KriYansh OS: Desired emotion - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: akankshaArsha

first of all shenzu 🤗🤗 Yeah!!!


i love u soo soo much for this... Sirf iske liya -_-

i thought u forgot bt u didnt...silly me Nahi! Bas thoda schedule hectic hogaya tha :P

coming to the os...it turned out beautiful...trust me really amazing...that scene in the show disappointed me to no extent...i still m waiting for a detailed conversation of the two...chuck it...
u very well explained kriya's reaction to those lines...just how i expected...(kash d3 writers tujse kuch seekh sake).. Zyada nahi ho gaya?

the way she stopped him to hear her gave a glimpse of kriya who dsnt take shit so easily... I can't tolerate either!

again mr. i m impulsive wasnt ready to look at her even once...daddycool...huh..idiot... I have better words, but had to hold back, because I was writing warna iski toh bajaa deti main 😆

kriya ghai...wen it comes to decisions...she is so...no words...do char suna ke jana chaiye tha...btye bi words se attack krti hai...
nd mr dumbhead cudnt get it..reason being obvious...EGO... Iske Ego ne humari baji di, especially meri

the dream part was literally aawwing..till the time i thought it was real.. EEE 😆
planning to go to new york..typical kriya ghai...
ditto reaction as it was of kriya..."bit rude"..jhoota kahi ka... Jhoota nahi, bahut bada jhoota, Ek toh chori upar se seena jori..

their conversation afterwards...
i enjoyed it...how she gave reasons for going apart nd he being adamant on nt letting her leave HIM...that sudden kiss...i liked it... Thank you :)
oh...fiesty kriya...always a pleasure...(epi me it surprised me..sangmarmar se phle)... best part..the way she vented out her frustration...nd finger kiss...it was freaking adorable...
i loved this particular part a lot
" And above all you keep
sticking that favourite dialogue of yours' Just
because I love you, I am doing this.. I am doing
that..' Err.. I am fed up of this!"
yes it seems like a burden...
dialogues afterwards...all were beautiful..i cant select one in particular nd explain...all made me content...
spcly where he was asking forgiveness nd accepting his mistake nd claiming his nd her love...so vulnerable portray of insecurity...nd that one in hug...so pure ...finally...JJKR melted...so casually...bt it was eye catching...
nd again back to square one...the naughty singhania...
whole in whole...thanku so much for doing this...dat too on a single voice... I had to.. You asked me for it,
love u for that 🤗... I love you too..
PS : m thinking i should often throw requests...what say 😆

I don't mind.. But you might :P
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
kriyansh emotions veryy well portrayedd,and their charcteers were veryy well shownn!!!!!! loved itt!!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i love u wese bi...i meant ki is os ke liye or zyada...
nd i wont mind giving requests...i will keep on bugging u...;-)...🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14

It was indeed a beautiful os...⭐️

really loved it...😊I like the emotional rey instead of the impulsive rey for kria atleast...
They were soo cute...
I wish ki D3 mein yeh hota...
it would have sooo magical...
love the way you describe it...it was fabulous 👏
thanx for pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
AAHHH Shenzzz... OMGGG *drools*

intensityyy eeekkksss...

i litrelly die to read something intense or angsy...eekkksss *drools again*

ye ekdum mast tha... i loved it sooo much..

it completly justified both of them...

How Rey is...totally stubborn...ego...

theb Kriya being too much hurt...without saying nything..about to leave...

and then that frustrating..angsy part.. haayyyeee...

i just loveddd how Kriya slammed the door pushing him back...making Rey all terror stricken... bwahahaaa... i loved that moment sooo f**king much... *___________*


and then Rey ekdumm helpless just wanting to stop her... *________*

I loved loved loveddd it...

Beautifulll one shenzzz...

Tum kamaal ho boss... :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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fantastic one shenzz👏👏
well written⭐️⭐️
lovedd ittt😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
This is Beautiful
Angry Kria.. Naughty Rey.. I loved it from starting to end
Tnx for the PM :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
Awesome OS👏
In the show I was really upset that she didn't react to his taunts so I was really happy reading this!
Good she didn't tell him first that she was going for affiliation purpose...
Rey was so upset seeing her leave...Loved his reaction and his emotional side as well!
The ending was beautiful
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
this was superb and fantastic os... loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
yaar i wonde iss ameeta ji ko aise ideas kyu nahi aate
humesha apna saas bahu crap dikhathi hai show mein
isn't it supposed 2 b dis way
i wish tumese koi i mean all kr writers me se koi
d3 ka story likhtaa tab toh kuch ache scenes aate hai
anyways comin 2 ur os
it was fantastic i relly njoyd it
the image of rey kissing her finger is too gud 😳😳😳
all in all it's awesome👏👏

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