sandhir ff :MISERANS..LAST PART AND EPILOGUE(112)

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Molli12

@Molli12

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

interesting very very interesting... excited for the story...

Quote

Vanii

@-Ms.Rocker-

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Heyyy ! :D
Its a very different character sketch.. Interesting.. Do continue soon.. Will be waiting.. :)
Love,
Amanda ^_^

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

purnima209

@purnima209

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

wow amazing characters yar and ha randhir is actor

sanyu is intern oh hospital that means doctor and vsrdhan is family Dr. of randhir and hospital head of sanyus wrking place

have to see connection and how they will connect at each other and how they will fall in love have to see... sounds amazing yar jaldhi post na yar parts

and ek req yar pls pls pls pls post ur another two FF daily yar eagrly waiting and ha for this FF also have to wait eagerly so pls upload parts soon na dear pls... . big req yar

Quote

Ayesha

@BeyondDreams

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

I just cannot believe it,,,

Jab tune yeh mujhe dedicate kiya in a way I'm posting a comment on PAGE 4..!!!

I'm sooo sry nisha...

Maaf karde...

Coming to the update...

Like I said PEHLE hi ke the idea is fab...

N mujhe abhi bhi believe nahi hora ke u got this idea wen u were asleep...

Jhuti ... Par of u got it in that way it's amazing man...

Itna bada comment kyuki u r one if my favourite writers..
N tune mujhe mention kiya ...:p

Love u
Ayesha...

Quote

Samyuktha Krishnan

@samyukthakrish

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

nice... update soon.. thanks for the pm..

love

samyuktha😳

Quote

Pariha khanna

@draco_is_mine

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

you used a bit too many *WELL* which broke the essence of the word 🤣

anyway CS was great would like to read more

Quote

Ananya

@athena4

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Nice character sketch looking forward to read. 😊

Quote

Samarpita

@SamC

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Oho!! Actors n all haah!!! Mast!!!
Update asap!!!

Quote

Dhruvi Mehta

@dhruvi_parsh

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

hey
i loved it
eagrly waiting for the 1st part...
actors and doctors...wow...!!!!
seems interesting...
do update soonish...
thnx for pm
love
dhruvi

Quote

Anisha Chowdhury

@chowanisha

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#30

ok guys thnk u so much fr liking the cs...i hope u like the prologue too...

PROLOGUE

wat???mei???mei kaise????no ways kaustoki!!!meine aisa kabhi nhi kiya hai!!infact i dont even knw wat u guys ask!!!!

sanyukta ,the bubbly and messy girl ws runng around the whole rum frm her frnd kaustoki gvng her al lame reasons posible...

pls sanyu!!ma ane wali hai aur mujhe ghar mei rehna zaruri hai...pls chali ja mere jagah...kaustoki pleaded sanyu and atlast sat down on the couch of the hall

no ways...aunty ayegi to mei lene chali jaungi...

aaanncho!!!!aaancho!!!kaustoki sneezed...

sanyu:kya hua????sardi ho gayi!!!dawayi le le

kausto:doctor sanyukta aggarwal mujhe dawai nhi chahiye..its dust allergy u knw...

sanyu:pura kamra saaf hai...

kausto:wo wo
sanyu:tu natak kar rhi hai!!!kaustoki mei nhi jaungi...bas...

kaustoki:pls chali ja...pls...sirf jake kuch sawal puchna aur rahul video karega...

sanyu:rahul????use kya camera man bana diya!!!!

rahul enterd and sat wid dem on couch

kausto:kabhi to bell baja ke ghus

rahul:kabhi to darwaza band rakho...

kausto:arrey rahul yeh dekh na sanyu nhi ja rahi hai

rahul:kya????hume adhe ghante mei waha pohochna hoga...

kausto;kya????interview sham ko thi na !!phir???mummy ka flight bhi adhe ghante mei hai

sanyu:mei to gayi hospital...aj kuch log ane wale hai ...

rahul:sanyu teri aj chutti hai...pls chal mere sath...kuch gadbad nhi hogi...sirf sawal puchna aur chali jana...

sanyu:no ways ...agar pakri gayi to????na baba na

kausto;omg...mummy ka flight land hone wala hai...

sanyu:mei aunty ko...

kausto:no ways...mummy ka order hai ki mei jau...sanyu pls pls pls plsss...

ok dis ws the prologue of three frnds...convincing sanyu to take an interview in place of kaustki ...lets see if sanyu agrees to dem and at last where the interview ends or the meetng wud lead to several meetings like dat...