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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SWA1992

plz pm me when update 21st part...


ya i will upload soon... and i will pm u...
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sry dear whn i m uploading power cut hogye... sry...

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sry dear whn i m uploading power cut hogye... sry...

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PART 21


They went inside the shop.
Waiter: how can I help you sir.
R: table for two.
They took a table.
W: your order sir???
S: one king size mushroom pizza with extra cheese and butter and a coke for two.
W: sure mam.


R: kya kaha tumne???
S: kya kaha??? Jo khana hai wahi bola.
R: sirf apne liye???
S: nahi.. Tumhare liye bhi.
R: tumhe yaad hai mera favourite flavour.
S: yaad??? Mujhe.. nahi.. pataa.. kaise maine ye...wo...
R: koi baat nahi. Dhire dhire sab yaad aa jayega.
S: par hum rahenge kahan???
R: surprize hai.
S: sachi..
R: ahaann...


Meanwhile waiter places the order.
Sanyu was very excited and started eating rapidly and also childishly. He was smiling on her behaviour.


He saw some cheese stuck in cornor of her mouth. He smiled again moving his head down. Then took a tissue paper and wiped it.
R: sach me abhi bhi jhalli hai. Paagal kahinki.

Bt suddenly food stuck on her throat and she started caughing.
R: sanyu, are you ok???
He came near her chair and stood there holding her back stroking it. He started tapping on her back quite hardly but her cough was going on and on. Now he gave her a glass of water and tapped her head. And finally she stopped coughing.

R: dekh k nahi kha sakti. Lag gaya na khana gale me. Kuch serious problem ho jaati to. Paagal ladki. Dhyaan bhi nahi rakh sakti.

S(with teary eyes making a puppy face): ek pe to ye pizza pareshan kar raha hai upar se tum daant bhi rahe ho.

Soon he melted looking her puppy face.
R: achha achha thik hai. Aaram se khao. Koi le nahi jaa raha.
S: smiles(as she know how to make him normal; she usually used this technique to cool har down)

R(in his mind): ye to bilkul pehle ki tarah baat kar rahi hai. Yaad dilane par shaayad sab yaad aa jaaye. Aur ye bhi pataa chal jaaye ki kaun se shock ki wajah se ye sab bhul gayi.


S: chalo khatam ho gaya.
R: tum chalo...
S: haan haan janti hun. (making a manly voice)main bill pay karke aata hun.
R: fir se wahi farzi mazak. Jao wait karo gaadi mein. Main aa raha hoon.


After paying bill, they left for farm house. Within half an hour they reached. Meanwhile she slept on his shoulders and as usual he was admiring her. Due sudden jerk of car stoppage she woke up.


S(rubbing her eyes): hum aa gaye kya???
R: chalo aankhen band karo aur bahar aao.

She did as he directed. Slowly she opened her eyes after stepping down from car. Her eyes bacame bright and mouth opened after visualizing the view infront of her.


The house was fully lightened with a lot of LEDs(light emitting diodes generally used during celebrations to decorate walls). The walls were painted as per her choice. There was a seven segment display board playing WELCOME MY FARZI of a big size hanging at the entry. And there were rose petals spread as a path from car to the main door. It was the same preparation as it was done on their honeymoon.


S(mouth still open): ye sab mere liye.
R: ofcourse tumhare liye. Kuch yaad aaya???
S: haan. Main yahaan pehle bhi aayi hun. Aisi hi decorations thi au rd tum saath the. Bas itna hi yaad aa raha hai.

R: koi baat nahi. Chalo.
S: mujhe aur bhi kuch yaad hai.
R: kya???
S: tum mujhe kaise ander le gaye the.
R: haan mujhe bhi yaad hai par tumhare liye ek aur surprize hai.
S: fir surprize???


He held her hand and took her to the garden. There were a lot of skylamps burnt and giving brightness to every flower present there. There were a lot of roses of every possible colour. They were looking more beautiful due to glooming of the lamps.


S: ye kitna beautiful hai.
R: sirf dekhna nahi hai.
S: to???
R: chalo ander. In sabko aasmaan me udaana hai.
S: wow sachi. Kitna mazaa aayega.

She dancingly ran inside and was about to pick a lamp. Randhir stopped her.
R: ruko sanyu. Jaise main karoon waise hi karna warna ye nahi udega.
S: thik hai.


He held one of them, cut the string connected between that lamp and ground. Lightly picked up and slowly slide it in air.
R: dekha. Aise karte hein.


She did the same with each one and was enjoying doing that. This time randhir was not just admiring her. He arranged the music and was making a video recoring of their activities.

Tu hi to jannat meri, tu hi mera junoon
Tu hi to mannat meri, tu hi roob ka sukoon
Tu hi akhiyon ki thandak, tu hi dil ki hai dastak
Aur kuch na jaanu main, bas itna hi janoon
Tujhme rab dikhta hai yaara main kya karoon.



The music was on and randhir was continously admiring her. She was smiling, laughing, clapping and observing the sky full of lamps. Her dress, golden yellow frock giving a radiant shine was equally complementing the whole scene.


When she was busy in experimenting the beauty she felt something glowing fell on her hairs. When she marked, it was a lot of inch big shining zinc particles, which randhir was sprinkling on her.


S: randhir, ye kya hai. Tum sitaare dekh rahi ho aur maine unhe laa kar tumhare upar gira diya. Dekhna chahta meri farzi sitaron k saath kitni beautiful lagti hai.


Sanyu was enjoying all those. She started rotating on spreading her hands free and randhir was busy in sprinkling those zinc particles and also his favourite task admiring her. She was just looking like a golden angel bathing with stars with a lot of smiles and anxiousness.


After a few minutes, her head started spinning and she was about to fall but she was trapped by his strong arms. His one hand on her waist and other one on her back and her both arms were tightly clutching his shoulders. She was on his thies under his embrance.


In that position they had a long eyelock. Both were inside past memories and enjoying fresh moments of their love in same dream city which was a big proof of first step to their married life and also their love.


The stars, the moon, the lamps, the sky, the flowers and the brightness were blessing them with their special features and they were inside each others eyes in the same filmy position for minutes and hours.


To be continue...

Edited by purnima209 - 11 years ago
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uploaded check it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow amazing update dear...
waiting for next part
thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome beautiful lovely cute update *claps* purnima loved it d way u penned it was fab hats off to u dear mujhe laga ki mein koyi movie mein dream sequence dekh raha hu gud job thanks u so much for pm plz continu asap :)))
Edited by anu_anya - 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: richurachna

wow amazing update dear...

waiting for next part
thanks for pm



u welcome... ya i will post soon...

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