the first episode, was called a fashion tycoon owning an MNC, had media flocking him and had bodyguards by the dozen roaming around him. Basically you remembered and incorporated his rich and famous status in your story. Of course, if ASR gets married on the sly there would be gossip, of course the paper will be sued, of course ASR needs to introduce his wife to the society in the right manner, of course an exclusive interview with a high profile magazine (which btw you wrote very well along with the apt pictures 👍🏼) is the need of the hour... 👏

Secondly, Arnav's love for Khushi is not an inexplicable, intense feeling. I loved how he worded out what exactly he loves about her beyond the passion they share ❤️

Thirdly, communication is the key in any relationship. I loved how Arnav encouraged it here, making Khushi speak to him about her insecurities or answering questions that she had about his past.

Fourthly, Khushi was a very giving soul in IPK. Here, it felt great to see Arnav working on his relationship with his wife, letting Khushi bask in his love and attention instead of just letting her give her body and soul to their marriage and getting only gnawing questions and self-doubt in return. I loved how he talked to her, understood her need for change, took her shopping, ousted Sheetal, just everything he did for her in thoughts, words and actions... 😳

Fifthly, I loved the trust Khushi has in Arnav. She saw Sheetal on his lap yet knew he would never cheat her. Her tears were only about if he found her insufficient in comparison to others. But then Arnav really took care of all her insecurities 😃

Overall a very well-thought of story. I would love to see you write more on IPK 😊

Sorry again 😊

Originally posted by: toeditor

Just stumbled across this wonderful story...simply beautiful...

Bookmarked your blog!!! Thank you... Continue to write

Viji