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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: gaurikajen

I was about to ask for this ff update

😭😭
Why do u always do this stop at such a crucial moment hope its not armaan
Starting was super awesome loved to the bits
And the beach scene.

Please continue soon


Ayye hayye... Dekho maine de diya maang ne se pehle :P
kyunkiii...
oh ho, kitni baar bolun mujhe bada maza aate hai hehehe...
Actually the real reason is, when i write na...
I just keep writing and writing...
and when my fingers started to hurt, I stop writing with some suspense hehehe...
Kyunki mujhe pata hai phir tum log kaise next part ke liyeh inthizaar karenge ;) besabri se ;)
Glad u like the part...
Lets hope its not Armaan lekin kuch bhi ho sakti hai okey hehehe...
take care :) Muwaahhh

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Posted: 11 years ago
awsumm part di..!!
loved the whole part...!!
AR moments were really fab...&
the beach part was awsum..
& super fun too...
& last was shocking...
hope Armaan uss lift mei na ho..
waiting for next di...
post soon..!
tc..

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: desire_nikki

awsumm part di..!!

loved the whole part...!!
AR moments were really fab...&
the beach part was awsum..
& super fun too...
& last was shocking...
hope Armaan uss lift mei na ho..
waiting for next di...
post soon..!
tc..


Thanks Nikki...
Glad u enjoy the part...
ehehe ya maine shock de diya...
Lets hope Armaan is safe...
take care :)

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Posted: 11 years ago
super romantic part...
love it...
now Mr. workaholic and unromantic turned into the most romantic person...
but what you did...Armaan ka accident...NOOO.
cont soon...can't wait...




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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: RihooHaws


Hiyya Megs... :D
Thank u ji thank u hehehehe...
Oh ho, naraz mat hona... Ab tumne itni tarif ki toh thank u toh banta haina boss ;)

ayye hayye, tujhe bhi AR moments badi pasand aayi :P accha hai accha hai mere liyeh hehehe...
glad u love every part of it :D
AR moments and gang part as well...

Kiya huva.. kaise huva???
yeh next part main pata chaljaenge :P
ab itna wait kiya hai is part ke liyeh toh next part ke liyeh bhi tohda wait karlo okeyyy ;)
muwaahhh <3

Hope u will enjoy the coming parts :)
Muwaahhh
Love u too infinity ;)
Take care :)


main toh humesha hi iske parts enjoy karti hn ;)
haan wait toh karna padega...
na dekhne k liye k liye kk aage kya hoga :) :P

yya i love too til infinity :*
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome part ...
hope sb kch thek ho ! AR 😳
cntnue soon ...
tc ! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Pehle to starting was so romantic..
Tip tip barish se yaad ayi..

Yeh saajish hain boondon ki
Koi khwaahish hain chup chup si
Dekho na dekho na
Hawa kuchh haule haule
Zubaan se kya kuchh bole
kyon duuri hain ab darmayaan
Dekho na dekho na


I told u na previous one song for this part will sing here aur wo jab armaan thought about last night..


Raat ka nasha abhi
Aankh se gaya nahin
Tera nashila badan
Baahon ne chhoda nahin
Aankhen to kholi magar
Sapna woh toda nahin haan
Wohi woh wohi
Saason pe rakha hua tere hoton ka
Sapna abhi hai wahi


Then when riddhima said armaan..

Tumhe hum apne jism-o-jaan mein kuch aise basa lenge
Teri khushboo apne jism ki khushboo bana lenge
Khuda se bhi na jo toote
Woh rishta jod lenge hum


Then the convo between all was good..
Jab boys take girls to beach it was good.
Phir when Boys used to keep check the girls i was like

Nazar Ke Saamne Jigar Ke Paas
Koi Rehta Hai Vo Ho Tum


Then armaan's idea i would say
What an idea sir ji
Then when rahul said that armaan pe pyar ka rang chada hai..
Mujhe na ak song yaad ayi but woh bangla song hai but uski ek lyrics hindi hai...
that is..

Chad gaya pyar ka bukhar..
.šŸ˜‰

Then they run..&
I said bhag mika opps armaan bhag..&
Phir girls asking ridz i was singing...

Ae,
Sharmaana chhod daal,
Raaz dil ka khol daal
Aaju baaju mat dekh,
Jo bhi hai dil me bol daal..[
last me thodi si..modify ki hai...šŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰šŸ˜†]

Then jab armaan ki naam sunke riddima blushing i was singing..

Kabhi Neem Neem
Kabhi Shahad Shahad
Kabhi Naram Naram
Kabhi Sakht
Mora Piya
Nazron Ke Teer
Mai Basa Hai Pyar
Jab Bhi Chala Hai Wo Dil Ke Paar
Lajja Se Mare Re Ye Jiya


Then jab armaan admiring her in water..

Takte Rehte Tujhko Sanjh Savere
Nanion Mein Basya Jaise Nanin Yeh Tere
Tere Mast Mast Do Naian
Mere Dil Ka Le Gaye Chain
Mere Dil Ka Le Gaye Chain
Tere Mast Mast Do Naian

For their romance in water..

Main Rang Sharbaton Ka
Tu Meethe Ghaat Ka Paani
Mujhe Khud Mein Ghol De Toh
Mere Yaar Baat Bann Jaani


Then there pani me sabko dekhke..

Aaj Blue Hai Paani
Paani Paani Paani Paani Paani
Aur Din Bhi Sunny
Sunny Sunny Sunny Sunny Sunny
Aa Jaao On The Beach Yaar
Photo Meri Kheench
Phooti Kismat Hogi Teri
Agar Tune Yeh Baat Na Maani

Then jab woh sab wapas aye aur karan ask armaan for marriage...

Bas Ek Haan Ki Guzaarish
Phir Hogi Khusiyon Ki Baarish


Waise shadi k bat sunke ek aur gane yaad a gayi
But abhi in this situation it's not appropriate
Jab shadi hogi na tab bataungi ap chaho to wa per bhi bata sakti hu..
Phir armaan riddhimas state dekh k i was ..

Doorie
Sahi Jaye Naa


Then when woh miss u part ayi na..matlab riddhima thinking how armaan act this days..

My love for you is not of a night stand
Oh jaana love you miss you har lamha
Tere bina jeena hai kya
Oh jaana love you miss you har lamha


Phir riddhima ki baat se yaad ayi..

Hairat Hairat Hairat Hai
Tu Hai Toh Har Ek Lamha Khubsoorat Hai


Then jab riddhima asked armaan ye jaruri thi kya...?i ws singing..

Ye Jashn Zaroori Hai
Ye Tashn Jaruri Hai
Hum Raazi Hain
Usmein Jo Rab Ki Manzoori Hai


Phir armaan k bato se yaad ayi..

Jo Meri Rooh Ko
Chain De Pyaar De
Woh Khushi Bangaye Ho Tum
Zindagi Bangaye Ho Tum


Phir achanak kya ho gaya..
I hope sab thik ho..

Dekho finally i got little time & commenting...

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sakshiksg

super romantic part...

love it...
now Mr. workaholic and unromantic turned into the most romantic person...
but what you did...Armaan ka accident...NOOO.
cont soon...can't wait...





Thanks Sakshi...
Heheh yeah, he turn to be romantic now lolzzz...
Hawww 😲
Maine kya kiya, kuch bhi toh nehi šŸ˜›
Kisne kaha Armaan hai, ho bhi nehi sakti na 😳😳😳
hehe Sure will try...
take care :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: megha_kajen


main toh humesha hi iske parts enjoy karti hn ;)
haan wait toh karna padega...
na dekhne k liye k liye kk aage kya hoga :) :P

yya i love too til infinity :*


Ayye Hayye...
Thats too good to know Megs 😊
ehehehe no other option na šŸ˜›
Righttt... Dekhlena šŸ˜‰

hehehehe muwaahhh lovesss u...ā¤ļø
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rucha_07

awesome part ...

hope sb kch thek ho ! AR 😳
cntnue soon ...
tc ! :)


Thanks dear...
Glad u enjoy...
Hope so... Take care :)

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