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binimoti

@binimoti

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

The story is unique, awesome, I love it, Arnav a chubby boy and Khushi a fitness trainer, that is absolutely outstanding, looking forward to more updates.

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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Congratulation on starting a new story.

Arnav have a paunch in this story and in love with oily and sweet food, thats interesting. I was laughing out loud picturing an Arnav fantasizing about aloo paratha, jalabi and chocolate ice cream and kheer in his office. He love being a foody.

He is also in love with lavanayah and I think if he ever confess his love to her she may say yes because she seems to be greedy for money and Arnav is a wealthy man.

Wow Khushi is a doctor, I like her character. I was laughing out loud on her sarcastic reply to her client. She is really bore and I think training Arnav is just the job she have been waiting so patiently, a challenge. She is going to enjoy her job to give Arnav a makeover and transforming him as an attractive wealthy alpha male.

Anjali and Shyam are cute. They truly love each other and Arnav too.

Looking forward to read the story.

Update next chapter soon

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-Shilpaa-

@-Shilpaa-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Wow!! Glad to have you back!! 😊
And the story is refreshingly awesome. A potbellied Arnav and a fitness freak Khushi!!😎 Its gonna be reallly interesting. Waiting to see "Khushi in and La out"😉