A DREAM OR A NIGHTMARE(Dark Mature)THREAD-1 TILL PART 13A - Page 24

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Posted: 11 years ago
Daya karke aaj hi update pleeaase. :3
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Ms.Rocker-

SAMRIDDHHII ! How do you write such awesome FF's ? Would you mind telling me your secret ? *puppy face*

Jaldi update karo. Mare jaa rahe hai log!

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Vani :) - Real name. (Previously Amanda - I introduced myself as that)

OH HO... ITNA UPAR MAT CHADAO YRRR
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Originally posted by: Reminiscence

Daya karke aaj hi update pleeaase. :3

WHY ARE U BEGGING LIKE THIS ... I UPDATE DAILY,,,, M JUST UPDATING...
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Originally posted by: samridhigoodiez

WHY ARE U BEGGING LIKE THIS ... I UPDATE DAILY,,,, M JUST UPDATING...


LOL your I save your FF update for reading before I go to sleep. :)
Im SO unto this. :D
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Posted: 11 years ago

SO GUYS AM UP AGAIN WITH THE NEXT PART OF A DREAM OR A NIGHTMARE... BUT BEFORE POSTING THE NEXT PART I WANT TO CLEAR SOME DOUBTS I READ IN UR COMMENTS...

1. SANYU IS NOT EMPLOYED IN RANDHIR'S COMPANY.

2. RANDHIR IS NOT FALLING FOR SANYU... HE STILL HATES HER... THAT CONCERN IS ONLY OUT OF HIS GUILT...

3. RANDHIR IS A BIGGER BEAST THAN PARTH IN THIS STORY...WHICH U VL ALL GET TO SEE IN MY UPCOMING TWO PARTS..

4. THIS STORY HAS 3 PHASES... HATE THEN LUST AND THEN LOVE... SO PHASE 1 THAT IS HATE IS GOING ON THESE DAYS...

THAT'S IT...

PART -6 JUST PAIN

Sanyu was in randhir arms... Her face was buried in his broad chest... She was crying crying and crying... She was trembling, shivering out of fear... she had clutched randhir's shirt from his back...

Due to continues crying tear hers had made a big patch on his shirt...

He was rubbing her back... squeezing it... patting it... Just to sooth her... even randhir cudnt controlled his tears... He bent his lips down towards her ear...

Randhir: sanyuktaaa... Basss... Everything is fine,,,,, he is gone now... Shhh... (he placed a kiss on her hair...)he then kept his one hand on her head...

Sanyukta's cries were increasing so as her grip on randhir's shirt becoming more tight...even he cud feel that... In her tears all her pains and sorrows were oozing out...even randhir didn't stop her... then suddenly she left him with a jerk and took 3 steps back... randhir cudnt understand wat has happened to her... all he cud see her red eyes,,, red face,,,, wet cheeks... trembling lips...her messy hair...

Sanyu: sssorry...( she stammered) and ran upstairs to her room...

Randhir got scared... he followed her... But till then sanyu had locked her room...

Randhir sat her room... Sanyu looked at the room... she saw her family photo under broken frame... She took that photo and hugged it... she laid down and cried for the whole day... Randhir cud hear her cries now... her sobs were louder than before... Now day shifted to night but her cries never ended... she had just pain pain and pain in her heart , soul and mind,,,,, randhir was just sitting outside and slept there listening to her cries... after few hours sanyu also slept...

Then the whole house has a different kind of silence... a silence before a storm...

Next day sanyu woke up at 6:00 am... she was feeling dizzy... she didn't care to clean the mess created by vidhushi and went to washroom... she got ready to leave... Her head was spinning...

She opened the door and found that randhir was sleeping there,,,, she started coming down... Suddenly randhir wokeup and saw sanyu is going somewhere... he quicky ran and held her hand... they were at the middle of the stairs...

Randhir: kaha ja rhi ho...

Sanyu turned around... randhir was shocked to see her state,... He almost felt like dying...

Her eyes were red as blood... Swollen as never before... tears were still flowing... her locks were wet sue to tears and sticking to her cheeks... She was all red... He cud feel her hand was hot... She had a fever too... she was still shivering...

Randhir came fwd to hug her again but just then sanyukta took one step down to avoid him... Randhir felt embarrassed and rejected...

Sanyu: ( in her weak voice still sobbing) mene... mene chori ni kari thieee...( she burst out in cry again)
randhir: no sanyuk

Sanyu: ( sanyu cuts him in between ) me sach bol rhi hu...me chor ni hu... And mene use thhappad mara kyoki usne mere sath...( before she cud complete her head started spinning and she was about to fall randhir held her shoulder...)

Randhir: oh my god...sanyukta are you ohk,,,???

Sanyu: ( she came back to her conscious and nodded)

She removed randhir's hand and came down...

Randhir: tum esi halat me kaha jar hi ho...?

Sanyu: ( without replying came out of the house) she went to kaustuki's house...she went to her and hugged her and cried her heart out... she slept there... kaustuki took full care of her... she passed 2 days at her place... during those two days randhir was hell worried about her... he just wanted to know where she has gone... He doesn't even have her mobile no. ... he tried searching her everywhere but he didn't have any clue of her... He had no clue of kaustuki...

It was 7 in the evening... Randhir still waiting for sanyu...

Randhir to himself: bus ab bhot hogya... kaha gyi ye ladki..., poloce me complaint to karani hi padegiii... and he started heading towards the door... Just then the door opened and randhir saw sanyu entering... He was so relieved to see her... He ran to her but she just ignored him and went straight to her room,... he wanted to knw where she was for last two days... Why did she go there... etc etc... his mind was blasting with these questions... but at the same time he was happy that she was looking much much better than before...

Next day randhir was as usual waiting for her to come down... She came down exactly at her usual time... Seeing her coming down randhir also came running towards her... he just want to see her face properly... and he bumped into her/... sanyu didn't expect this... She frowned and looked up at his face...

Randhir: kyat um dekh k ni chal sakti...

Sanyu: ( didn't have the strength to fight) am sorry... ( she looked down and opened the door and came out of the house)

Randhir also followed her... Randhir stopped to lock the door... When he finished locking the door... he turned around and saw sanyu is standing in the middle of the passage area and parth is standing just in front of her... Randhir came running and just stand in the middle of parth and sanyu... Covering sanyu behind him...

Randhir: wat do u want now...??

Parth: randhir m here to apologise...

Just then sanyukta held randhir's elbow by both her hands... randhir looked back and found sanyu was weeping looking... Her head was bent down and her eyes wre closed... Then he looked at parth...

Randhir: wat u did parth was completely wrong... I had never expected this from you... tu kese kisi b ladki k sath esa kar sakta h... ( sanyu still holding his elbow...)

Parth: randhir yrr am sry... Sanyukta listen( heading towards sanyu... just then both randhir and sanyukta moved a little back to avoid parth) m sry m realy very sorry...

Randhir now cud hear sanyu's sobs... her grip on his elbow became more tight...

Randhir: parth leave... Right now... Dekh isse dur reh... Or ha ek or bat tune ye sab uss ladki k sath kiya jisse me iss duniya me sabse jada nafrat karta hu... Agar iski jagah vo ladki hoti jisse me sabse jada pyar karta to me tuje jaan se mar deta...

Sanyu heard this and left his elbow...her hand automatically fell down... she was numb...

Randhir felt that he was about to look back... then saw sanyu is running towards the main gate... She quickly took a taxi and disappeared... randhir knew why she behaved like this... By then parth also left... Randhir was alone in the passage... he then took out his car and drove to his office...

Sanyu came to her office... she tried to control her tears... she quickly grabbed kaustuki's hand and dragged her to the washroom... she hugged her and told her the whole story... She consoled her...

Days passed ... sanyu now had recovered from that incident... Randhir also did not try disturb her anymore... Parth and randhir were again frnds... but now their bonding was not as before... Randhir was still upset with him...

Sanyukta remembered that randhir's birthday is just in two days... She wanted to be with him... but she also knew he will not like it...she came down... she called randhir...

Sanyu: ( taking a bundle of notes) ye iss month ka rent...

Randhir: ( took that) hmmm...

Randhir: listen... Parso meri ankho k samne b mat ana... I don't want to see ur ugly face and spoil my mood that day... Got that...

Sanyu nodded and she came up... She felt bad... Sanyu to herself: he finds me ugly that his mood gets spoiled by looking at my face,,,, fyn I will not show my face to u... and spoil u birthday... I promise randhir... ( a lone tear escaped from her eyes)...

A night before his birthday sanyu took her stuff and came to kaustuki's house... she stayed there...

Next day in the morning... randhir was happy... it was his birthday... all his family and frnds wished him at night still many ppl were calling him to wish him... But he was waiting for sanyukta to wish him... After all it was his first bday after their wedding... His heart wanted her to be there but his mind was totally against his heart... He looked up at her room... There was no sign of her...

Randhir to himself: itna late hogya h... kahi sach me to kahi ni chali gyi... with this he heard the doorbell ringing... he opened the door and found a delivery boy was standing there... he gave him a card , a small red rose and a pastry box...

Randhir took them inside the house... he was happy after seeing such gifts...

He sat on the couch... He first open the box... he found one chocolate pastry in it ... he was very happy,,, he knew this gift is sent by a person who really knows him very well... Then he looked at the rose... he kept them aside and opened the card...

" HAPPY BIRTHDAY RANDHIR...

MAY GOD BLESS YOU...

MAY U ACHIEVE WHAT EVER U DESIRE...

MY WISHES ARE ALWAYS WITH YOU...

MAY YOU LIVE A LONG LIFE...

WITH NO SORROWS ,NO GLOOM , NO WORRIES

I JUST WISH UR LIFE JUST FILLS WITH HAPPINESS , JOY AND LOVE...

STAY BLESSED...

SANYUKTA..."

Randhir just choked reading the last word,,,,, SANYUKTA... SANYUKTA...

Randhir to himself :Usne muje ye SAB,,,, kyo kar rahi ho tum esa... Why are you doing this to me sanyukta...

He kept the card on the table... He wanted to threw the pastry nut he didn't he ate that...

In the evening vidhushi and other frnds came to his house... (parth was definitely was not the parth of the celebration)

Vidhushi : happy bday randhir...

Randhir: thanks and they both hugged...

Vids: vo ghar pe to ni h na..?

Randhir: ( made a face) no...

Vids: kaha gyi...??

Randhir: muje kya pta kaha gyi... Mene kaha tha use yaha se jane k liye,,, to vo chali gyi...

Vids: usne tuje wish b ni kiya...

Randhir: kiya tha... Card bejwadiya tha usne ...( He showed her the card... ) man to kar rha h phad k fek du isse but

Vidhushi quickly snatched the card from his hand and tore it in several pieces... And blew them in air...

Randhir: ye kya kiya tune vidhushi...

Vids : vahi jo tera mann kar rha tha,,,,( she left)

Something inside randhir ached... He looked down at the torn pieces of the card... He assembled them and put them in his pocket...

The whole night they partied...

Next morning sanyukta opened the door... Till then randhir was awake... he looked at her... sanyu saw the whole living area was messed up,,,,,, she took one more step fwd then she saw a torn piece of her card was lying on the floor... She felt very bad... She thought that randhir hate her so much that he cannot even bear a small greeting... She looked at randhir... her eyes wre wet... randhir understood that wat she is thinking,,,,her eyes said it all... Then

Sanyu: am sry...

Randhir: for wat??

Sanyu: about the card... it wont happen again...

With this she left for her room... randhir stood there dumbstruck.,...

Precap: SANYU HUGGED RANDHIR... RANDHIR PUSHED HER... SANYU BLEEDING... NEXT DAY COPS AT RANDHIR'S HOUSE...

So guys this is it,,,, HOPE U ALL LIKED IT... PLZ PLZ PPLZ LEAVE UR FEEDBACK BELOW... AND ALSO PPL U RESS THEIR COMMENT PLZ UNRESS SOON


Edited by samridhigoodiez - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ress
Aachaa sammy aap na
Joh mature hoga uske upar mature bada bada likhdena
Okk main woh parts skip kardungi
I'm so in love with this story ki mujhse jhoda nhi jayega

Okk🤣

Update was too good sanyu kitni weak hai isme she should be strong
Vidhushi gadhi how dare she tore the card..??
Rd ke kaise dost hain
Waise parth baba tu toh gaya kyunki we all know that sandhir is the end game tab parth ko rd nhi chhodega...!! 😆

Will wait for ur next
And yeaa MATURE headings zarur type krna agr kahin ata hai toh
Okhie🤣

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Edited by Sheron13rokerz - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
omg.. i literally cried... 😭 show some concern yaar.. ek scene happy wala dalo next update mein plz... however even this update was good.. 😊
love
samyuktha😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
I have not read the part yet but I am sure it's gonna be awesome...I just luv ur writing!!!
😊 thank you for pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Reminiscence


LOL your I save your FF update for reading before I go to sleep. :)
Im SO unto this. :D

HEY THATS SO SWEET OF U,,,,, GUD NIGHT...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Jchawla

I have not read the part yet but I am sure it's gonna be awesome...I just luv ur writing!!!
😊 thank you for pm..

WHY ?? READ IT KNW... AND THEN TELL ME HOWS IT,,,

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