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Posted: 11 years ago
#91
hey sana
loved it dear
it was jst awsome
thnx for pm
love
dhruvi
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Posted: 11 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: amulbaby06

wow amazing & beautifully penned... How sweet of Randhir...

Pls update it soon... Precap is very interesting...



Thanks... I'm glad u like it :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: dhruvi_parsh

hey sana
loved it dear
it was jst awsome
thnx for pm
love
dhruvi


Glad u liked it :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94

Will update tomorrow...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#95
😊 Lovely. Plz update soon
Also a request... Please show some Randhir jealousy scenes... either with Parth or the other guy Aryaman. Please 😉
-Rim

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rim7699

😊 Lovely. Plz update soon

Also a request... Please show some Randhir jealousy scenes... either with Parth or the other guy Aryaman. Please 😉
-Rim



Glad u liked it Rim...
I will update in a while...
And there will be some jealousy scenes, but not in the next two parts...
But I assure u... That you'll like part 5

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Sana
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Two halves of a different heart


I'm back :)
This part is dedicated to every single person that reads this ff, it's longer than usual, I really hope you guys like it...

I just want to say something...
Every writer puts in their effort while writing... When they don't get many reviews they get really disappointed...
After reading this, if you think that I don't deserve 30 seconds of your time typing a review then it's okay... Can't force...
The people that do review... I love u guys :D



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Part 5

The moment Sanyukta walked into the classroom she knew she was late, as the professor had already started. She nervously spoke "may I come in sir?"

Everyone turned their faces only to stare at her. Parth slapped his forehead with his left hand and whispered to no one in particular "she's late again!"

Randhir looked at her but only this time he had a different expression on his face. Sanyukta looked at him out of all the people that were facing her. The professor spoke "Miss Aggarwal, come in and take a seat." which resulted in breaking her eyelock with Randhir.

She stepped inside the class, started to walk and suddenly came to halt. Her seat next to Parth was taken by some guy. She looked around to find an empty seat, there was only one. Randhir followed her gaze, she was looking at the seat to the left of Randhir.

"Miss Aggarwal, can you sit already!!" fussed the professor.

She approached the seat and sat on it. Randhir glanced at the person that was sitting to the right of him, it was Aryaman, he was smiling mischievously at Randhir.

The lesson went smoothly, Randhir and Sanyukta didn't dare to look at each other. The lesson ended, everyone was about to leave when Aryaman asked the Dream Team members to stay behind. Aryaman proceeded as the rest of the students left "Guys, I want to take you out for a night out, I took permission from Vardhan Sir, since we've just met... You guys are my first few friends so what say... Pub tonight?"

"Yea, I guess everyone is okay with it." Said an excited Jiggy. Everyone else laughed on Jiggy's antics and agreed.



Girls hostel:
Kaustuki and Arpita were almost ready, Kaustuki was wearing a white crop top with black leather jeans and silver high heels. Arpita was wearing a rose gold coloured dress with only one strap. The dress reached her knees, she was also wearing white high heels and a pearl necklace. Sanyukta was sitting on the bed with her legs crossed and her face was resting on her fists watching Kaustuki and Arpita get ready. Kaustuki was tying her hair in a high pony tail where as Arpita was busy combing her wavy hair.

Kaustuki looked over at Sanyukta and yelled "Sanyukta, stop staring and get ready!!"

Sanyukta regained her posture after getting a mini heart attack by Kaustuki's voice and replied innocently "I don't know what to wear."

"Omg, sanyu I took you shopping last week, why don't you wear this dress?" Said a frustrated Arpita while rampaging through Sanyukta's cupboard.

Sanyukta agreed and got ready.



Parking lot:
The four boys were waiting for the girls to arrive from the last 45 mins but the girls didn't show up.
"Why do girls take this long to get ready?" Asked a puzzled Jiggy.

"Because they're girls, so simple, do want me to help you with this Qs too?" Grumbled an annoyed Randhir.

"Finnaly, there they are!" Exclaimed Parth.

Jiggy was staring at Kaustuki and smiling like a fool. Randhir glanced over after hearing Parth, he was dumbstruck after looking a Sanyukta, she was wearing a maroon sequined dress with full sleeves, it went from the base of her neck to just above her knees, she was also wearing black stilettos, her hair were loosely curled outwards. The only make-up element she had on her face was mascara. Randhir was staring at her shamelessly which didn't go unnoticed by Sanyukta. The moment she looked up at him he snapped out of the trance and went to sat inside the car.



Pub:
They entered the pub which was packed with people and went and sat at the corner where there were couches. They had their drinks and went to the dance floor. Everyone was full on swing, Jiggy was busy trying to impress Kaustuki by his moves, Arpita and Parth were making sure not to come in contact with each other, Aryaman was enjoying too, Sanyukta was dancing her heart out and Randhir couldn't help but notice her. She was under the influence of the drinks and she wasn't aware of her surroundings, a guy came over and started touching her inappropriately, he had his hands on her waist and she placed her arms on his neck. Randhir noticed this and knew that Sanyukta was drunk or else she wouldn't let a stranger touch her. The guy was rubbing her back, this made Randhir really angry, he approached them and shoved the guy off Sanyukta. She frowned and yelled "I want to dance..".

Randhir held her by her elbow and dragged her away from the dance floor.

"Let me gooo!!" exclaimed Sanyukta while hitting Randhir's arm with her hands.

He took her to a vacant corner and splattered a glass of water on her face, it helped her a little in regaining her senses. "What the hell, Randhir? What are you doing!!?" Asked a fussed Sanyukta while trying to clean her face.

"Are you for serious!!?" Asked Randhir while giving a perplexed expression.

"What is your problem, why the hell don't you leave me alone?" Questioned Sanyukta.

Suddenly. Sanyukta felt immense pain in her head, she placed her finger tips on her head and frowned. Randhir held her to give her support as he was afraid that she would collapse any minute. He placed one hand on Sanyukta's waist and the other hand on her arm trying to handle her.

"Stupid girl, if you can't handle yourself, then why the hell did u drink?" He spat standing in the same position.

Sanyukta's head was literally turning into an orchestra, every bit of sound was banging on her head like a hammer. Randhir was the closest source of sound to her. Sanyukta couldn't take it anymore, she pushed Randhir away and in an act of impulse she slapped him hard right on his left cheek. Randhir was angry, very angry but somewhere in his heart he knew that she didn't mean it but it wasn't enough to control his anger, he walked away leaving Sanyukta behind.

Randhir went into the washroom and splashed water on his face. "What does she thing of herself, I helped her, despite she slapped me?" Yelled Randhir as he looked into the mirror.

On the other side, Sanyukta was able to make way to the bar and had a lemon drink. She felt more at peace then before. She went and sat at the couches. After a session of crazy dance, everyone was tired and decided to return back to their original spot. Randhir also returned back and sat opposite to Sanyukta giving her angry looks. Sanyukta still had a blurred memory of what happend a while ago.

"Guys, I'm getting bored lets play something." Said Arpita in an whiny tone.

"Lets plays truth or dare." Said an I'm-always-over-excited Jiggy.

Parth spun the bottle and it landed on Aryaman.

"Truth" said Aryaman before giving anyone a chance to question him.

"Okay, so how many girlfriends have u had? " enquired Kaustuki.

"Well, 2..." said Aryaman.

The game continued, Jiggy was dared to propose to a random girl which he completely failed on, Parth was given the same dare and he succeeded. Along time, the game got boring, they spun the bottle again and it stopped at Sanyukta.

"Dare" she said out of boredom.

"We're completely out of dares, think of something Jiggy." Said Arpita as she nudged Jiggy.

"Can't think of anything, ummm... kiss, yeah kiss the person that helped you last." Said Jiggy.

A sudden thought hit Sanyukta, she looked up at Randhir, he looked back with total anger. Everyone cheered for her not knowing what was going on in her mind. She was thinking about how he helped her yesterday as she was unaware that he also helped her a few moments ago.

Randhir left the spot, Sanyukta avoided the dare by saying she was too tired and wanted to go back. Everyone agreed and reached the parking lot. Randhir was already sitting in his car. Everyone else entered the other car but Sanyukta was left out since the car was full.

"Sanyukta, why don't you go in Randhir's car?" Asked Jiggy while putting his seat belt on.

"But..." Parth started but was interrupted by Sanyukta.

"It's okay Parth, I'll go with Randhir." Said Sanyukta and went and sat on the passenger seat next to Randhir.

He didn't even look at her once as his anger didn't cool down yet. They started making their way back to the college, it started raining and Sanyukta started to pressurise her mind to regain her memory of the time she was drunk. Every single thing suddenly started getting back to her, she remembered how the guy was touching her, how Randhir saved her yet again and the darkest part; when she slapped him.

"Randhir?" She said softly not wanting to make him more angry.

Randhir ignored her and looked straight ahead, she tried again.

"Randhir, I wasn't in my senses." She explained as she kept her hand on his shoulder.

He jerked her hand and continued to drive on the path. The car suddenly stopped, Randhir tried to start it but it wouldn't, they realised that the car had broken down. Ragardless, Sanyukta wasn't worried, all she knew was that she had to rectify her mistake.

"Randhir, try to understand..." started Sanyukta but was interrupted by Randhir's terrifying voice.

"Why should I Sanyukta, I got slapped regardless the fact that I helped you get away from that guy, you couldn't even stand properly, I was trying to handle you. Did you really think of me as a cheap guy who would take advantage of a drunk girl!!? Do you not trust me!!? Actually, it's all my fault. I'm SORRY that I saved you." He beamed at her and stepped out of the car.

Sanyukta was in a very emotional state, tear were flowing out of her eyes. *I wasn't at all in my senses when I slapped him, it was my fault but how could he say all that?* was all she could think of.

Randhir was facing his back to the car with his hands on his hips. His white shirt was now transparent due to the rain water. Back in the car, Sanyukta wiped her face which was flooded with tears and got out of the car. She ran towards Randhir and hugged him from the back, her face was resting on his shoulder. Randhir was shocked at her action, he tried to resist but stopped when he heard Sanyukta.

"I'm sorry...Randhir." Was all she could whisper as she tugged onto his shirt even more tighter.

Those words worked like magic, Randhir had let in, he could tell that she had been crying, he rather felt guilty for yelling at her. He held her hand and turned to look at her, she was sobbing.

"I'm sorry too Sanyukta, don't cry..." Said Randhir as he caressed her face.

Sanyukta smiled and hugged him tight, she placed her arms around his necks as he held her by her waist. She buried her face into the crook of his neck. She felt safe in his embrace and Randhir was most probably experiencing one of the best moment of his life.

"Randhir...?" Said Sanyukta as she moved her head back to look at him. They were still hanging on to each other.

Randhir looked a her and replied in a soft voice "hmmm?"

"If I didn't trust you, then I would never have let you touch me yesterday." She said with a smile adorning her face.

Randhir looked at her dreamily as the water droplets sprinkled over her face.



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Precap :

Scene 1:
Guy: Dad, she IS my Sanyukta... (He had tears in his eyes)
Vardhan looked around completely shocked...


Scene 2:
Randhir: Why do you trust me?
Sanyukta: Dont know, it just feels RIGHT...


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Note:
Guys half of the precap is as same as before... I just couldn't fit it in as I wanted this chapter on end on Sandhir :)

If u liked it a teeny weeny bit then plzzz comment...


Love Sana









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Posted: 11 years ago
#98
gal firstly thank u amples for pm!
I m in love wid ur ff
its going so well
aww they hugged and she initiated it
i cnt believe!
Aww that ws such a cute moment in rain!
Lvd it so much
pls update soon d spoilers r amazing
Edited by Gunseerat - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#99
amazing update
sanyu drunk and slapped rd
why do i feel that abhi is the guy in the precap that is talking to vd sir
i hope it is him... it will make a good twist in the storyline
can't wait to see the next part
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
tHIS WAS JUST AMAZING UPDATE YAAR.i REALLY LOVED HOW THE EVENTS ARE TURNING OU TO BE.sANDHIR SCENE IN THE PUB WAS JUST AMAZING.FIRST SANYU SLAPPED HER THEN SHE SAID SORRY TO HIM aND DESPITE ALL THESE rANDHIR SAVED HER.tHE ENDING PART WAS REALLY CUTE.AND THE MOST AMAZING PART WAS WHEN SHE SAID IF SHE DOESN'T TRUST HIM SHE WOULDN'T HAVE ALLOWED HIM TO TOUCH.
bRILLIANT UPDATE YAAR
jUST LOVED IT AND THANKS FOR Pm

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