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rulama

@rulama

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#111

Once again it was a surprising twist of NK turning up and Arnav's confidence and Khushi's reluctance at both NK's proposal and agreeing to Arnav's plans were beautifully portrayed!

👍🏼 Em!

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neha2013g

@neha2013g

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#112

awesome update... loved it...

eagerly waiting for the next part 😊

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Preethi

@blackdove

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#113

The first paragraph was beautiful. Loved the way you explained her jalebi making to ease her of the tension and fear. I was a bit amazed to find her knowing who ASR was though it was just a guess but may be it was because the way he made her feel.

And its quite nice to see Arnav believing khushi and somehow knowing her inside-out. Both had spent a long time without each other but their feelings for each other hasn't changed much.

Ha Ha. She used the ladder and no wonder Arnav caught her and his next words no wonder would have made her guess a surety.

It was really nice to see payal having a lot of faith in Khushi and her decision to meet ASR and on her belief that ASR might be Arnav. very nice to see the sisterhood.

The date was beautiful and the cutest part was him ordering the same food as khushi's. This muct have cleared her another doubt whether he still liked lucknowy food.

Aww. Loved the way both confessed their love without the 3 words.

It was very confident of khushi to have not accepted the offer to go to delhi leaving behind her dream and occupation and a very kind of Arnav to have understood her .

Glad Arnav didn't see so much in the news of Khushi's engagement with NK.

The last para of Arnav's is a bit confusing. I would read it later again for a more clear picture.

You dedicated this chapter to me?? Thanks a lot.😳 Many of us actually not just me had waited for the update.😆 So happy u updated.

Do update the 3rd one soon.

*The ladder scene.😳

Edited by ...Iyla... - 11 years ago

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#114

Carry her on his shoulder to Delhi hahahahahha

Loved the update

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#115

Waiting to see how the business minded Arnav Singh Raizada accomplishes the

task of winning Khushi over and successfully getting repaid of NK !

Thanks Emma ...

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Hetal

@Divyahet

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#116

Very beautifully written,
Wonderful concept,
Enjoyed both the updates,
And now I am eagerly waiting for the next update.
Thank you so much for sharing it ,
Take care.