Arshi FF: That one mistake:Thread 9:Chapter 44 *Updated* page-103 3/8

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rulama

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Posted: 11 years ago

#441

So its Sanjay's downfall but he has put the life of NK and Khushi in peril!

Khushi trying to defend herself till the last moment!Lovely update and you have written it well!

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bhumi1492

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Posted: 11 years ago

#442

I hope khushi and baby is safe

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sugarbird

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Posted: 11 years ago

#443

what a terrible one. poor khushi undergoing so much pain. appreciate her effort to fight against evil. nk did a tremendous job. ofcoz at the end can feel arnav's pain.

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nuts4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#444

keep them safe...you end the devil but didnt gave us chance to rejoice instead now we are worried for NK,Khushi and baby's health...

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ipktouch

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Posted: 11 years ago

#445

omg such a horror one ...that bas***d sanjay with lustful eyes shud not live in this world...it was a fraction of second where nk came and saved kushi twice...now the situation was more complicating...waiting for the next update...

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Maghinalls

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Posted: 11 years ago

#446

Omg what about baby

Hope kush wouldn't angry with arnav

Pls save the baby also

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divyaasrsingh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#447

shit !!!! kya kar diya iss sanjay🤬 ne...

khushi ya baby...

awww poor arnav woh khushi hi bolega na...

hope kuch Miracle ho jaye or baby ko kuch na ho

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.ButterCup.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#448

What I can say you depicted Arshi feelings very well...Very painful feeling of loosing someone whom you love wholeheartedly, truly, madly and deeply... Who is your life and everything...It is very tough situation for arnav... I was relieved when NK reached on time and he genuinely tried to help her... Love that scene when came there, covered Khushi with his coat, and teaches the lesson to that moron... I really hope both Khushi and the baby will be all right... If something happen to the baby Khushi will be devastated and if something happen to Khushi or baby arnav will be scattered... Brilliantly written..Looking forward to the next chapter... Thanks for pm

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Nimmi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#449

oh no...what'll happen now...
I want both of them to be safe...
I want to kill that Sanjay... 😡 disgusting man...
poor no. hope he'll be fine...
please save them both...
waiting for next part...