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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Krishana Tulsi

yay!!!...i hope ur gonna continue with this fan fic reallll soon coz i wanna kno more!!!!...hehehe 😳 😛

yes i am - likee right now =]
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Dry Tears

Chapter Two

Dolce Vita

September 18, 2006

7:16 PM

Ahad laced his fingers with kripa's, and looked into her eyes. While she just sat there, grinning, the entire time.

"Ahad, say something!!" Kripa whined.

"Okay, well do you like this place?" Ahad said, gesturing towards the restaurants interior. It was a cozy place, private, and nice. It looked old, yet it was comfortable.

"Yes I do," Kripa said, then after a pause, began talking again. "Aw, Ahad, this morning I thought you had completely forgotten about our 1 year anniversary!"

It was true, Ahad forgot to call and wish her a happy anniversary this morning, vice versa kripa had to call him first instead. And Ahad had first asked her out, when they started junior year, and they were friends since they were sophomores.

"Well, I made it look like I forgot, so I could surprise you." Ahad said, softy.

"You're very sweet!" Kripa said, leaning over and softly brushing his lips with hers.

Soon, their orders arrived; they ate and then left to go to Ahad's house.

Kripa shifted in the black seat of Ahad's red mustang to face him.

"Ahad lets go to your house and watch a movie!"

"Sure, but no chick flicks!" Ahad said, placing his hand on kripa's.

"No!! I want to watch A Walk to Remember! Please please please?" Kripa pleaded.

"Kripa! C'mon, you know I hate stupid chick flicks!" Ahad groaned.

"please?" Kripa said in a small voice, giving him the puppy dog look.

"Fine you win." Ahad said, throwing his head back.

Kripa gave him a bratty smile.

"oh you little, spoiled-"

Kripa cut him off "I love you Ahad!" Kripa said, sounding sexy.

"I love you too babe"

Minutes later Kripa sat there, cuddled with Ahad on his couch, watching her favorite movie of all time. Luckily, her parents and Ahads parents were gone for the weekend. It was some bizarre Indian thing, and Angad's parents had gone too!

She couldn't have loved life more than she did right now, here with ahad, the love of her life.

But something was going to go completely wrong. Something that would make life completely imperfect. Something, they had no idea was coming.

Kripa's Range Rover

September 19, 2006

2:46 PM

"Uhm Dean, do you think you could stop the car right here, I want to walk a little today" Kripa said to her driver.

"Sure" Dean replied.

Kripa only made use of Dean whenever she didn't feel like driving, most of the time, it was Kripa's little brother or older sister, dragging him everywhere!

Kripa got out of the car, leaving her Coach Tote in the car, along with everything besides her purse.

She plugged her ear buds in her ears and switched on her iPod, and began walking down her street. It was peaceful, with the crisp leaves cracking under her flip flops.

She was almost near her house.

"Hey you." Someone called out.

Kripa looked up, it was angad, she could never mistake his voice for someone else.

There, on the roof of his house, sat angad with his ipod on.

Minutes later, Kripa sat with Angad on the roof top.

"Angad, isn't it bizarre how You, Ahad and I are neighbors?" She said pointing to Ahad's house, which was in front of them, and Kripa's house which was next to them.

"yepp, it is!"

"I should get going, homework, dude! AP's hard this year!"

"I know! I can't stand it! i'm failing and its only the first week of school!"

"Leave it to you to fail first week of school angad"

They both chuckled and Kripa left to her own house.

She always found it weird how they were all best friends, or boyfriend and girlfriend in Ahad's case, and how her parents, and their parents were in the same community of Indian friends, not to mention their moms we best friends!


heyy guys! okay so i finally continued! i hope you guys liked it! comment pleasee!! Uhm, kay thanks!

byee byee
areej.
Edited by pakigal34 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#63
oh yeah - and i promise to continue sooner than the last time this time, and if yu read Words Unspoken, i'll continue that soon too 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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HEY AMAZIN PART! VERY COOL n a-k sitin on d roof n havin a lil chat aww dats cute 😛 keep up d BRILIANT work! wonderfuly ritten dude
xxMWAHxx
xx Saz xx
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Posted: 18 years ago
#65
yay...party...u continued!!!! 😆 😳 😆 ....its great!!!! continue soon look forward to more!!!! 😛
Edited by Krishana Tulsi - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#66
nice part n when is angad n kripa gonna fall 4 each other?
continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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cant wait till her life is NOT perfect.. then angad will come and woo her.. 😆 😆

continue sooonn
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great job cont soon!(sorry for the small comment still grounded)
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Posted: 18 years ago
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oo areej it was soo ogoood!! man i luved it! u culd probaly write a book and it would be a best seller...hehe 😆 but it was really good! so happy u cont! and now do anotehr part soooon!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: muqualp

great job cont soon!(sorry for the small comment still grounded)

aww its kayy - thanks!

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