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Posted: 11 years ago
plz pm me when you update chapter24 ...
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Originally posted by: SWA1992

plz pm me when you update chapter24 ...




ya i will pm u...
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PART 24


Day 1...

They reached Essel world...
S: wow!!!!! Amazing par mujhe gudiya ki yaad aa rahi hai. Pichhli baar water park wo saath gayi thi na.
R: koi baat nahi hum abhi usse baat kar lete hein.
S: to jaldi phone lagao. Kiska wait kar rahe ho.


He dialled HOME and his mom picked phone.
R: helo. Maa
RS: haan bete bolo. Thik se pahinch gaye the na tum???
R: haan mom. Hum thik se pahunch gaye.
RS: aur sanyukta ki helth me koi sudhaar???
R: haan mom kuch kuch. Achha mom pari hai kya.
RS: haan bele. Just hold. I'll call her.


She calls pari. Pari on line..
P: hello papa. Apne wo gaana suna.
R: haan suna. Aisa kabhi ho sakta hai meri princess mere liye kuch kare aur mujhe achha na lage. Itna pyara song tha. Thank you papa.
P: achha papa mumma kahan hai??? Unhe kuch yaad aaya???
R: haan.. Thoda thoda. Tumse baat karna chahti hai. Lo baat karlo.

Sanyu on line...
S: hello gudiya, I miss you.
P: I miss you too mumma.
S: pata hai ye sadu mujhe essel world laaya hai wo bhi tumhare bina. Tum hoti to kitna mazaa aata.
P: essel world. Main papa se baat nahi karungi. Mujhe bina liye gaye.
S: haan mat karna. Lo usse baat karo.

Randhir on line...
P: papa ap mujhe bina liy gaye essel world.
R: princess maine kaha tha na ye important hai. Agli baar hum sab saath aayenge. I promise. Ok..
P: ok papa.
R: good girl. Ab chalo bye main ghar pahunch k tumse baat karta hoon.
P: bye papa. I love you.
R: bye darling. I love you too.

He hung the phone.
R: ab tum kyun mu latka k khadi ho. Yahaan aane se pehle to kaafi uchhal rahi thi ki jaana hai jaana hai. A b kya hua???
S: pari...
R: oho pari ki yaad nahi aayegi aaj.
S: wo kaise???
R: kyunki hum aaj ye saari rides enjohy karne waale hein aur wo bhi adult.(showing her the booklet of essel world)
S: wow.. Sachi..
R: haan par ek problem hai.
S: kya???
R: ye sab safe to hein par bahut scary hein. Tumhe dar lagega na.
S: to kya hua, baaki log bhi to ride kar rahe hein na. Aur main thodi koi chhoti bachi hun.
R: okk.. To toot pado chalo. Achha pehle kahaan jayenge???
S: ye achha hai. Pehle yahaan chalte hein. Slippery Sultan..(pointing to an image)
R: ok. As your order mam. Easy se start karte hein.

They changed and went to the slide.
S: ye kitna uncha hai.
R: kya hua dar lag raha hai???
S: nahi. Main to bas aise hi bol rahi thi. Ch..chalo..

As they climbed the stairs, sanyu was clutching randhir's arms tighter and tighter. As they started sliding, she started shouting more and louder and finally they reached the pool.
R: whooo.. Mazaa aaya na???
S: bahut. Ek aur baar. Is baar tum yahin rehna aur mujhe catch karna ok.
R: ok.


She again slide and randhir caught her by her waist and rotated holding her. Her hands were on his arms. After moving, they both fell and started laughing harder. Finally they stopped laughing after few minutes.


R: achha tumhe yaad hai swimming kaise karte hein???
S: nahi tum yaad aa gaye bahut badi baat hai.
R: chalo main batata hun.

He swam and tried to teach her but she was unable.
S: mujhse nahi hoga.
R: ek idea hai.
S: kya???
R: meri pithh pe chadho aur mujhe kas k pakad lo.
S: ok. Par agar hum dub gaye to???
R: nahi dubenge. Bas tum mujhe pakde rakhna. Ok

He did this because it was not the first time he was doing this. They did this somewhere before because of sanyu's childish activities. He knew that this would surely effect something.


She did as he directed and climbed upon his back. Her hands were on his chest, trying to clutch it hardly. She was feeling a heavenly pleasure on his back as a desire was being fulfilled after a long age.


S: mmm... Kaafi strong ho. Waise observe to kiya tha tumhe push ups karte time par itne hot hoge pata nahi tha.
R: achha.. Badi taarif kar rahi ho. Temperature measure kar lena jab main push ups kar raha hounga. Kuch baaki nahi rehna chahiye na. Achha ab try karen???
S: haan.


He swam again taking her on her back. She was resting her head on his back and enjoying the moves. Finally she closed her eyes and took a deep breath and spoke. And his trick worked.


S: randhir, I love you.
R: kya??? Kya kaha tumne???(stood in water and left sanyu. He made her stand too)
S: maine kaha.. I love you.
R: mujhse kaha.
S: aur kya baju waale uncle ko bolungi??? Mcp.
R: Tum. Sach me. Main bata nahi sakta main kitna khus hun. Itne saalon baad itna achha lag raha hai.(he hugs her and says all these)
S: par dar lag raha hai.(she said making a sad face)
R(freeing her): ab kaisa dar hum to sath hein na.
S(with a tear drop): dar lag raha hai, agar mujhe kuch yaad nahi aaya to.
R: heyy... Shhh... Sab yaad aa baby. Dont worry. Main hun na. Mujhpe believe karo ok.
S: tumpe believe hai par apne ap pe nahi.
R: sanyu, tum aisa keh rahi ho. You know mujhe fight karne ka power tumse milta hai. Tumhari self confidence, tumhari himmat. In sab se inspire hoke hi main aage badhta tha.
S: aur aj wahi sab meri memory mujhse chhin k le gayi.
R: sab khona par self confidence kabhi mat khona.

He took her into his arms and her head to his chest. He caressed her forehead on one hand and shoulder on the other and said..

R: waise bhi kya ho gya agar purani memories nahi aayi hum new start karenge. New life. Isliye dont worry aur chalo lunch ka time ho gaya fir medicines bhi to lene hein.

R: ab chalo aur ye aansu pocho. Pata hai yahaan khane k liye bhi bahut achhi achhi chizen hei. Kya khaogi??? Tandoori ya pizza ya kuch indian punjabi style???
S: mmm... Sab. Par ek cobdiftion pe.
R: dekho haan medicine naa khane ki condition mat rakhn. Wo to khana hi padega. Tum chaho ya na chaho.(with his usual smark)
S: offo mcp. Har waqt attitude dikhana important hai kya. Main to kuch aur hi bol rahi thi.
R: attitude haan. Sirf tumhare samne. Mu farzi. Achha kya condition hai???
S: main bas ye keh rahi thi is bar main khilaungi aur tum khaoge.
R: wat???
S: itna chokne ki koi zarurat nahi. Main khana banaa sakti hun to khila bhi ti sakti hun na.
R: achha ok.


They ordered the food. And as sanyu's condition she fed randhir. He was completely silent because he was getting this soft and deep pleasure after a very long period. He was lost in her gesture. Now he moved his palm to feed her. They both were feeding each other. By this time, they were lost in each others eyes. A long eyelock broke when waiter called randhir.


W: o sir ji kuch aur chahiye???
S: haan do glass lassi malai maar k.
R: par mera pet to bhar gaya.
S: to kya hua. Itni care kar sakte ho, ek glass lassi apne pet me adjust nahi kar sakte.
S 2 W: ap le aao.

After having their lunch.
R: omg farzi. Kya emltional blackmail kiya. Mujhse chala nahi bhi nahi jaa raha.
S: haha. Mr. no1. Ab chaloge bhi aur daudoge bhi kyunki hum ice skating karne waale hein.
R: wat the???
S: yes..(and takes him pulling his color)

They both wore the skates and went near field.
S: ready???
R: ji kar raha hai tumhara galaa dabaa dun.
S: chu chu.. Zyada udne ki zarurat nahi itni aasani se chhodne nahi waali main tumhe. Chalo.


They went to the field abd started skating.
S: pakde rakhna. Main gir jaungi.
R: achha udo ab. Jab girogi tab pataa chalega.
S: for your kind infirmation main akele nahi girungi tum bhi giroge kyunki tumhe bhi skating nahi aati. Hahaha...

In between their sweet fight, sanyu fell down.
S: auchh...
R: kaun gira miss farzi???
S: crying playfully.
R: are are.. Tum thik to ho. Main..main hun na.. Uthh jao(trying to pick her up but she pulled his hand and he also fell)
R: aahhh...
S: ab kaun gira???(keeing her finger on her lower chin resting her elbow on thies)

With fraction of time they brust out laughing.
R: achha chalo ab thik se karte hein.
S: hmm sambhal k.


Now they started skating and even dancing. Every people around them were staring them. They forgot everything and lost in them and their dance. At last on final step randhir's one arm on sanyu's waist and other on her head. Her one arm on his neck and other on his shoulder. They were on the same filmy position as she fall on him. (Sanyu down and randhir up saving her from falling position). Both were again lost in themselves and it broke when they heard the claps. They came into sense and collided their forehead, then stood up. After that they enjoyed all rides.


It was 8 in evening now.
R: raat ho gayi hai chalte hein.
S: thank you so much. Itne special din k lie.
R: ahaan. Ye day 1 tha sweetheart. Now just wait and watch upto next 6 days.

He kisses dievilly on her cheeks, winks at her and went to the car.
R: ab statue bani khadi rahogi ya chalogi bhi. Dinner bhi karna hai.
S: haan..haan.. Chalo.

They went 4 home...


To be continue...


Last time i didnot get nice response dear i m so upset ...

not only like yar but comment bi likho na i m so hurted 😭

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey purnima dont be upset... im the first one reading this story and i must say... its beautifully written...😊 you must continue it... im waitng to know what will happen further😉

I just love the way you have written all along👏👏!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Gitanjalitilak

Hey purnima dont be upset... im the first one reading this story and i must say... its beautifully written...😊 you must continue it... im waitng to know what will happen further😉

I just love the way you have written all along👏👏!!!!


REALLY I M SO UPSET DEAR SUCH M ...

NO RESPONSE I HAVE TO UPLOAD FF NOW... 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res
Unres
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Did sanyu say hot??
Usski mental age bad gyi h kya
Btw nyc update
Luved it
Plz pm zaroor karna nxt tym
Keep up d gud wrk
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Posted: 11 years ago
read all updtes from prt 19
loved all
superb
thnx fr pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
REPLY FOR PART 23... OKAY. THAT WAS SO CUTE. I DON'T THINK YOU REALIZE THAT YOU WROTE THAT IN PERFECTION... like seriously... they're just cute...😃
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YAAAR! YOU DIDNT PM USSS! TOH KAISEEE! LUCKILY I LOOKED BACK AND SAW THE 24! I LOVED IT... SANYU IS COMING BACK TO HER REAL SELF... AWESOME YAAR!
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey dont be upset... loved it very much... 👍🏼
amazing...👏 continue soon...
waiting for nxt part...
update soon...

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