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Anisha Chowdhury

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Posted: 11 years ago

#511

Originally posted by: gauri95
Nice one..!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

#512

oops wrong posted...

r u going to update???

Edited by Gunseerat - 11 years ago

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Anisha Chowdhury

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Posted: 11 years ago

#513

Originally posted by: Gunseerat
oops wrong posted...
r u going to update???

its ok...no ...thursday pakka wid a surprise in plot

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Its amazing yaar.. luv it... also i luv ur ff always 2gther2 also... update soon dear... and p.m me too..plzz

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Samyuktha Krishnan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#516

update milegi aaj??????????

love

samyuktha😳

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Anisha Chowdhury

@chowanisha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#517

Originally posted by: samyukthakrish
update milegi aaj??????????
love
samyuktha😳

WITHIN FEW MINUTES

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Anisha Chowdhury

@chowanisha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#518

HELLO!!!thank you so much for liking and commenting!!i hope u like dis part also!!!!

part 16:~

Sanyu was waiting for her bag when rd came running and handed her ...he felt strange and silently stood at a corner thinking if she might need help...

Here sanyu ran her hand inside her bag and took out a botlle and small case...

She washed her hands properly and gently took out the lens she wears and placed it on case and den splashed several times to soothe the irritation...she den again searched something in her bag frantically for few minutes ...not getting another lens case she slammed the bag on the floor and again splashed water...she den squeezed some liquid from the bottle and tried to clear the dirt from lens but it was already damaged...she wiped her face wid a napkin and threw it in dustbin...she looked up at mirror to see her real hazel eyes dat she hides from world wid her brown lens...but den something caught her eyes except her own eyes...it was shocked rd who was standing dere wid slightly open mouth and wide eyes...

She quickly turned to face him in fear .seeing the same reaction ,she thought of leaving from dere right den and she was successful till his room door wen rd caught her elbow and yanked her closer...

He was busy in her eyes and she was busy maintaining a distance from him...

Sanyu:rd choro...

Rd left her elbow and stood dere crossed arms wid a straight face

Sanyu:bye..have to go...

Rd:tum yeh chupati kyu ho????just because it is similar to ur mothers...

Sanyu stopped on her tracks listening to it...damn it...how can she forget that he has seen her mother ..or else she could have made some excuses...she was busy thinking of some excuse wen rd repeated the same question

Sanyu:wo wo mujhe late ho raha hai...she was looking down and mumbling the same

Rd pulled her chin up wid his fingers

Rd:hum friends haina???jhuth mat bolo

Sanyu:ha hum sirf friends hai nothing more to tell dis...she faked anger thinking dis might help

Rd smiled :ho gaya...ab jaldi batao...ha ya na

Sanyu:kya ha aur na

Rd:sanyukta...see I know, u and ur mother haven't shared a cordial relation and u have ur reasons...so by hiding dis eyes It proves nothing...

Sanyu:listen...u might b knowing everything but I don't care and about dis, I am not proving anything..i am showing how much I hate dat woman...u will never feel wat I have gone through because u have a loving family ,a loving and complete family, not like mine which was never complete...only I know wat it felt wen ur relatives and neighbours used to say that daughter would be the same as her mother as dey have many similarities starting from eyes...u guys only can hear ,comment and show pity on me which I don't want...ho gaya janna...she turned to leave but randhir again pulled her ...

Sanyu:now wat???

Rd made her sit on bed forcefully and gave her a glass of water...

She gulped it down in one go and handed the glass to rd...rd sat on his knees in front of her and took her hands in his...

Rd:see I really don't know wat u have gone through ur bad phase...and we all ..rahul,kaustoki,parth,di, mei kisi ko koi pharak nhi parta hai...we just want u to be happy for the rest of ur life...sanyukta ,koi perfect nhi hai...sab mei flaws hai...mujhme hai ,parth mei hai even vd uncle mei bhi hai...same goes wid ur mom...u hate her and its justified but don't u think she tried to apologise to u and ur dad...yeah she was late.ur dad accepted her but she could nt even survive wid him..she never got the chance to mend her faults..her mistakes ...she tried sanyukta and it matters the most..agar tum mujhe maaf kar sakti ho ,preeti ko kar sakti ho ,sabko kar sakti ho jo tumhe sataye ,rulaye to phir why not she???dont u think she deserves atleast dis????

Sanyu:why don't u guys understand the pain which I carried all my 24 years of life???why don't u guys see dat its not easy for me to forget each of her mistakes in dis whole 24 years...she blurted out wat she never shared wid anyone...she sobbed feeling the pain again,she sobbed thinking her friends taking her moms side...

Rd wiped dose tears and hugged her

Rd:sanyukta we all understand that its not easy but its not tough either...trust me u will feel light and good ...just forgive her sanyukta..for ur dad ,for ur cousins ,ur aunt ,ur friends and for me???

he repeated the last words in his thoughts .why would she forget for him!!and why did he even told about him instead his name should be among friends list...

Sanyu hugged him back crying even louder and making him shrug away his thoughts

Rd just patted her back and ran his fingers in her hairs ...

After few good minutes of crying rd didn't hear sobs...

He slowly parted him to see her asleep ...

He wiped those tears and picked her up in arms and made her lie down on his bed properly...he turned to see a smiling renuka and went out of room wid her

Re hugged him and caressed his forhead

Re:u know I am proud of u...

Rd:I know dat..but ab kya kiya???

Re:I am sure rd ,ab sanyukta light feel kar rahi hogi...u know rishav ,dhruv sabne try kiya uske dil k bat bahar lane k liye...use samjhane k liye ,use reasons dene k liye ki her mom deserves her forgiveness but she told only she hates her and why...per aj jab meine tumdono ki bat suni to laga ki she is letting her heart out...she hates her,she has reasons but wo kyu nhi maaf karti hai wo aj usne bataya...

Rd:kya???kab bola???

Re:because she needs time to forget everything and forgive ,she is still in dat pain rd...its been 24 years!!!she needs time

Rd:wo to hai..i just hope wo maaf kar de aur sab thik ho jaye...

Re:hmm...rd ek bat puchu...

re tuk his hands in hers

Rd:arrey bolo na...

Re:do u like her???

Rd:matlab???obvio I like her ..use kaun like nhi karega???

Re:rd I am serious now...ok lets make it easy!!!do u love her???

Rd's eyes widened as if the whole earth came crushing down...

Re:rd??kuch pucha hai!!!sacchi batana!!!even I like her ..not just like ,I would love to see her in our house in future and shower my love which she never got

Arpita and parth comes up

Ar:iske liye ap use yaha rehne k liye bol sakte ho...it will b great r8???kyu parth...but parth was busy noticing rd's expressions

Re:not dat arpu!!!i am saying the odr way!!like my another daughter...another member over here as ur bhabhi,parth's bhabhi,my daughter-in-law and rd's wife...

As dese words came out of her mouth rd's expressions were changing from confused to happy to guilt

And finally when the 'wife' word came out, his heart skipped a beat and a huge grin unknowingly appeared to his face

Parth who was busy noticing his friend's expressions smiled sheepishly at his antics and nudged arpita showing rd...arpita was first busy getting renuka's words and when she saw rd's expressions she couldn't help but nod to renuka's approach

Re:so u guys agree??

Ar:no...I like her but rd don't u think she doesn't deserve u ???i mean u r a star and she is just a doctor who is not even interested in u...arpi teased him while rd's face was covered wid a sorrow look

Parth:hmm aunty ,he should date someone of his genre,i mean like from our acting world...like vidhushi???arpita made a face and re suppressed her laughter

Rd:wat????parth pagal hai??me and vidhushi!!!no way..aur arpi its not true...balki I don't deserve her...u all don't know anything about the pl...and he stopped as realization hit him of blurting out the truth

Parth went near him and held him by his shoulders

Parth:rd sidhe sidhe batao...u were going to tell something!!some plan r8???rd pls tell us!!!pls I beg u !!sanyu bohot seh chuki hai ,pls koi galat kam mat karna...

A drop of tear escaped form his eyes

Re:rd pls beta hume sab batao...

Rd:wo newspaper incident k din,jab dad ko pata chala ki she is the owner to the top industry ,unhone mujhe sanyu ko firse dosti karne k liye bola...mei wo waise bhi karta but dad wanted something else...mei ek project mei kam kar raha hu per dad is against it...I gave a whole year to it but dad rejected it...unhone mere samne condition rakhi ki agar mei unke mutabik chalu to wo mere project ko accept karenge...even delhi mei, dad used to push me to be wid her ..to be the shoulder for her crying soul...

Re:rd how cud u???tum kabse apni dad ki tarah aise hone lage???hum jante the ki the most valuable thing to u was friendship but yaha tumne

Rd:no mom...pls listen to me...ha meine unke mutabik kam kiya per mom I realy felt guilty...jab usne mujhse phirse dosti ki to usne mujhe phirse trust kiya ..mom believe me tabse I am just being a true friend...agar apko believe nhi hota,den den u can also reject my project mom but realy whatever I did today was from real rd...I never wanted to hurt her...and I promise I will never let dad and his business to come between us...

Arpi:hold on...I have something to say...agar rd sach keh raha hai to we want a prove...

Rd:bolo ..jo bologi wo karunga!!!!

Arpi:cool...dad jaisa bolte hai wo karo

Rd;wat???

Re:ha..wo hi karo jo harsh kahe per be the genuine rd...do it from ur heart ...never hurt her...

Parth:and one more thing..dont let him know dat we know it ok???

Rd:ok...he was smiling and going back to his room wen arpi and parth pulled him back

Re;bhag kaha raha hai????pehle jo pucha tha wo answer to dey??

Rd:kaunsa

Parth:kaunsa???bachu khud has raha tha jab aunty ne wife bola aur ab

Arpi:rd even I want her as my bhabhi

Re smiled and hugged her

Rd:hold on guys...kuch zyada nhi ho raha ???he made a straight face

Re:matlab u don't love her???

Rd:wen did I say dat????everyone become sad and he broke out in laughter

Rd:I don't know if I love her or not but definitely she is someone unique in my life...someone who is close to my heart

Re smiled and kissed his forehead

Re:I got it...now let her sleep for sometime and don't go and drool over her beauty...she winked and moved from dere leaving dem flabbergasted

Arpi caught both of the boys ears and pulled dem to her room adjascent to rd's

Parth:arrey mujhe kyu pakra??

Arpi:tum jante the na ki he likes sanyu

Parth:arrey isme kya bat hai...wo to mei bhi karta hu...

Rd:ha...he realeased his ears and jumped on arpi's bed making her angry

Arpi:rd kitni bar bolu waise jump mat kar...

Parth:ha yar mat kar..and he too jumped beside rd

Arpi:I hate u both

Paran:but I love u

Rd and arpi looked at parth wid questioning look

Parth:arrey dost k jaise...he gave a sly smile

Arpi:acha rd bata na tu sachi use pyar karta hai???kyu kyu???bata na

Rd:kyu???

Parth:arrey bata na..bhaw bad mei khana...ab bol saale..

Rd narrowed his eyes

Parth:arrey wo wala nhi woo wala...

Rd got confused but shrugged it and kept his head on arpi's lap parth kept his head on rd's stomach

Rd:umm I don't know if she is the girl but she is sweet

Parth;beautiful also..infact intelligent too

Arpi:hmm wo to hai per rd

Rd:ok I got it di...umm u know hum pehle din se ek dusre ko bina jane ulta sidah bol diya..but wo bola tha na ki meri shoot pe agayi thi!!!u know i was surprised wid her behaviour!!pehle ati hai aur bad mei jhar k chali jati hai bina dekh k ki kaun samne hai...den we met in hospital..u know she is a different sanyukta dere...a matured one...and I like dis changeover

Parth:jo ki tu bhi hai...hum sab k sath masti karta hai aur office k kam k waqt arrogant ho jata hai

Rd:fine...and den u know jab hum waha they hospital mei, each and every staff wud praise her though she was just an intern...she takes care of each and everyone neglecting her own health..

Parth:upar se arpi pata hai wo ise dat ti bhi thi aur chup chap man jata tha ye

Rd:jhutha...lath marunga...aisa nhi hai...hum jhagra karte the aur phir understanding bhi thi jo anth mei dono hi smile kar dete the ...pata nhi kaise per ek alag sa bond ho gaya tha..freinds nhi the per phir bhi

Hum hasi Mazak kar lete the...he was having a dreamy smile thinking of their moments while parth was busy video capturing his talks

Arpita's giggle made him come out of chance

Rd:wat??

Parth;nothing ...acha yeh bata ki confirm karne k liye kya karega???

Rd:confirm???but tum log sirf ek side dekh rahe ho !!wat if sanyukta doesn't like me the same way???wat if she likes someone else???and dhruv's smiling face came infront of him making him sit up wid a jolt

Arpi:kya hua???

Rd:no guys..she doesn't likes me...she likes dhruv..

Parth:dhruv??per

Rd:no guys..u know sanyukta itni jaldi kisi ko friend nhi banati hai...she makes friends whom she can rely upon ,want till her last breath...and ek hi din mei they both bonded well .even laughed,smiled and hugged...

Parth:to?????meine bhi to ek hi sham mei dosti banali thi!!!!

Rd:no guys...she is not meant for me...pls is bat ko age mat barao...and he walked out of the room

Arpita and parth followed him and trio entered his room to find sanyukta awake and her face in her palms

Rd sat at one corner of bed far away from her

Rd:u ok???

Sanyu:hmmm...sorry wo mei shayad rote rote...

Rd:its ok...

Arpi;hey wo sab choro kya plan hai aj sham ka

Sanyu:tumhaare bhai k sath challenge hai...

Rd:choro...mujhe nhi karna

Sanyu:kyu??dar gaye???

Rd:jo soch na hai socho

Arpi:shut up rd...

Sanyu;hey kuch huya hai kya????anything serious???

Parth:bohot serous!!!!he looked at rd who was glaring him

Parth:wo kya hai na sanyu aunty ko ek larki pasand aagayi hai rd k liye to

Sanyu:to???rd ko pasand aya???she looked at rd hoping a answer but arpi answered

Arpi:ha aya per na rd ko lagta hai ki she likes someone else

Sanyu:acha??/to us larki ko chor do na uske sath jise wo like karti hai???

Dis made rd all the more sad and thinking this as her own answer if he had approached her,he left from dere

Sanyu:yeh chala kyu gaya???kahi wo larki ise zyada pasand to nhi aagayi????she was more tensed den everyone

Parth:nah wo choro..tum na dhruv ko bhi bula lo...rd ko hum leke ayenge

Sanyu:ok...ise acha bhi lagega...wo rd jis disc mei jata hai waha milte hai phir...she got down from the bed

Arpi:wait..tum kuch alag dikh rahi ho...

Parth:ha sanyu tumhari ankhein...u were brown eyed r8???aur meine yeh ankhei kahi dekhi hai...

Sanyu:wo lens pehenti thi...this are real aur meri m...I mean wo jisne janam diya unka aisa hi ankhein hai...shayad tasvir mei dekhi hogi

Arpi:yeah...u look more beautiful in dese...don't wear lens to hide it yar...its the real you

Parth:hmm sanyu pls ...

Sanyu just passed a smile and walked out

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Disc...

All were dere sitting over sofa waiting for sanyu and kaustoki

Rahul was asking all crap questions to dhurv while vidhushi was clinging onto rd who was silently sitting dere..yoyo and jiggy were fighting over some drinks

Arpita and parth were just having there drinks and looking at the four of dem when dhruv pointed towards the door saying sanyukta and kaustoki's arrival..

Rd looked up to see sanyu in a red thin strap frock dress upto her midthighs

Yoyo:agar sanyu meri behen na hoti to sachi mei aj flirt to karta hi...rd yeh to sachi mei hot lag rahi hai...

Rahul:rd sanyu hi jitegi...kyu jiggy

Jiggy:kaustoki ...she is so beautiful...he was blabbering dreamily

Vid:usse hot to kayi larkiya yaha hai...

Dhruv:realy???per tumse zyada hot lag rahi hai...he flashed his dimple and got up to walk upto sanyu and kaustoki

Rd left from dere and went to drinks counter

Kausto:hello guys...rd kaha gaya???

Parth:wo dekho...he pointed to odr end and sanyu turned to see him in a transparent white shirt flaunting his abs wid a blue denim jeans and hair perfectly gelled up...his stubble adding as a feature to his handsome face...

Kausto:wooo he is hot

Sanyu walked upto him and sat beside him

Sanyu:tum devdas kyu ban gaye???

Rd:nothing like dat

Sanyu:mujhse jhuth!!!pls ha...tum kya wo ladki ko leke tensed ho..arrey choro na...hum yaha masti k liye aye hai na to wo karo na...jo hoga dekha jayega

Rd just passed a smile

Sanyu stood in front of him :listen..take it as a advice..hum jo chahte hai wo hi paye aisa koi rule nhi hai aur yeh bhi rule nhi hai ki woh hume na mile...got it???agar wo larki ka tumhare zindegi mei ana hai to ayegi aur agar nhi to chali jayegi...evry thing is like dat fist full of sand which will slip as soon as u will apply force ...jise rehna hai wo tumhare muthi mei hoga aur jise nhi wo gir jayega...so jo hai usipe dhyan do...ok..and now u have is us..so 1st challenge ka result kya hai??

Rd smirked ,kept the glass back and held her hand...

Rd:lets go dr monaaa...dey both laughed and joined the gang...

Vids:tumhari ankhei

Rd:its her real eyes...isn't it beautiful????

Arpita and parth gave teasing look before bursting out in laughter

Rahul:guys chalo na dance floor pe...kitni larkiya hai!!!koi to pat jayegi!!!!!

Rd tuk out his phn as his phn vibrated

Rd:hey guys moti is here in Mumbai...

Rahul:kaun moti???

Rd:arrey holi mei mile the na

Sanyu:actualy rahul so raha tha jab wo chali gayi ..isiliye wo nhi janta...rd ki sister hai!!!

Rahul:ou...ha yeh shayad bataya tha...

Parth:arrey to use yaha bulale...she wud have fun

Rahul:u sure??

Rd:grt idea...she wanted to come in dis disc...ruk use bol deta hu...he got out of disc for calling while rest joined the dance floor

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A remix fusion of yaar na miley and Saturday Saturday was playing and everyone was grooving, some crazily,some doing funny moves and some sensual ...

Wen rd came inside ,his eyes fell on sanyukta who was laughing and doing yaar na miley step wid arpita...both were enjoying the most ...wen suddenly someone from behind pushed sanyukta and she was going to fall but a hand held her waist tightly...

Rd luked at the hand and den the person it belong to...it was dhruv's

He felt sad ,went and sat on sofa...

Rahul came and pulled him back to floor and gave his hands on sanyu's

Rd's heart starting beating at a higher pace seeing her smile and feeling her so close

Sanyu:wat happened star???compitition chalu hai hero...she giggled and started dancing

Rd was smiling and soon started dancing...he pulled her close and smirked...

Sanyu gave a warm smile and both grooved crazily on Saturday Saturday catching everyone's eyes and gradualy all left the floor giving them space...

Dey both were smiling and laughing doing steps and den colliding wid each odr and again pushing each odr...wen dey were exhausted dey pushed Rahul out of sofa and both settled down giggling

Parth:itna kya has raha hai???

Sanyu:bol du???

Rd:nhi...he started laughing holding his tummy

sAnyu:nhi nhi mei bolungi...actualy parth kya hain...rd placed his palm on her mouth and the odr wrapping her neck and pulling her towards him ...

Rd:mei bhi wo bol dunga...mat bolo na...he again started giggling making everyone confuse...

Precap:ummm see next part...

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ok so dis part specialy for ASAPOM!!!!HOPE U LIKE IT!!!😉😆

Part 17:~

Dey both were smiling and laughing doing steps and den colliding wid each odr and again pushing each odr...wen dey were exhausted dey pushed Rahul out of sofa and both settled down giggling

Parth:itna kya has raha hai???

Sanyu:bol du???

Rd:nhi...he started laughing holding his tummy

sAnyu:nhi nhi mei bolungi...actualy parth kya hain...rd placed his palm on her mouth and the odr wrapping her neck and pulling her towards him ...

Rd:mei bhi wo bol dunga...mat bolo na...he again started giggling making everyone confuse...

Rahul:arrey mujhe kyu giraya???he pushed dem and settled on dat small sofa making sandhir squeezing each odr

Vids:arrey Rahul yeh dono to ek dusre ki godi mei uth gaye...utho...

Rahul:tumhe kya????

Sanyu pinched rd's hand freeing herself

Rd:ahhh..kitni bari bari nakhun hai tumhe???

Sanyu:arrey mei saans hi nhi le pa rahi thi...

Rd again pulled her by her neck

Rd:ab batao..

Sanyu:ok ok nhi bataungi...promise...choro na

Rd:nhi...

Sanyu made a puppy face

Rd looked down to see her face and was struck dere...dey were so close ...her breaths were fanning his jaw...he felt bliss seeing her in his arms...he smiled his best and piched her nose

Sanyu punched him on his tummy and giggled

Rd:ok isbar chor raha hu ok???

Sanyu showed him her tongue and settled properly

Arpita:hmmm to kyu has rahe the???

Rd:sorry cant say...waise drinks???

Rahul:cool...mei lata hu!!!!dhruv come wid me and help me

Rd:dhruv hi kyu????he nudged him

Rahul:agar phirse wo sara huya joke mara to na mei bol dunga ki tum bhi mere sath uski jasusi kar rahe ho...he smirked and went

Vids settled herself beside rd

Vids:chalo dance karte hai!!!tumne to mere sath kiya hi nhi

Parth:arrey let him rest...den go ok????he gave a fake smile

Rd:ok ok sanyukta ??

Sanyu:hmm bolo bolo!!!she giggled again

Rd:hasna band karo na...pet dukh raha hai ab!!!!

Sanyu:arrey has to mei rahi hu tumhara pet kyu dukh raha hai???

Rd:arrey pls na...he made a puppy face

Sanyu pulled his cheeks and made a straight face

Sanyu:ab bolo

Rd:chalo moti tumhe bula rahi hai!!!!

Sanyu:mujhe???mujhe kyu???

Rd:mujhe kya pata..chalo!!!!he held her hand and went out

Kausto:my goodness...kuch hi ghanto mei they r like best of friends

Jiggy:yeah...aj hi subah wo sab huya actualy dopeher ko and now she is letting him drag her

Arpi:ha ...kuch aisa hua ki now both are hell comfortable wid each odr

Vids:kya huya???

Parth:bohot kuch...he made his eyes bigs making her feel as if something great happened

Yoyo:arrey bolo bhi

Arpi:khud hi jan jaoge...she hi 5ed wid parth...

Outside

Sanyu:arrey wo kaha hai???

Rd:mujhe kya pata????there there...he pointed to a girl in blue skinny jeans and a white crop top revealing her belly which had a ring pierced on her navel

Sanyu:tum use moti kyu bolte ho???logo ko galti ho jayegi!!

Rd:acha listen don't giggle in front of her ...wo sab mujhse ugwa leti hai...

Sanyu:acha hi hai...use bhi to pata chale ki uska star bhai kaise ek larki ka dil tor diya...it was not gud ha rd...she came to you wid so much hope...

Rd:yeah right...wid the hope of kissing me and ripping my clothEs off...thank god bach gaya

Sanyu:ha agar time pe meine wo larke ko na push kiya hota to uske sath jo jo huya tumhare sath hota...hahhaahha socho kya hota...

Rd:kya yar tum bhi na...mera izzat utar ne wala tha aur tum uspe has rahe ho...

Sanyu:to???tum bhi to has rahe ho us larke pe...

Dey reached moti

Moti:hey bhai...hi di

Sanyu:ahh call me sanyu...

Rd:arrey bolo use kyu bulaya bahar????

Moti:oh yeah..wo gari mei ek meri dost hai!!!!just check her once...she is not feeling well...

Sanyu:ok ..chalo...

Rd was coming but moti stopped hIM

Moti:u stay...hum jate hai!!!!

Rd:kyu???

Sanyu:arrey hoga kuch...stay ok...she ordered him and he nodded like a obedient student

Dey reached a car to find a girl reading a book

Moti:oye yeh sanyu hai...dr hai...bol ise teri problem

Girl:oh hi...I am mansi...wo na mujhe ummm I am having dose menstrual problems ...

Sanyu:ok!!!listen I cant say just like dat...kal wiTHin 9 a.m hospital chali ana...receptionist ko mera nam bolna...I will take u to our senior doctor...she is the best gynecologist...and bring ur mom if possible

Mansi:ummm actualy my mom is in u.s and moreover I umm how to say

Moti:she slept wid her boyfriend and she is thinking dat she might be pregnant

Sanyu:wat???did u do that test???

Mansi:no...

Sanyu:ok...come tomorrow I will see to it...don't worry...

Mansi:thank you...ok bye now...have to go...

She wnt from dere

Moti:so ???

Sanyu:u all r just 22 or 23 aur isi umar mei yeh sab karna zaruri hai???

Moti:wats wrong in it???

Sanyu:see nothing is wrong but wat if the guy leaves her???u all have to make ur future strong ...its not that I am against all dese but there's always a right time r8???

Moti:ha to mujhe pata hai!!and for ur info I don't have any bf...I am just helping her...mujhe kyu dant rahe ho???she pouted

Sanyu:daant nhi rahi hu...ok fine..u too come tomorrow ok???just be wid her ...

Moti:yeah I will..thanks...she hugged her .and don't tell bhai and di about dis...bhai ko to bilkul nhi...renu ko bol dega aur mujhe dant khilwayega...humesha ki tarah

Sanyu:renu???u mean his mom???

Moti:yeah ...I call her by her name...she is a darlo...

Rd comes dere

Rd:sab thik???

Sanyu:yup...chale???u know moti..ooops sorry I don't know ur name...actualy dey all said me only moti ...

Rd:wahi thik hai

Moti:acha????mat bol mei bolti hu..aur phir dekh mei kya karti hu...chalo to pehle andar

Dey entered the disc again

Arpi:moti!!!!she hugged her

Moti:I have a name di...she twisted her nose a bit and side hugged parth and vidhushi..den kausto and yoyo

Jiggy:hi I am jiggy...

Moti:oh hi...i heard about you...so whose he???

she pointed to dhruv who was busy texting some one

Rd:he is dhruv...our friend...

Dhruv looked up:oh hi!!!

Moti:hi...

Sanyu:Bandar kaha gaya???

Jiggy:aa raha hai khud ka drink leke...

Rd:ok so guys dis is my sister moti...

Moti:means I am vani...vani malhotra...

And glass breaking sound came from back...

Dey all turned to find Rahul standing dere in shock

Vani just gave a smile

Sanyu:hey u fine???kya huya???

Vani:may be shocked???

Rahul came out of trance:nothing..just it slipped...

Rd:moti, he is Rahul...sanyu's bff...last time nhi mil payi thi na

Vani:yeah...just saw him drunk ...hello..she said wid attitude

Rahul:I was not drunk purposely...galti se bhang ka glass liya tha..and hello..nice to meet you VANI...he emphasized more on her name

Parth:oye aunty ne 2 baar miscall di hai...chal ghar!!!

Yoyo:arrey per compi kaun jita???

Rahul:sanyu is more hot...

Jiggy:kyu???rd bhi hot lag raha hai???

Kausto:sanyu ne acha dance kiya

Yoyo:wo to rd ne bhi kiya!!!

Jiggy:to chalo third game...

Rd and sanyu looked at each odr and den at the orange juice glasses...

Sanyu just nodded

Rd:ok start...and both picked each a glass and starting gulping it ...dey finished at same time

Sanyu:yeee

Rd:jit gaye

Sanyu:arrey ek hi time tha

Rrd:isiliye to kaha jit gaye...

Sanyu:awww...she poked his nose and he pinched hers

Parth:so its decided dey both won

Arpi:now home...

Sanyu:ok...dey all walked out ...

Rd and Rahul moved to bring their own cars

Rahul:chalo sanyu,kausto,yoyo...chal jiggy tujhe bhi chor dunga

Parth:dhruv how will u go????

Vids:sanyukta k sath chale jaona...atlast u r her p.a r8???

Sanyu:p.a???

Vids:kyu tumhe nhi pata kya???ki tum ab owner ho gayi ho and he is ur p.a????she smirked at dhruv

Rd:vids I told u not to tell her

Vids:sorry slip of tongue...dey all looked at sanyu tensed while sanyu maintained a straight face

Rd:dekho sanyukta...we are sorry but uncle and all decided not to tell u before and dats why we all used to hide

Sanyu:the newspapers r8???even u all didn't let me watch tv...

Rahul:taki tu gussa na ho...pls gussa mat ho...

All were telling her something or the odr except vidhushi

Sanyu:stop..she shouted and a silence followed

Dhruv:dekho wo...but sanyu showed her palm

Sanyu:mei bolu????everyone nodded

Sanyu:thank you...I know why u all did it and no need of explanation ok!!!and even I know I am the owner but I didn't know dat dhruv is my p.a..thankyou vidhushi for informing dat I got a friend to assist me...

All smiled except vids , who made a face seeing her failed plan

Sanyu:aur rd's mom also told me ..and I am going to take the responsibility..ok???now u all can speak...

Rahul jumped on her hugging her

Rahul:god kitna dara diya tha...tujhe icecream trt mere taraf se...ok!!!

All came an hugged her...rd came at last

Sanyu:thank you

Rd:wo kyu

Sanyu:dopeher ko wo sab bolne k liye...thank you so much...

Rd:don't worry...I will be there beside u wenever u need ok!!!even Friday jab tum papers sign karogi u will get rd as ur friend not as the ceo of enemy company...

Sanyu:thank you...she hugged him again

Rd:ok so now lets go back...vidhushi tum kaise jaogi??/

Dhruv:no prob...she can go wid me...mei drop kar dunga..i have my own car here...ok na vidhushi???he gave a look to vidhushi and she nodded ...

Rd:ok den bye...chal moti gari mei beith...

Rahul:bye arpi ,parth and rd...bye dhruv...and he got back to driver's seat...he looked at the rear mirror to see vani looking at it...

He looked back once and den adjusted the mirror such that it doesn't show her reflection

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Next day..

Hospital

Vani and sanyu was wid mansi and dr shukla ...

Dr shukla:see dr snayukta we have to wait till tomorrow morning for reports...ok so is she married???

Mansi:no!!!!!

Dr shukla made a face as she is old and even have those old days values

Sanyu:she means,she is engaged and next month she will be marrying

Vani:but...

Sanyu:wait ..let dr complete na...u say dr

Dr shukla:u sure r8????

Sanyu:yeah!!!even they are married but registered one...function karke next month hoga!!haina mansi???

Mansi gave a fake smile nodding his head

Dr shukla:oh den its ok...warna aj kal ki larkiya bf k sath hi shadi se pehle hi copulation mei believe karte hai...

Vani:copulation????wats dat

Sanyu:suhag rat vani...

Dr shukla:ok ...lets meet tomorw and den I will suggest medicines

Sanyu:ok..thank you so much...

Dr shukla:its ok...anyways..i have a case for you...dr manoj patient no.212...a 13 year old child diagonised wid stomach cyst...her reports will come today...and u will assist dr manoj in operation

Sanyu:me???dat too my first operation wid a child????

Dr shukla:yes!!!so???now don't tell me u r nervous!!!dont see age .see the disease and do ur job ok...

Sanyu just nodded and came out wid mansi and vani

Mansi:thank you so much di..

Sanyu:huh????

Mansi:wo mere liya jhuth bola apne!!!!thank you

Sanyu:hmmm...ok...

Vani:itna kyu nervous ho rahe ho????sab thik hoga!!!!relax ok!!!

Sanyu:yeah thanks..ok now have to rush..bye...

She went to few odr patients and den she headed towards room no 212

Dere was lying a girl of 13 year wid two braids on each side reading some story book

Sanyu:hello beta

Girl:beta???mei larki hu...beti bolo

Sanyu smiled at her:sorry...ok so pari r8???

Grl:yup???and you???

Sanyu:sanyukta...

Pari:nice name...waise ap mujhe wo injection nhi doge na???aur wo karwi dawayi???

Sanyu:kyu??apko nhi lena kya???to phir thik kaise honge???

Pari:nhi khana...acha tv on kar do na...wo mera hero ayega abhi tv pe...

Sanyu opened the tv

Sanyu:kaunsa hero???

Pari:arrey wo pichle saal ki repeat telecast ho raha hai!!!wo karan arora

Sanyu:wo kaun hai??

Pari:arrey ap nhi jante karan arora ko????he is so handsome...ap tv nhi dekhte kya????she stood up on bed

Sanyu:thora thora...kaun hai??

Pari:arrey wo dekho...she pointed towards tv ...karan arora asli nam randhir singh shekhawat

Sanyu looked at tv where rd was shown dancing on a peppy no. wid girls...

She smiled dreamily and quickly came out of trance

Pari:bola tha na he is handsome

Sanyu:itni choti ho aur abhi se yeh sab dekhte ho???

Pari:to kya???sab dekhte hai...

Sanyu gave her medicines

Pari:nhi nhi nhi...nhi khaungi...

Sanyu:ok lets make a deal...umm agar apka hero apse milne aye to khaoge???

Pari:ap jante ho use????

Sanyu:ha...to bolo manzur

Pari:ofcourse...uske liye kuch bhi...

Sanyu smiled and called rd from her cell

Rd was in his cabin drinking coffee after a successful meeting...he picked up the call smiling all along seeing the caller

Sanyu:hey..u busy????

Rd:kyu???kya huya???

Sanyu:u have a fan over here..so come here in hospital 212

Rd:wat???u r kidding r8??

Sanyu:nhi...sachi..ek choti si fan hai..13 saal ki...come now ..she will take her medicine after seeing you...so u coming??

Rd:ok...just give me 15 mins ok!!!

Sanyu:ok..bye...she cuts the call...so pari 15 mins and den ur hero here!!!!cool???

Pari:very cool...she sat down enjoying rd's serial

While sanyu attended other patients

Rd came inside 212 after 17 mins wid sanyu

Rd:hey!!!

Pari looked at the door and jumped in excitement seeing her hero dere...

Sanyu:hey don't jump ha...bed tuth jayega

Rd went upto her and gave her a hug...

Pari:ap sachi mei rss ho????hawww...

Rd:ha sachi mei hu pari...

Pari:nam kaise jana???

Rd:wo khadus dr ne diya

Pari:kaun yeh!!!sanyukta didi...she is sweet..

Sanyu gave her the medicine and pari tuk it smiling all the while

Sanyu:pata hai pari..tumhara hero bhi yaha the...mere diye giye har ek dawai ,injections sab lete the...

Pari:sachi!!!

Rd made a face and soon nodded as sanyu glared him

Sanyu :rd ...listen once...rd walked upto her

Sanyu:rd I have to attach dis saline ...pls talk wid her and I will push the syringe..ok .talk as much as possible...

Rd:is choti si bachi ko injection dena zaruri hai

Sanyu;god rd!!!!tum ek injection se darte ho!!!!now go and talk...go...she pushed him and got busy wid syringes

Pari and rd was busy talking while sanyukta inserted the iv lock in her left hand vein...she took the saline bottle...hanged it and den took the pipe to insert it in syringe in her hand...she looked at them once and placed the pipe inside ...and quickly caught her hand so dat she do not move...

Pari:ahhh...

she started crying in pain...rd stood up and hugged her and said sweet things...

Sanyu rubbed her hands slowly slowly miniimising her pain...

Rd:ho gaya pari..see...now don't move ok...

Pari:ap gande ho...she looked at sanyukta

Sanyukta made a pleading face

Pari:apne yeh kyu ghusaya???pehle hi pet mei dard hai aur ab hath mei

Sanyu:sorry...she held her ears

Pari:no...

Rd:see pari didi ki koi galti nhi haina...wo to kam kar rahi hai...aur u r strong na to yeh injection kya hai!!!!

Pari:no...aur ap inka kyu side lete ho???girlfriend hai kya???

Rd nodded in yes while sanyukta's eyes widened

Rd:larki jo meri bestest friend hai...

Pari:hmmm ...pata hai I too have a best friend...wo bhi apka fan hai...

Rd;acha???

Sanyu huffed and smiled at them

Rd smiled at her reassuring her that everything is fine while sanyu got busy in file...

After 20 mins

Sanyu;thanks for coming...

Rd:its ok...so still nervous???

Sanyu:obvio na..my frst operation and dat too wid such a small girl...agar kuch galat kar diya????

Rd held her hands :don't worry much..sab theek hoga ok...we all are there for you...tum acha karogi...

Sanyu:I hope so...thank you...she side hugged him while rd said :I love you...

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Precap: Friday...dat too 13th friday...lets see if its good or bad

ok so vani (asapom)i gues u like it!!!!!

Edited by chowanisha - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Woh... me first...
well! it was an intense update... plus d double dhamaka... u penned each and every persons emotions, nuiances, actions and reactions so well.
Especially sanyu hiding her mother's eyes took my heart away... it ttold how much she's hurt...
i m loving the way rd and sanyu are bonding..
Hope mansi's pregnancy doesn't create any misunderstanding and the precap... untill next Thursday... bye...will be eagerly waiting

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