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Posted: 11 years ago
i missed last two upsates!!!!!! please pm me when u update next part...please...
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Originally posted by: SWA1992

i missed last two upsates!!!!!! please pm me when u update next part...please...


k and ha i will upload today nyt ek bar check karo k na...

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Posted: 11 years ago
Guys do u want my update today ?
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PART 16


At night...
Sanyu and pari playing after dinner and randhir enters the room.
R: chalo princess, kal subah school jaana hai. Come on so jao.
P: par papa mujhe mumma k saath khelna hai. Please thodi der.
R: no princess kal school k baad main tum dono ko ghumane leke jaunga but now go to bed.
P: sachi papa, hum kahan jayenge batao naa.
R: its a surprize darling aur ye surprize tabhi milega jab tum so jaogi aur good girl ki tarah kal school jaogi.
P: ok thik hai(making a sad face)

Seeing her sad face sanyu tell randhir..
S: randhir, bol kyun nai dete bechari kitni sad ho gayi.
R: baby, agar bataa diya to surprize kahan reh gayaa???
P: rehne do mumma, papa bahut ziddi hein ye nahi bataane waale.
R: look sikho kuch isse, rank no 1 se bahas karke koi faayda nahi. Wese aaj tumne mujhe mcp nahi bulaya, koi khaas wajah?????
S: tum jhute ho, tumne mujhe bataaya nahi ki tumhara naam randhir hai. Cheater.
R: wo isliye kyum mujhe tumhara mujhe mcp bulana pasand hai. Aur kisiki to himmat nahi hai mujhse aise baat karne ki.
S: tum hamesha se aise ho ya kuch dino ki bimaari hai. Chhodo jaane do Par main na tumhe randhir hi bulaungi. Khadoos.
R: koi baat nai meri jhansi ki raani mujhe to sab chalega.
(He says making a flirting face with his as usual smirk but ha was looking at her with love filled eyes)
S: ab late nahi ho raha???

(Meanwhile pari comes)
P: papa main yahin so jaun mumma k paas.
R: haan beta tum so jao apni mumma k paas.
(And pari slept at their middle. Soon sanyu also dozzed off. But sleep from randhir's eye was away. He was feeling very peaceful as if a dream of so many years was fulfilled, his fighting farzi, his beautiful princess and he, a beautifully designed life)
R(in his mind): sanyu kal jab tum nahi thi main akela tha sukun nahi tha, meri aankho se nind gaayab thi aur aj jab tum ho sab hai fir bhi nind gaayab hai, bas tumhe dekhne ka mann kar raha hai. Maine tumhe diya hua waada pura kiya sanyu maine humari beti ko tumse bhi zyada pyaar kiya aur usi k liye zinda raha. Aur shaayad zinda bhi isiliye tha kyunki tum zinda thi. Kaash main tumhe aj ye sab keh paata par koi baat nahi ek din aayega jab tumhe bhi is baat ka ehsaas hoga ki hum dono ek dusre k liye kitne important hein.

(And he continued thinking and thinking. This time nobody was there to interrupt his thoughts. And that night passed like that)

Next morning...
Again same schedule. Randhir woke up, kissed th hs anges and went to take a bath. Pari and sanyu were sleeping. After taking bath he called them and now both said in unison "bas 5 min ruko na please". Listening to this he laughed for few seconds, then
R(in his mind): bilkul maa pe gayi hai. Mere hi ghar me saare farzi engg hein.(again laughed, then called them once again pulling their blanket)
S: ruko na randhir, thodi der.
R: uthho warna paanidaal dunga.
P: please na papa..

(And he brings the jug and put the whole water on both of them)
S: what the?????? You mcp, ye kya kiya??? Pura gila kar diya.
P: kya papa subah subah.
R: farzi engineers uthhaya hai tum dono. Jaana nahi hai kya???

Pari and sanyu both stared each other for few seconds, then sanyu signalled pari to go towarss the bath. Both went to bathroom. Randhir was silently observing all those and did'nt react anything as was try to understand what was happening. Meanwhile when randhir was not in a condition to understand anything (body present mind absent), sanyu brought a bucket of water and pour it on randhir. He was completely wet. Looking this both sanyu and pari started hardly. But randhir and his ego. He was angry like anything.

R: what the???? Ye kya kiya????? Main abhi nahaa k aaya tha.
S: humne wahi kiya jo tumne humare ssth kiya. Kyun hai na gudiya????
P: haan papa. Apne hume gila kiya aur humne apko. Yeee papa haar gaye papa haar gaye.

Now randhir started running behind both. Just like tom and jerry cheese and chase, they were running behind each other and in this chase they reached the garden. Three of them were tired and stopped running. Randhir observed a water pipe and within no minute picked it up. Both pari and sanyu saw randhir holding the pipe. He was smirking like devil.
R: kyun??? Ab bach k kahan jaoge????
S: look mcp.. aisa mat karo, mere liye nahi to gudiya k liye. Please hume jaane do.
P(making a puppy face): please papa..
R: kyun shaitaan ki naaniyon tumne mujhe chhora tha??? Aur ab aisi faces banaa k smart ban rahi ho.

And without thinking anything he started sprinkling water on both of them)

To be continued ...


Edited by purnima209 - 11 years ago
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PART 17 :


Randhir started sprinkling water on sanyu and pari. They were completely wet. Both were looking just like angels whom he was admiring like numb. Both were looking exactly equal like juniors and seniors. After few seconds finally sanyu spoke up.
S: ruko randhir. Ho gaya na tumhara badla pura. Ab bas karo na.
P: haan papa. Band karona paani.

But suddenly sanyu started crying holding her eye.
S: aahhh.. meri aankh. Aaahhh.. kya kiya mcp tumne dekho.
R: are sanyu i m sorry, tum thik ho na.(and he released the pipe and started blowing her eye)

Bus according to as usual smartness of sanyu worked. Pari took pipe when randhir was busy with sanyu. Now within a second sanyu started laughing.
R: ye kya mazaak tha???
S: aur nai to kya??? Zarapichhe mud k dekho to.

As he stared, pari started sprinkling water oh him.
R: you junior farzi, main tumhe chhorunga nai.
P: papa pehle khud bacho, fir mujhe pakadna. Uske baad sochna chhorneki. Hahaha hahaha.

Even sanyu was laughing harder. Renuka was observing the whole incidence peacefully and smiling.
RS(in her mind): mere bacho ki hasi kitne saal inse door rahi. Aj ine khul k hasta dekh kitna sukoon mil raha hai. Tum logon ki khusi isi tarah bani rahe.

She came out of her thoughts when sheb heard their loud voice. Now randhir caught sanyu by her waist and was asking pari to give him pipe as we know he is more smart than anyone else. Again renuka smiled but this time she called them.
RS: chalo tino aa jao. Bahut bhig gaye ho. Bimaar pad jaoge. Come hurry up.
R: tum dono ko main chhorunga nahi. Iska badla to zarur lunga.
RS: randhir bete, tum bhi inke saath bache ban gaye ho. Ab jaldiaa jao. Breakfast ready hai.

Three of them went got ready and took their breakfast.
R to RS: mom, sanyu ko ready kar dijiye, use doctor k paas le jaana hai.
RS: par beta wo jayegi???
R: dont worry mom, maine use kaha tha ki main use office dikhaung. Doctor se bhi maine baat kar li hai.
RS: thik hai beta. Main abhi use ready karte laati hun.

She makes sanyu ready. Randhir takes both pari and sanyu with him. He drops pari at her school and mekes way to a clinic.
S: hum kahan jaa rahe hein(playing with her teddy)
R: hum pehle ekl uncle k paas jayenge fir office jayenge.
S: wow office. Fir to bahut mazaa aayega, wahan to bahut saari gaadiyaan hongi naa.
R: haan bahut saari.

Meanwhile they reached the clinic. It was wtitten outside. Dr. S. K. Batra. Ms in Brain sciences.
R: chalo utro.
They both got down from car and went inside. He makes sanyu sit on a sofa in cabin and sanyu sat there holding her teddy playing with her. He went to doctor and shook hands with him.
R: hello doctor, Randhir Singh Shekhawat.
D: oh yes yes mr. Shekhawat. Come sit sit. So she is your wife.
R: g doctor. Ap to dekh hi rahe hein iski haalat. Pichhla kuch yaad nahi ise. Bas aisa hi behave ho gaya hai iska.
D: hmmm. Kya ap detail me bataa sakte hein kya hua???
R: yes doctor(and he elaborates the whole story). Aur jab main isse mila, ye aisi hi thi.
D: oh i see. Dekhiye hume kuch tests karne honge. Like brain scanning, x ray, etc so that ki hume pataa chale ki aakhir problem kya hai.
R: yes doctor, jo hoga main karunga.

And they did every possible tests.
D: reports aane me thoda time lagega ap kal aa jaiye.
R: as you say doctor.

And he went taking sanyu to his office.
S: are waah.. hum aa gaye. Chalo gaadiyaan dekhne chalen.
R: haan chalo. Par tumse badla to lena hai aaj subah ka.
S: woh ghar par le lena, abhi chalo.

Meanwhile the went into lift.
R: unhhuuunnn.. badla to abhi hi lunga warna main nahi le jaunga tumhe office.
S: kitne ziddi ho tum. Achha to bolo kya karna hoga mujhe.
R: ziddi to main hun. Tumhe zyada nahi bas ek kiss karna hai. Mere gaal pe. Abhi
S: itni si baat.(and she goes forward him packed her lips on his left chik)

It was not the first time that she was kissing him. Still he got a jerk because it was happening after 8 long years.
S: ho gaya. Ye bhi bhala koi punishment hota hai. Chalo ab chalen.
R: (coming into sense and adjusting himself) haan aan.. chalenge par mujhe mazaa nahi aaya. Ek aur dusre gaal pe. Aur is baar zaraa pyaar se.
S: uff... kitne khadoos ho tum.
R: wo to main hun. Ab jaldi karo mujhe aur bhi kaam hai.

This time as she came nearer and nearer heclosed his eyes. She came forward to his right cheek and was about to kiss his but lift stopped. They were already in their floor and door opened.

S: dekho bhagwaan bhi nahi chahte ki tumahari punishment k bina tum mujhe office dikhao. Jaldi chalo ab. Mujhe bahut kaam hai.
R(in his mind): ye ladki ek din meri jaan le k hi rahegi. Maasumiyat me bhi tumhare touch me wahi pyaar hai. Lekin jo bhi ho ms. Farzi abhi bhi tumhare lips utne hi soft hein(he said with his as usual smark).
S: ab dekh kya rahe ho chalo. Mere paas time nahi hai. Hihihi..
R: sanyu tum..
S: hihihi hihi...

And they made way to the office..


To be continue...

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Posted: 11 years ago
resss ...voww 2 updates
unres
thnku soo much fr updating 2 parts toghter 😊
its just awesomeee...I hope sanyu wil b fine soon 😭
am loving this ff a lottt
update sooon!!!
Edited by avni775 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Both parts were just amazing
Beautifully written
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow so sweet and nice update mummy and beti ne milkar papa ki band bajayi
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res
Unres
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Omg 2 updates bck 2 bck
Wow lvly but no pm
Y ...
Chalo koi baat nhi .. next tym ok?
Coming 2 ur ff
That water fight ... i was giggling ol d way
Pari nd sanyu so similar
Pari so cmfrtbl wid sanyu
Adorable
Hope sanyu's reports r ok
Renuka's char is also nyc ..
Waiting fr d nxt update
👏

Edited by MAHAK1234 - 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: avni775

resss ...voww 2 updates
unres
thnku soo much fr updating 2 parts toghter 😊
its just awesomeee...I hope sanyu wil b fine soon 😭
am loving this ff a lottt
update sooon!!!



i m so happy but i m discontinuing this FF because really i m not getting good response when i uploaded only one part then i use to get thoda response but now for this two part sno response i m so hurted yar i really hurted...😭

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