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Posted: 11 years ago
i hope that he will keep his promise...
Loved the update...
Beautifully written..
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Posted: 11 years ago
A beautifully written part & the conversation was long overdue ... The entire conversation of Arnav & Khushi is written in an amazing way ... But at the end of the chapter u made me curious & anxious ... Why won't their heartfelt promise see light of a new day ???šŸ¤”
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful chapter Manreet! I am so glad Arnav and Khushi finally spoke.
You describe everything in such a lovely manner, thank you for this great story!
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Posted: 11 years ago
That was touching Manreet...
Separation is on cards???
Waiting to see what exactly you have in the plot...
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Posted: 11 years ago
How selfless is Khushi. Always giving.
This is the first time she asked for something, i hope he manages to keep his promise.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely emotional update!
I'm so happy to see they finally communicated eager to see what you have in store for us.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update Manreet.. 😃

Loved how they shared their past with each other.. And Khushi also shared her fears of losing him and he promising her that he wud never leave his pari.. <3
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Posted: 11 years ago

Manz, you already know that your writing is amazing so I won't gush about it again and will straight go to the chapter that you gave us. It was beautiful, it was honest, it was heartfelt and emotional at the same time.

Can I just say how relieved I am to finally see Arnav and Khushi have their heart to heart, making the equation they share seem much more meaningful. THough there was always this unspoken understanding between them, I am really glad to finally see them talking. Arnav may or may not be able to fulfill the promises he made to Khushi, it was still great to see him make an effort to learn more about his innocent pari, to comfort her and try to assure her in the her most vulnerable moment. The way Khushi questioned her Arnav Babu about why he was asking about her then and what would happen when one day he may have to leave her as well, was heart-wrenching and real.

What more can I say the whole chapter was a stunning display of emotions and Arnav and Khushi's beautiful intimate moments. They draw comfort and peace from each other's presence even if they haven't really met in the best of circumstances.

Loved it woman, your VL! ā¤ļø

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Posted: 11 years ago
WILL DERE BE NO HAPPY ENDING???

But i like dat dey atleast talked...:)

nd thnk you for d lil insight into arnav's mind bout england's connection...:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Manreet this story is really a pleasant surprise i mean i never expected a story of this genre from u. I love the way you narrate the past of each characters .
Thank you for the pm

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