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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
Nice update..

Poor Rey..is being treated so ill by Kria. She has blocked him. How sad.. Do update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
interesting...loved the start and plz increase the size of the font bahut chotu chotu letters hai
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
Dis seems interesting
infact was lovely
looking forward to read more :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
Fabulous start 👍🏼
Rey went to meet kria 😳
But her mom ruined everything
Y has kria blocked him 😔 *bechara*
Hmm so kanya is rey's messenger who keeps him updated abt kria's whereabouts 😉
I think rey n kria wud b in d same college 😎
Loved it ^_^
Plz update soon 😊


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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
I'm sure this would be an awesome foursome
Fab start to a fab story
Nice bonding b/w rey n sis-in-law!!!
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
Wow loved it.
the chapter was so beautifully written.
i loved the meeting part.
i love how Rey misses Kria and the way she froze seeing him could easily convey her side o the story.
can't wait to know the rest of the story.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
Ek aur story...

Tum toh bahut hi sudhar gayi...

U writing again...

ausome...

I am soo happy...

Welcome back to writing...

ohhkk...now back to chappy 1...

sooo Rey came to meet her after two n half years...

Kriya blocked Rey...why..???

Something might have had happened in their past...

I sooo knew dat after knowing Kriya dint eat her food...

Rey would also not eat his food...

so whats it that hes gonna do next...??

Waiting for the update...

do write soon...

Love Aditi...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
Amazing start...
I loved it...
Bechari kriya ko faltu mein hi dhant padh..
kriya ne khana nahi khaya n yeh sunkar rey ne apni plate bhi wapas rakh di n khana nahi khaya.. ahem ahem..waiting to see what comes next...
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
😆

I read this already and when I saw the PM I was searching the pages for an update 🤣

Coming to the point,

I simply loved your write-up. It had a very strong realistic touch to it.

Jabalpur ke ladke aise hi hote hai 😆

Kria blocked him

Maybe because he was stalking her in Pilani or something 🤔

Continue soon, By the Way 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
as usual beautiful piece of writing.. <33

cont. super soon aryuu :))

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