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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MonalisaJ

NYC story ... just read all chapter's in a go.. its amazing... plzz update soon and do pm me...


Thanks a lot for reading it... Going to update tomorrow :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
i dont remember if i commented on this one or not.. so came again..
okay.. so the start of the story... no other beginning can be any more intriguing.. knife. blood.. scissors.. murder.. kidnap.. suicide..
what happened which led to something like This..

n then came the characters... haaye mera Hot Hero..
Parth... okay, shak he meko is bande pe... he's her bestie but his relation with Arpita, her sister, seems weird... maybe they both love each other secretly but are just hesitant.. or is their some mystery too..
Vardhaan.. he knows her already... aise kese... bichdi hui behen he yaa bichdi hui beti... but i cant suspect vardhan here.. i just refuse to accept him as the bad guy yaar.. i trust him this much.. 😳
sanyu's maa... abbe yar.. jab baat karni ni thi toh call kyu kiyaa.. maze me daantne ke liye... 🤪
aryaman... the new guy... why is HE here... kon he ye... is he vardhan's son or is it RD... is he(aryaman) goin to be the main culprit here.. her abductor maybe.. ufff.. inne saare questions... 🤔

n Sandhir's moments together... they were the treat in this story... loved them to the core... n especially the party one... loved that chapter the most. awww so she does trust him after all.

nice progress.. m loving the pace of the story..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aleena.1884

i dont remember if i commented on this one or not.. so came again..
okay.. so the start of the story... no other beginning can be any more intriguing.. knife. blood.. scissors.. murder.. kidnap.. suicide..
what happened which led to something like This..

n then came the characters... haaye mera Hot Hero..
Parth... okay, shak he meko is bande pe... he's her bestie but his relation with Arpita, her sister, seems weird... maybe they both love each other secretly but are just hesitant.. or is their some mystery too..
Vardhaan.. he knows her already... aise kese... bichdi hui behen he yaa bichdi hui beti... but i cant suspect vardhan here.. i just refuse to accept him as the bad guy yaar.. i trust him this much.. 😳
sanyu's maa... abbe yar.. jab baat karni ni thi toh call kyu kiyaa.. maze me daantne ke liye... 🤪
aryaman... the new guy... why is HE here... kon he ye... is he vardhan's son or is it RD... is he(aryaman) goin to be the main culprit here.. her abductor maybe.. ufff.. inne saare questions... 🤔

n Sandhir's moments together... they were the treat in this story... loved them to the core... n especially the party one... loved that chapter the most. awww so she does trust him after all.

nice progress.. m loving the pace of the story..


*smiling like hell*
Pehle toh mere ff ke liye sabse lamba wala comment so far...
You're picking up things that most readers never mentioned about EX (Parth Arpita. ... Vardhan)

And then comes sanyu's mom's ph call *laughing like hell*
I never realized it...ki vo ph krke bina kuch kaam ki baat krke kaat deti hain XD

Vardhan's son ull know about him in the next part

And at last SANDHIR I tried to keep it cute :)

Warning : agle kuch update mein thode jhatke aane wale hain
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Thankew soo much for your wonderful comment...
Love Sana


(Ab tak ka lamba wala reply XD)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Yup.. Will update today :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SWA1992

my Sanyukta??? plz update who said that(hope that may be rd)


U'll know soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: amulbaby06

Sana!!!!!!!!!

such an amazing part

lots of Sandhir scenes... but tell me whoz dat guy???? waiting eagerly pls update soon...


Thankeww sooo much Micky :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Two halves of a different heart

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Guys Thankew soo much for your feedback... I'm soo glad u guys are liking it...

Want to dedicate this part to Gunseerat di and Bushra di... Love u guys :)

Hope u guys like this part... Leave your comments below :)

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Part 6


The morning sun shined upon Randhir's face. He frowned and got up still thinking about yesterday night. The way they hugged, whatever he felt, he was still really confused about how he reacted yesterday...from where did he find the courage to say sorry to her? Why did he melt after hearing her cry? Why did she have such an affect on him?
On the Other side Sanyukta was going through a similar situation.



Girls Hostel:

"Sanyukta Aggarwal" the warden spoke as she entered the room.

Sanyukta looked over and replied "yes, mam."

"Your parents are here to see you, they're waiting in the visitor's room, go meet them." Ordered the warden and walked out.

Sanyukta jumped up in excitement and ran towards the visitor's room. She entered the room and saw her mum and dad who were sitting on the chairs beside the window.

"Maa, papa" spoke Sanyukta grabbing their attention. They looked over, Sanyukta proceeded and hugged her mom but her mom resisted and broke the hug.

Shocked at her mom's action, Sanyukta questioned "Maa, what's wrong with you? why are you behaving like this?"

"Sanyukta, come with me, I need to talk to you." Spoke her dad as he took her out of the room.

Sanyukta was sitting on the bench accompanied by her dad still confused by everything that was going on. Mr Aggarwal placed his hand on her hand and started to talk.

"Sanyukta, I want you to pay attention to everything that I'm going to tell you today." Stated Mr Aagarwal. She nodded in response.

Her dad continued "you know the fact that you are our eldest child, as Ankit and Arpita the unidentical twins are a year younger than you. According to our family's traditions, the eldest child is always to be the owner of the property after his or her's parents."

"Dad..." Sanyukta replied having no idea where this conversation was going to head her.

"Sanyukta, I don't want to tell you all this but I have to. Your mom wants to disown you so that Ankit can be the owner of our family business and property. I cant disagree with her as her health will detroit." He said with a tear rolling from his eye.

"D... Dad." was all she could manage to say before running to her mother.



Visitor's room:

Sanyukta knew that her mom was not a conservative person, she doesn't differentiate between her daughters and son, then what made her take this decision. All she knew was that she needed answers. She ran inside room and sat on her knees holding her mom's hand.

She wailed "Maa, I know you don't differentiate between girls and boys then why now. Please tell me."

Her mom jerked her hand and replied " Dont call me your mom, I'm not your mom, I can never love you as much as I love Ankit and Arpita. You are not my daughter."

Sanyukta smiled as she cried "Maa please stop joking around with me, I know I'm your daughter."

"She's telling the truth." Came a voice from the door, Sanyukta looked back, it was her dad.

By this point Sanyukta was completely shattered. She couldn't gather all this. *Why did have to happen to her* was all she could think off. She looked at her dad, demanding answers.

He approached her and sat next to her. "Sanyukta, we adopted you, we are not your biological parents."

Those last few words by her dad were like spikes that hit her right in the heart. Her arms fell on the ground trying to support her upper body. She managed to look up at her mom who gave her blank looks and left the room. Her dad placed his hand on her shoulder and started to console her.

"Sanyu, please try to understand, your mom is going through a very tough stage, I don't want it to have a bad effect on her health. The doctor too advised me listen to everything she says. I'm sorry but I can't help you." He said while wiping his tears.

Sanyu got up and was about to leave when her dad spoke. "We'll come back for the formalities, please don't inform Arpita about it yet. I still love you." Said Mr Aggarwal hoping that she would handle everything with maturity.

She left the room without saying anything. There was one person that heard everything. It was Aryaman, he had tears in his eyes.



Corridor:

Sanyukta was walking in the corridor completely unaware of where she was going. Tears were rolling down her cheeks but she wasn't reacting. Suddenly Aryaman held her by her wrist and dragged her to the lawn.

"Sanyukta..." Said Aryaman in a concerned tone hoping that she would look up.
But his attempt failed as she stood there numb. He tried several times but it was as if she couldn't hear or see him. Tired of failure, he held her by both of shoulders, shook her hard and yelled "Sanyukta!!!!!"

Sanyukta looked at him and before he could say something she wrapped her arms around him, he seized her frail body in his strong, protective arm. Her face was resting on his chest as she cried her heart out.

"Ssshhh" he consoled as he stroked her hair "I've heard everything, just calm down.

She mourned heavily and started to talk her feelings out "Aryaman, why does it have to be me all the time, don't I deserve to be happy?? It's not that I want their wealth but it's their love that I need. But of course, I'm not their daughter, they would never love me as much as they love their own children."

Aryaman wept listening to the girl who was crying her heart out to him. His eyes fell on Randhir who was standing in the far corner of the lawn, he probably couldn't hear anything but witnessed it all. As Aryaman looked at him he left the spot. Parth came running in and whispered as he placed his hand on Sanyukta's shoulder "Sanyu, what wrong?"

Aryaman and Sanyukta broke the hug, Parth felt his heart sinking at witnessing her BFF in this condition. He cupped her face and wailed "Sanyu..stop crying."

"I think Sanyukta needs to rest for a while." Said Aryaman facing Parth. Parth nodded his head in response. They took her to the girls hostel and asked Kaustuki to look after Sanyukta.



Canteen:

After dropping Sanyukta at the hostel, Aryamn and Parth came to the canteen. Aryaman explained every single thing to Parth who was now devastated.

"What do we do now, she feels unloveable..." Implored Parth.

"We can't disclose this to anyone else. But I think I might have an idea of what we're going to do." Pondered Aryaman as he looked blankly at the light green table. Parth passed a questioning look to Aryaman.

"She feels that she's lost the largest source of love in her life, we need to provide her with love." Stated Aryaman.

"But we as friends can't possibly match the level of love she would get from her family." Answered Parth in a defeated tone.

"Well then, we need to find that ONE person that would love to an extent that she wouldn't feel the need of love from her family. Don't get me wrong but as much as I have observed she is very shattered. We need to find some who will atleast pretend to be in love with her, if not love her." Spoke Aryaman.

"What!!?" Barked Parth.

Aryaman adjusted his position and said "I know it's wrong, but we have to do it for her, if we don't do something right now. Then I'm afraid she might lose her hope to live."

Listening to Aryaman, Parth remembered that he had once told Sanyukta that he'll help her get out of any problem. "I guess now is the time for it" mumbled Parth to himself.



Boys hostel:

Randhir was unable to bear the fact that Sanyukta was hugging Aryaman, he felt a something which he was unable to state and then came to conclusion that he never wanted this.

*for once and for all! just forget about that girl, everything that happened!!! Randhir Singh Shekhawat, what have you done to yourself, you never wanted this to happen. Your in FITE for a cause, for a dream and that's all you need to worry about* was what he could think of before he became the same old RSS who would trouble Sanyukta, he burned every feeling he had in his heart for Sanyukta. From now Sanyukta would be the same girl that he hated to the core.



Vardhan's cabin:

Vardhan was standing near his desk looking for a particular file when his eyes fell on Aryaman. He rushed inside the cabin and hugged Vardhan with all his might.

"Dad... Dad... Sanyukta.. She IS my Sanyukta!!!" addressed Aryaman wiping the tears of happiness which were glistening over his face.

Vardhan broke the hug as a lone tear escaped his eyes. He looked back at Aryaman, questioning him if he was sure.

"Dad I'll never leave her alone ever again." Claimed Aryaman.

Vardhan' lips curved into a smile, there were no bounds to his happiness.



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Precap: - argument between Randhir and Aryaman
Person 1: why the hell are you worried about her so much!!!?
Person 2: because I love her...
- secrets revealed (well some of it)

Okay guys it was sooo hard for me to write this part as it was emotional, I totally suck at writing emotional scenes...
Don't hate me for making Sanyu cry :(
And the secret will be revealed in the next two parts...
Sorry if this was not upto your expectations...
Ooo and sorry for the errors... Didn't proof read :)


Leave ur valuable comments below... I love reading them :)
Love Sana
































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Posted: 11 years ago
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So Aryaman is Vardhan's son... but how is he related to Sanyu??????? confusing very confusing😉😉😉

Poor Sanyu felt bad for her for life's bitter truth... waiting eagerly wat will happen next??? Precap is so exciting...
Edited by amulbaby06 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow
emotional update
love the whole thing
can't wait for their argument
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey sana
it was amazing
eagrly waiting for the secret
do update nxt part ASAP...
loved this one
thnx for pm
love
dhruvi

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