Okay, so Mou, lemme be honest with you.. I kind of am a bit too biased, urm.. you know, for Arnav.. *smiling sheepishly*.. So.. No no! The story is awesome I mean a bang on like how really Khushi should have reacted or so..
I like the way Khush is taking her stand.. And the fact that you'v made it clear that doing so, is not a simple job for her either, he's her true & first love afterall.. But yeah, that true love should have trust her, or atleast confronted her, true.. I agree...
The most refreshing thing about this FF is, you are doing a fabulous job of showing how Arnav is wrong in coming to a conclusion based on one side of the story, but at the same time, letting bits by bits about why he is how he is and You know when most of the times Arnav is shown like this, as in repenting or realizing the facts, he kind of loses his aura, which I dint find here.. He's powerful, strong, enigmatic but beneath all that is that vulnerable guy whom he wants to be revealed to his wife.. And I loved that!
Yes, it took me time to sink the fact that this work is gonna be bittersweet but I loved this new flavor or rather new genre..
I am waiting to see how you are gonna shape this up or mould it into your vision.. Right now I'm in a state of my mouth shut, since the facts are on my face, I am loving this Khushi and you'v made it so strong and perfect that I am agreeing to her views and reactions, but there is also this part of me that wanna go cuddle Arnav..
So yeah, its quite intruiging and I'm waiting to see how you are gonna deal with the plot now that the facts are out on both sides.. *Pss.. Dont go too harsh on my Arnav haan? Acha teek hain, do whatever you want and make me stunned..*
Loved the update Mou.. If at all I made any sense above, then I'm doing good I guess.. The meds are too sedative yaar...
Oooh.. I forgot to mention! I loved the way you described the escape of Shyaam.. Like a dog with its tail between its legs? Seriously, Mou? Its too good buddy!!
Great job Mou hun!!!
Love&Hugs!
P.S:
I loved the sarcasm totally!
Arnav came to the point without beating around the bushes, "Why didn't you say anything this morning when I accused you for having an affair with Shyam?" he sounded as if he already knew that his accusations were never true.
And I was like, cummon Arnav! Believe her atleast now or Moumita is gonna suck you out of your life! :D
Khushi smiled sardonically and answered immediately, "Why would I do that?"
Jeez! I heard a KKGSR there! A perfect counter part of ASR you see.. Kinda goose bumping retort I must say...
But the bang on was:
"In your courtroom Mr. Raizada you are the accusation, you are the defense and YOU are the JUDGE yourself so the verdict you would serve would be the ultimate wasn't that for sure? Then why would I tire myself in useless counter attack. Anyways, in a month we are separating so it really doesn't matter what you think of me or what I say in my defense."
And I literally wanted to stand up and clap at her perfection! Wow man!! She's one heck of a woman!
And then there was this dialogues from IPKKND you'v used:
"Khushi itna easy hai tumhare liye? Is this so easy for you to end this marriage and go away?"
Khsuhi's eyes were blazing fire as she freed herself with superhuman strength and said in eerily calm voice, "Hum ne jo kiya, wo shadi nehi ek dhoka tha. Ek sauda tha. Chay mahine tak hume sharte nibhani thi, jo humne kiya ab tak. Ab ek mahine me sharte khatam, sauda khatam aur baki sab bhi khatam. So yes it is easy for me to end a sham marriage because I would be finally free form this pretention and suffocation for forever."
Trust me, the impact was totally different from what we had in the show.. This is too powerful!
You rocked it baby!!
Edited by Chaverah_TFC - 11 years ago
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