hey read this story three days bk...and was waiting to find some time to comment here. So, first things first...ITs a given tht the story is amazing! Very well done dear. And an 👏 for you...for the fact tht this story is your first. And for tht reason...i have to upgrade my words...and tell u this story is just one of those astounding ones.I really liked the way u hv written it...especially the political drama. I feel tht is one area hard to write and explore while at it...and dear u have already cracked the nut there! 😉 Really! U have rolled down the politcal drama...in a very interseting way and not for once does the reader gets bored with it...being placed enough of scenes and just the right times.
although, i m not complaining at all with what u gave us regarding the time it took khushi to fall in love with him...yet with a critic's eye...i feel a little more time shud hv been given there.
And then...Things i loved... 😃
The Bestest thing i found abt it is it's Arnav...😉...the Shrewd, calculative, and smart-and-perfectly-timed-to-the-T retorts wala Arnav!
and then another thing i really really liked is the Returning-to-painting inspiration of Arnav...and when i say so, wat i mean is abt wat inspired him then who?U know wat i mean rgt...😉...yup I m talking abt tht...😆! ...the Bridal vision of Khushi for a painter who is known for nude paintings. This is just best-est-est part! ⭐️⭐️
I am very happy to know tht Khushi is understanding enough to accept Lexie's story positively...But, wat i m eager about is for Arnav's reaction..now tht he is going to return bk to India...I want to know his reaction and anxiousness...as to how he is going to face his wife and how he is going to explain his'Runaway to US to meet a girl' now tht his return is looming...! 🤔
so offcourse next all i hv to say is...please give the next update already...The wait seems tooo long.
and oh if u don't mind...please PM me too! 😳
Love, Meg
Mannat Har Khushi Paane Ki
Veer Hanuman
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