Sandhir Os 'I LOVE U'

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See guys as its my first try toh plzz apne shoes sandals ya joh bhi phne huye ho woh utar kr mandir samaj kr age padhna aur hain aisi jagah se padhna jahain se kitchen durr ho🤣

Yeh os main kuch logon ko dedicate krna chahungi-Sneha who asked me to write this. Macchar joh mujhe kabhi chain se jeene nhi degi. Bhoot irritate krti hai pr samajhti bhi hai. KK iske baare mein toh bolna hi bekaar hai. Paani n Alloo pagalpanti mein mere jodi daar😆 i love u all guys. Aur bhi bohot hai agr naam likhne lagi toh OS bhul jaungi.😆
Accha toh main shuru krti hun

Jhelle na plzz...!


Accha yeh os on-going track pr kya SHQ ke plot se hi alag hai characters mein thode changes ho sakte hain...😆

I'm a kid toh abhi apne thoughts english mein sahi se express nhi kr paati so in many/much places its written in hindi
Enjoy..!!

I LOVE U..!

FITE Boys Hostel, Morning
5:45 a.m
Sun was shining and birds were chirping pr apne Paaji abhi bhi kharraten marr soo rhe hain.
Thadaaamm

Tabhi usspr paani girjaata hai..

Yoyo(still sleepy): Abe kaun hai joh mujhe meri kaustoki dream se jagaata hai*rubbing eyes*

Rd *folds hands in front*

Yoyo sees RD and gots a bit shock .

Yoyo(shocked): Are..! Randhir paaji aap yahain iss waqt. Iss naachiis se koi gustakhi ho gyi hai kya..

Rd: Yoyo mujhe tujhse ek kaam krwana hai

Yoyo: Apke liye kuch bhi aap bass kaam batiye baki sab main krdunga..*confidently*

Rd: Toh sun...

He tells his plan..!

Rd: Kaam hojaana chahiye..!

Yoyo: Aapke liye toh bande ki jaan haazir hai kaam toh bohot mamuli cheez hai (filmy)

Rd: Theek hai ab zyada drama mat kr wrna kaustoki ko "kaustoki dream's" ke baare mein pata chal jayega..!

Yoyo(scared): Nhi...! Nhi paaji aap aisa kuch nhi karenge wrna jiggy ki jagah woh MERI bhabhi...!! Nhiii

Rd(putting hand on his shoulder): Chinta mat kr aaj ki shaam nikal jaye toh teri bhi setting krdunga...!

Both laughs merrily.

Writers note: In this OS Randhir and Yoyo are best of frnds...😆

FITE premises, Corridor
5:50 p.m

Sanyu was heading bach to hostel with hands full of red roses when suddenly out of know where Yoyo appeared, handed her a chit and a rose and was going to leave when Sanyu catched him and...

Sanyu(angrily): Yoyo ...!! Yeh sab kya hai tumhare chamche subah se harr ek ghante ek rose dete hain..? Bata sakte hoo kyun*folds her hands*

Yoyo(scared): Oji yeh*smiles*...ji woh aap yeh chit padhiye na sab samaj jayengi(tries to smile)

She thinks and sees the chit in her hand meanwhile our paaji goes 9 2 11😆

Come to the terrace at 6:15 Xactly. Neither early nor late

Sanyu(herself): Yeh kya battameezi hai. Samajta kya hai jisne yeh bheja hai. Main bhi dekhti hun kya krlega agr main late jaun. huh..!!

She leaves for the hostel.

6:15 p.m

Sanyu(herself): Time toh ho gya hai main abhi niklun toh 10 mins. lagenge theek hai main chalti hun

Saying so she fets ups feom the study table.

Kaustoki: San-yu where are u goin tum...iss waqt kahain...ja rii ho..?

Sanyu(hurrily): Kausto..! Abhi tym nhi hai baad mein bataungi bye..!

At Terrace
6:30 p.m

Randhir: Yeh samajti kya hai maine saaf-saaf likha tha ki na late hona hai na jaldi ana hai fir bhi yeh ladki kabhi kuch sahi se nhi kr sakti..!

Tabhi there was a voice of opening the door.

Randhir awaaz sunte hi chhup jata hai(himself): Lagta hai aagyi..!

Sanyu: Koi hai *looks left and right* Ajeeb insaan hai bulata bhi hai aur ata bhi nhi Kahin mere late hone ki wajah se woh chala roh nhi gya Mujhe kya use hi bolna tha joh bhi bolna tha

She was abt to leave when the projector started showing the FB's of sandhir. She just stood there while RD came from the backside and stood behind her.

Projector ended on this pic:-


Sanyu(herself): Randhir..?

Rd: (smiles) Hain..! (Back to MCP mode) Main kyun tum apne "Best Friend" ko expect kr rhi thi (sarcastically)

Sanyu(getting angry): Tum...tum kabhi nhi badal sakte aur tumhe Parth se problem kya hai..?

Rd: Tum parth ke alawa kisi aur cheez ke baare mein baat nhi kr sakti (holding her from shoulders)

Sanyu(not breaking eye contact): Kis liye bulaya tha mujhe..?

Rd(avoiding eye contact): Woh. ..woh ... Main... Maine tumhe iss liye bulaya tha

Sanyu: Kis liye..?

Rd: Taki mein bata sakun ki tum kitni badi L-O-O-S-E-R ho. Huh..!

Sanyu: Woh toh tum roz bolte ho pr kya yehi bolne ke liye tumne pura terrace sajaya tha.?

Rd: Hain toh usme kya hai meri marzi mujhe mann kia toh sajaya.
(Back to MCP mode🤣)& listen tum koi hope mein mat rhna ki maine comfess krne ke liye yeh sab kia..

Sanyu(folding her hands): Maine toh confession bola bhi nhi waise kis baat ka confession..?

Rd: Kisi cheez ka nhi (he turns to leave)

Sanyu catches his hand and in a nanosecond says: I LOVE U..!

Rd: Wt..? Kya kaha tumne (not able to understand wt just happened)

Sanyu(in a matter of fact): wohi joh bolne ke liye TUMNE mujhe yahain bulaya tha- I L-O-V-E U pr kh hi nhi paye

Saying so she poked her finger in his chest

Rd: Accha tum khna kya chahti ho ki 'The Randhir Singh Shekhawat' main I love u khne ki himmat nhi hai

Sanyu: Randhir..! Maanlo ki agr aaj main nhi khti toh tum yahain se chale jaate

Rd: Main yahain se... Jaa nhi rha tha woh toh main...

Sanyu: Woh toh tum...??

Rd: Main kuch lene jaa rha tha

Sanyu: Accha mujhe bhi batao kya lene jaa rhe the??

Rd: (taking out a small box) Yeh..!

Sanyu: Yeh kya hai..?

Randhir opens the box takes the ring and without thinking for a second..! He slipped the ring into her ring finger

Sanyu: Randhir yeh kya kia tumne tum jaante bhi isska matlab kya hai..?

Rd: Hain..! I know Sanyukta main jaanta hun isska matlab but ab tum suno that tumhari wajah se mujhe kya hogya hai

Sanyu(smiles): Kya ho gya hai..!

Rd: Raat mein neend nhi aati hai u are the cause for my sleepless nights..! Din mein daydream krta hun tumhari wajah se..! Concentrate krne ki koshish karun toh tumhari yaad aati hai Coz of u and..(sanyu cuts in between)

Sanyu: Aur joh bhi hota hai meri wajah se hota hai toh tumne mujhe yeh ring kyun phnayi...?

Rd(getting close): Coz mujhe in. Sab ki remedy mil gyi hai..!

Sanyu: Kaun hai woh ...?

Rd: (in her ear) Tum...? Becoz I LOVE U SANYUKTA...!

Sanyu: I love u too..!

And they both hug.

Next Day

Sandhir: Yoyo heemat kr we know ki kaustoki ab jiggy ke liye feel nhi krti hai just go and confess..!

Yoyo: Paaji yeh thi aapki madat mujhe khai mein gerrne ke liye aapne pajayiji ki bhi madat leli

Sanyu: Yoyo..! Jao ABHI...!!

Yoyo goes to kaustoki

Kaustoki: Kya hui hai yoyo..?

Yoyo: Ohh ji woh... main kh rha tha ki jee I LOVE U

Kaustoki(not at all surprized): I love u too..!

Yoyo: kya jee..? (Fully shocked)

Kaustoki hugs him and he hugs her back.

And behind them our sandhir are also hugging


P.s iss tharawaahik mein sameer naam ka chomu nhi tha😆

Ok guys, i know its a crap main tahe dill se maafi mangti hun agr yeh bura laga bekaar laga ya ghatiya laga. Theek thaak bhi lage toh plz comment krna and feel free to critizise me(baaki mana krte hain main hain kh rhi hun idiot me🤣)

Pairr padhti hun plz koi bhi dissapointing comment mat krna plzz..!
Edited by Sheron13rokerz - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago
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res
unres

this ws too cute 😳 & it ws too funny yr 🤣
write more...I likd ur imaginations 👏

& no chappals or nthng but a hug 🤗

btw am talking to u fr 1st, myself Avni 😳
pm me wen u write again
Edited by avniarpitha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res
abhi main pani wala padh rahi hu na *pouts*
UNRES.
Ruk. Pehle mujhe hassne de
🤣
Oh god! Mast tha yeh BOHOT!
Love u re for this AND dedicating to me too 🤣
EK AUR BAAT
🤣

"Rd: (smiles) Hain..! (Back to MCP mode) Main kyun tum apne "Best Friend" ko expect kr rhi thi (sarcastically)
Rd: Hain..! I know..."

Tune apna 🤣 epic Hain yaha bhi daal diya🤣🤣
🤣🤣🤣
Aww...🤣🤣 meri bholi si shaitaan bandar🤣 *hugs*
Do write more.
Okie?🤣

Love,
Machhar.🤣🤣

Edited by angel_anisha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ohhhooo
something serious this side...
resss

unressed... sheron...

its was hillarious... i luvd yoyo randhir convo...
n SanDhir realization...
ek dum hatke esshtyle me from u...
carry on buddy...

hahaha tere post me ress kr k mazaa agya...
😳
Edited by 123456me - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res..
tution hai aakar unres karti hun!
unres😆
wah kya os hai..
main humesha se yoyo ko rd ka best frnd dekhna chahti thi..
tune meri muraad puri kar di bandar🤣
tu anokhi bandar hai itna achcha likhti hai aur isse dedicate mujhe karne ke liye thanks..

kassh show mein bhi confession jaldi aaye...
bhai bhabhi ka confession likhte hue tujhe sharam nhi aayi??😆😆
aise hi likhti reh!!😃
Edited by Asapom - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res
unres

sheru..main Tujhe marne ni dungi..lo aa gyi mujhe
wow..kamal h

randhir n yoyo friends...!!!!!!! 🤣 🤣 6th WONDER

YOYO k KASTAUKI DREAMS.. ( koi nai baat nai h ;)

yoyo : paaji aur parjayii <3 so sweet :)

sandhir kya bolu unke bare mein..as usual LOVED DEM :-* :-*

aww..huggie to u sheru n big kissi from my side :-) :-*

I LOVE YOU

all in all PERFECT N A CUTE OS ;)

KHUSHI
Edited by ....1234 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yeh kya baat hui 🤣 sabhi ress krke bhaag gye 🤣 had hai🤣

@khushi di, macchar, paani, JB😆, avni

Jaldi unress kro main darr ke maare mari jaa rhi hun🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: avniarpitha

res
unres

this ws too cute 😳 & it ws too funny yr 🤣
write more...I likd ur imaginations 👏

& no chappals or nthng but a hug 🤗

btw am talking to u fr 1st, myself Avni 😳
pm me wen u write again

thank u 🤗
Moi bohot lazy kumb karan se bhi zyada shayad
Dubara likhun shayad haan shayad naa 😆
Pr agr haan toh ur pm defo🤣
Heya avni me sheron
And thank u once again
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sheron13rokerz

Yeh kya baat hui 🤣 sabhi ress krke bhaag gye 🤣 had hai🤣

@khushi di, macchar, paani, JB😆, avni

Jaldi unress kro main darr ke maare mari jaa rhi hun🤣


kar diya unresss!!!!!!!!! ja padhh le!!!!!!!!!😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Really cute.. and for a first timer you are brilliant writer for sure.. now don't stop here.. pls do write more aur apne andar ke writer ko baahar aaney do...

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