Arshi FF#3 The Seed of Passion, Chapters 17 to 23 - Page 20

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ArshiHamesha

Awesome chapter...😊

My grabbers

Anjali is getting closer to Khushi...she will know her side beter in the case of Shyam's revelation especially the way you are knitting this story...Love the straightforwardness...

Arnav is hell bounded to take off his new life's motives but he is sharp keeping four eyes alert but his one eye is not working properly...need something to jolt that one from slumber...in Shyam's case...

Khushi is hesitant YES, LG and his magical spell is enough...

Last scene is very significant...he needed strength and he got it in that wink...and touch...and her turning back to him...YES she turned back and she will wait for him...That hug has a deep meaning...👏






Thank you my dear Faiqu. 😃Your grabbers always help me to see my story in perspective. Anjali and Khushi are getting close and so are Arnav and Khushi. You are bang on ; both these developments are very significant for the present and the future. ASR will see through Shyam but the ASR of IPK took so much time, how do you expect it from my ASR so soon?😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful Update. I am awaiting to see how Khushi gets out of Pankaj's engagement.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Thank you😃

Originally posted by: sincereme

Awesome update...

Khushi is in a real mess... How is she going to call off her marriage with Pankaj without breaking Payal's marriage...???

I m scared for Anjali... She us going to be alone with Shyam... What if he try to hurt her??? Khushi knows that Shyam is a leech... Glad that she stops Anjali from telling anything to Shyam...

Arnav once again hurt khushi with his words... But if he hurts her, he is the only one who can sooth her... Loved how they make up... Awww... And Arnav asked her to wait for her...

Loved the update...


Thank you for your insightful comment and your concern for Khushi, Payal and Anjali 😃
Yes things are in a mess. They need to be sorted out in the next few updates😃

Originally posted by: henamani

Wow. Finally a confession of some sort.


Yes a confession of sorts. But not enough, na?😉😃 Thanks for reading.

Originally posted by: raniluvsasr

Hey thanks for the pm,loved the update. Excellent enjoyed every bit of it, lovely. Arnav initially was so rude. Good he realised he felt something for khushi. Interesting. Update soon


Thank you for enjoying every bit. It makes me so happy😃 Yea a realisation is slowly dawning on Arnav and Khushi.


Edited by wiwy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ipkkndeternity

Superb update loved it

dere is a new determination in his eyes he will win no matter what
awww he said khushi 2 wait for him and i knw she will wait
but wat will shayam do now
Khushi is already suspicious abt him
plsss make ASR find out shayam's truth plsss
and i hope arnav doesnot involve himself in any kind of flins not even ONS otherwise khushi wud be hurt a lot
thx for de pm continue soon plss
dere way of departure was so cute
arnav loves khushi whn will he understand it i wonder
superb update


Thank you for your detailed and thoughtful comment😃
You are really persistent on making ASR find out about Shyam's real intention, arn't you?😆 And I love you for that!❤️😃
And no more flings for ASR! I will remember that! Or Khushi will definitely be hurt😭
Anyway he will come back soon for her, and maybe realize that she is his soulmate!😉

Originally posted by: RSanaya71

Awesome wiwy Di.

He is asking her to wait for him.I am dead.😛
She is turning around for him,yes she won't marry with that pankaj udaas,if ASR won't kill him I will.
Their concern for each other is something...but you know he cares more for Khushi in that moment.Good move .👏

Love this light hearted story❤️


Pankaj Udhas ! Lol! Thanks for liking and your sweet comment❤️Yes there are so much concerned for each other..😃 Hope you had a great vacation. Love

Originally posted by: suji5

nice update
how will khushi refuse the marriage proposal when it is linked with payal's?


Thanks for commenting and for your query, you will know soon😃

Originally posted by: crazyforu

hey i loved your story very much im a new reader pls do pm me


Thank you so much for liking my story😃, will definitely PM you.😃


Edited by wiwy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful update. Want to be khushi careful or she want to tel abt him to arnav soon, before shyam put plan.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wiwy congrats on new thread
Wiwy 16, 17 and 18 are excellent updates

Part 16
Anjali didn't understand why her brother asked her not to meet Chachaji under any circumstances and she tried to call Arnav but it was not reachable and she was worried for him and Shyam assured her Arnav would be fine but in his mind he hoped his brother in law is dead😡

Arnav saw Khushi smiling in her sleep and hoped the guy in her dream is not Pankaj and thought because of his warning Pankaj won't dare to come even in Khushi's dreams😆 ... loved this so possessive Arnav😃

Loved how Arnav's heart captured by Khushi's innocence, her beauty and her determination and honesty to save him and he realised how much Khushi is important to him😊.
Arnav now new that his Chacha wants to kill him to claim mallik properties and he wants to put his Chacha behind the bars and he don't want to claim any of Mallik property and he wanted to form his own Company and he needed Khushi by his side in doing all this👏.

Nk came for Khushi. Loved NK's funny Hindi and Arnav felt jealous seeing Khushi and NK together. Nk wanted to drop Khushi at her place but Arnav stopped him and said he will drop her and at the same time Lavanya came there and tried to blame Khushi but Arnav defended Khushi and Khushi angrily went with NK.

Arnav went to home and Anjali was worried and happy at the same time seeing him and Shyam was shocked to see him alive.
Aman called Arnav and said that Sheetal changed her statement at police that he forced her to tell Chachaji's name on Arnav's order.
Arnav wanted to go to Seeshmahal and meet chachaji and asked Aman to take care of his Di and Khushi in his absence ... Loved this caring Arnav

Khushi's house door was locked and Buaji called her on NK's phone and said her to come to big hospital and Khushi was worried and she remembered Arnav.

Ajith got to know Arnav is alive and Arnav reached his chachaji's place.

Part 17

Loved the way Arnav grabbed Ajith's neck and lifted him off the floor before he takes gun out of his pocket ... Loved this aggressive ASR avatar👏
Ajith bad mouthed about Arnav's Ma and Dadi asked Arnav to go back to Delhi even when she got to know Ajit tried to kill Arnav because she cares only for society. Ajith don't want a part but he wants whole of Malliks property ... What is Dadi hiding from Arnav?
Arnav said to Dadi that he decided not to take anything from malliks anymore and he is quitting AR and he want to set his own company but dadi don't want Arnav to quit AR. Ajith said let him go and he can't do anything on his own and he will come running back to them. Loved how Arnav said "ASR does not lick what spits out" and loved how he promised to Seeshmahal that he will come back here one day.

NK and Khushi went to hospital and the person in the hospital is Pankaj's mom😲 and Buaji said that Payal and Neeraj & Khushi and Pankaj are going to engaged in a day or 2 and Khushi was only thinking about Arnav.

Part 18
Khushi don't want to get engaged to Pankaj and she came to temple to pray DM for solution and she saw Anjali crying and Khushi got panicked and said she know someone tried to kill Arnav on hot balloon and Anjali said Ajit chacha tried to shoot Arnav and Khushi was worried for Arnav's safety and wanted to see him and assured Anjali that nothing will happen to him when they both are with him.

Both Anjali and Khushi went to airport. Loved the way both Khushi and Arnav felt each other's presence even before seeing each other and loved how Arnav's heart beat fast and lost himself in her beauty.
Arnav is going to London to meet some clients to set his business

Arnav don't want Khushi be harmed because of him and it is dangerous if she is seen with him and he shouted on Khushi for coming there and Anjali told him that Khushi was worried for him and she wanted to meet him badly.

Khushi with tears in her eyes, tried to go away but loved how Arnav pulled her into waiting room and said sorry to her and told her that he don't want her to get hurt because of him and she said she was scared for him ... loved this cute couple

Loved how Arnav said "My Khushi"
"Now go Khushi and promise me you will stay safe for me"
"And wait for me, Khushi, won't you? ..."
Loved Khushi's reply
"Yes ... I will stay safe ... for you ..."

Khushi then realised why she don't want to engaged to Pankaj because she wanted to wait for Arnav even though he don't believe in relationships set by society and she thought she would wait for him.

Loved how Arnav kissed on Khushi's forehead and asked her Is everything OK and how Khushi kissed on Arnav's lips and said "it is now" and loved her wink😳 ... loved shy and bold Khushi

Loved how Arnav thought that nothing can stop him now
Waiting to see how Khushi will stop her engagement

Waiting for next update







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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved it...such an awesome story...cant wait for your next part...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank you sanjanasree 😃

Originally posted by: amfashionista

amazing update.

loved it.

Aww! Thanks😃


Originally posted by: divya_divs

That was such a lovely update 😛 loved the parting scene...awaitng their next meet...thanks fr the pm 😃


Glad you liked esp the last scene😃 Thanks a tonne😃

Thanks for reading and commenting😃

Originally posted by: MehreenB

Nice update😊


few points are racing heartbeat.Anjali will be alone in Arnav's absence and how Khushi will refuse now..Last scene was lovely...


Thanks Mehr for lending some heartbeats to my work😃Means a lot to me.

Thank you so much😃
Edited by wiwy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anaswara93

Awesome Update👏👏👏

Thanks a tonne anaswara😃😃😃

Originally posted by: sarozz

Wonderful update...hope she can avoid marrying pankaj...

Yes she has to get rid of Pankaj😉 Thanks for liking friend😃

Thank you dear😃

Originally posted by: piyaarshi

Aww... Awsum update... How she will say no to pankaj??


thanks for enjoying. 😃She will...wait for the next chapter😃

Originally posted by: salooni

sorry like button not working

love the update
i likee the twist
surely khushi will wait Arnav said it so
passionately and with full right on her
but have to see how
also how Arnav will help him
and how they both finally solve there problem
and meet again
thanks for pm
update soon


Thanks sweet Soni! Great you liked the twist. Now for a resolution of their problems...😉😃


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Posted: 11 years ago
Chap 17, 18 - Superb updates

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