The rose of fire |sandhir ss| Chapter 9 updated

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Posted: 11 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: suumi
nyc update

thanks summi di

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Posted: 11 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: Helooohybye
ale le meri bhenaa aja 🤣
Haaan bhoot hun maan toh tha 4 baar nikalun paar 🤣

4 times omg😲🤣

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Posted: 11 years ago

#183

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update soon dear😭

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Posted: 11 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: cuteparsh
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Posted: 11 years ago

#185

yipppyyy you are going to update it

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Posted: 11 years ago

#186

mane!
main guarantee ke saath keh sakti hu ki randhir tera bhai hai...
I mean tu bhoot toh woh vampire. .

sab kuch gadbad ho raha hai. .
I dnt knw kaise. .
upar se yeh nayi roomie bhi tapak gayi..

and mujhe yeh storyline kuch jaana pehchaana lag raha hai.
eagerly waiting for the next part.
update soon.waiting

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Posted: 11 years ago

#187

RESERVED
UNRESERVED...

Are meri pyaar Potter is writing a fiction... Wow!! This has to be great...
Mujhe buddhu waali feeling aa rahi hai that I didn't came across this fiction earlier... *sighs* But it's better later then never, and I'm glad that I could make it up till here.

Ahhh!!!!! A supernatural fiction... Potter ji meri dil khush kar ditta tussi... Dil garden garden ho gaya...
I'm a crazy supernatural fiction lover and this story of yours is a treat a read with SanDhir as a pair is cherry on top.
I'm really speechless buddy... I never knew that you could write so damn amazingly. It's not that I had a doubt or something but my darling Potter writing such emotional chapters such magnificently is so overwhelming.
Randhir's and Sanyukta's portrayal is fantastic. I'm so in love with this vampire RD. I love the personification of Sanyukta's roomie as well. She is such a jovial girl...
The dialogues, to be very frank, are mind- blowing. I mean the dialogues bring out the true essence of this fiction.

Yeh kya twist daal dia behna.!!! I hope RD doesn't hurt Sanyukta in wake of his madness.
Aur yeh new roomie, Meghna... Mujhe kuch gadbad lagta hai...
Well, I really can't wait to know more,...
Next update jaldi jaldi karing...

Regards
Keya

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Anushka Mukherjee

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Posted: 11 years ago

#188

bhoot i read the ff today its relly superb year lovely awesome parts.

please pm me when you updet your next part.updet asap.😳👏

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Posted: 11 years ago

#189

...as the peon said vardhan sir called them ..one thing clicked boths mind ...both looked at each other and spoke

"Aab tumne kya kia ...kya maine"bith said in unison

"Tum dono ladai band karo warna vardhan sir mujhe maar deneg" peon said seeing this sight ...

vardhan sir cabin:

"Sir apne humein bulaya"sanyukta said gaining courage ...

"Patience miss aggarwal patience"said vd sir wiping his specs ..

"Sir iss aur expect bhi kya kia ja shakta hai"

"Tumhe kisine pucha kya"

"Maaf kardo galti hogayi ...huh"

"Enoughhh shut up both of uh"

"Sorry sir" both said in unison ..

"Leave it ...as uh both know freshers party is to be arrived"

"Haan sir paar"

"Let me complete sanyukta ...where was i ..haan ..freshers party ke loye kuch saman chahiye ...as ur seniors are not here ..uh both take the money and bring the things think as a punishment for ur behaviour today .."

"Sir mein is farzi ke saath kahin nahi jara hun"

"Farzi kis ko bola uhhh uh mcp"

"Listen stay in ur limit"

"Enough i said ..do uh both want me to suspend uh"

"Noo noo sir hum rahe hein" said sanyukta dragging rd out side

Outside:

"Listen mein tum jaise idiot ladki ke saath kahin nahi jara hun "

"Even i am not interested but surely tumhe bhi suspend nahi hona ryte"

"Soo"

" kya soo chalo ab we have no other choice ..chalo"

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Both went outside ...nah not on bike ...little far market ..padal chale gaye 🤣 ..saving fuel man

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They went to the shop and brought the requirements ...while returning ..sanyu felt little thirsty ...

"Randhirr .wo.. Pani hai kya"

"Mein kya tumhe pure it ka agend lagata hoon...nahi hai mere paas "

"Randhir plzz na kahin se paani lado plzz chal chal ke bura haal hogaya hai mera"

"Dekhoo" but he stopped those pleading eyes of her it reminded him of maitreyi ...just the way she used to make puppy face ...gawd again he was loosing it ...stop it rd she is not MAITREYI ..rd thought to himself ...

"Okay wait let see ki kahin koi shop hai" ..(let me teel uh guys ...they are now far from fite and both market ..beech ka hi kuch aur abhi jungle ke paas hain .)

Rd returning ..

"Paani mila ?"

"Nahi ..nahi mila paani"

"Kyaa ..okay wait jungle mein koi na koi talab hoga ." Saying this sanyu went into that deep forest whole again ..

"Sanyukta stop ..stop uh idiot " rd was so aware about this jungle ...

Sanyu got stopped due to a sudden force applied on her hand ...yes rd clutched it tight bring her back ..shall i say partially dragging her while this was happing a thorn git inside sanyus foot

"Ahh rd rd mera per plzz rukho stop stop"

"Kya hua" rd asked with little ..very little concern

"Wo kanta jubha ...khoon nikal raha hai sayad"said sanyu pointing towards her foot

"Dikhao" rd made sanyu sit in stone and slightly looked at her foot

Sanyu had now little twisted her foot making the wound visible to rd ..

Now rd was having a hard time to resist his tthirst ...he always controlled when he sees human blood but it was like her blood was irrestible ...he was having a hard time but some how he controlled it ..and took her foot in his hand and with water which in the lake he washed her wound ...a strand of hair fell on her face ...

His hand automatically lifted up and was about to push that strand ..a small eyelock happened ..it soon got broken ..and rd also brought his hand ..down ...

"Chalo ab bahut time waste kardia" said rd standing up ..

"Mein nahi chal shakti ..its paining "

"Kyaa...gawd drama again.." ..

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Thank uh guys hope uh like it ...chodo i guess koi nahi liking it ...

Chota hai i know but ..my main exams are going and also i have fever so sorry

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KAJAL

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Posted: 11 years ago

#190

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Yosh! Moi first *smirks proudly*

Oye Potter! What was this huh?? Ittu sa update... Ab mera dimaag kaam kaise karega???
Ohkie! Now keeping my ranting apart, Potter behna I just loved this update.
I was so expecting some SanDhir bickering in the show but guess what, you have sated me. I'm so glad that this chapter had ample of SanDhir bickering... Moi so khush...
I liked Vardhaan's role here. His role as a cupid in your story is praise-worthy.
Ah!! Yeh kya kia behna... Mera dil tod dia. SanDhir scene k beech mein tune pause daal dia.
I loved this chapter from the deepest corner of my heart.
I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter.
But now focus on your studies and get good marks... Cause good marks= lamba aur accha chapter with more SanDhir... Am I right?
ALL THE VERY BEST FOR YOUR EXAMS

Regards
Keya

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