Sandhir-Dangerous Love (Dark) ff part2 on pg11

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Anshika

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Posted: 11 years ago

INDEX UPDATED-

PART 1- PAGE 8

PART 2-PAGE 11

PART 3- ?? Drop in your comments for update 2 then part 3 😆

Edited by MyLiFeMyRuLeS.. - 11 years ago

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Anshika

@MainPareshaan

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Posted: 11 years ago

Intro padha??Nahi bhi padha toh koi nahi!

Accha here you go with Prologue

Prologue-

"You son of a b***h" he shouted as he saw the crime he had. He saw the crime in a fit of anger with an unsteady breath. A moment later he came back to his senses and saw it with the human eyes! He saw himself wearing once a pure white shirt which was now all blood soaked.

That guy's blood was dripping from his finger tips.

A tear escaped from his eye, this thing called love has made him a monster.

"NO NO NO NO NO NO NO" He shouted.

"Randhir!!!! Its okay! Its okay!! Kuch nahi hua hai!! Main hoon yahaan" A gentle feminine voice came.

He opened eyes only to meet hers, those chestnut brown eyes had made him do this, this crime that he had committed. He came back to reality, he was here with her, his head was resting on her laps under a tree on a calm summer day as the winds blew.

"Its okay baby!" She said as he got up and hugged her with a fear, a fear of losing her, the possessiveness he had for her

A fear that he had faced that day. A normal fun loving guy who had turned into a possessive lover and then into a monster.

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Anshika

@MainPareshaan

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hola!!! So part 2 is here!!!

The red part is email

the blue part is diary!!

Enjoy reading see ya down

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She said "Randhir woh..." "Sanyukta! Vardhaan sir aur main poori koshish kar rahe hain use trace karne ke liye! Chill karo! Use kuch nahi hua hoga" He responded, it seemed as if he read her mind. "Sanyu! Chinta mat karo" He assured her.

She lay on bed and rested her head on his shoulder, while he continued to work on his laptop, within no time she fell asleep. A moment later, Randhir looked at her and caressed her hairs and then gently kept her head on the fluffy pillow and gave a kiss on her forehead.

He opened his email and typed

Sir,

She asked me again regarding him, what should I do? Every time I look at her face it just makes me feel even more guilty. First the crime and now this lie.

Sir, it just torments me even more and more when I lie to her.

I don't know what to do! I just don't wanna lose her

I think I'm gonna lose my sanity some day due to this

Sir, even you aren't here, what should I do...

Sir, he was my best friend but I never expected this from him

It was heart breaking for me, to first see this kinda side of him then brutally murder him and then lie to whole god damn world.

Sir I seriously don't give a damn about the world

It's her about whom I care the most about.

Sir, by hiding this truth from her am I betraying her?

Am I being unfaithful to her?

--Randhir

And sent it to Vardhaan.Suryavanshi@gmail.com.

He took out his diary from the drawer and started to pen

It just mortifies me even more when I lie to HER, I still get his dreams, our last encounter, our last confrontation, his real face, his taunts, his warnings, his shady side.

Love is beautiful they said but they never told that love is hazardous, I still get petrified when I think what will happen when she comes to know about this.

I wrote another email to Vardhaan sir, only he can help me from recovering from this disquieting incident. Though he's away to USA for a pivotal research, but still his emails alleviate me.

I'm sure even he was horrified that one of his best students had this kind of devious side.

He too witnessed the felony, he did always ask me to forget it and move on but I can't.

And how can I? I killed my best friend.

Stories always concluded with AND THEY LIVED HAPPILY AFTER.

One can never ever have a happily ever after story

This isn't a happily ever after story

This isn't the end.

2 years have went by but I still haven't recovered from the trauma, I still am possessive for her.

Say it my love or fear but I can't live without her even a minute, I have married her but still I haven't managed to tell her the truth or get over my possessive behavior.

A story never has a perfect ending cause there is a VILLAIN in every story. This is my story, though the villain is dead but he did manage to ruin the ending of my story.

Precap- Vardhaan's email! Mystery unveils

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SO how was it??

Drop in your comments!!!

And unres soon!!!

Armour

Anshika

Edited by MyLiFeMyRuLeS.. - 11 years ago

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Anshika

@MainPareshaan

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Posted: 11 years ago

Ola! Peeps!!

So dangerous love ka pehla part!!!

Excited are you???

Accha na lage toh baccha samjh kar maaf kar dena

Btw the blue part means its written in diary

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Love is a kind of danger which cannot be compared to anything else, there was a time when love was nothing but shit to me! But then she came into my life, she made me realize what love is. I thought that love is an eternal power which can never be defeated, it can never let anything happen to you or your partner if your love is true. But I never knew the dark side of love until that day...

That day when the Villain or I should say Monster inside me made me do this. Her love that I possess made me do this, I never wanted to but had to.

What can you do when your best friend...

"Randhir!"Sanyu said making Randhir conscious as he hid his petite diary in his coat "Tum kya likhte rehte ho uss diary mein yaar??" She said as she kept her hand on his shoulder. "Kuch nahi! Aur waise tum yahaan kya kar rahi ho?" He replied as he kept the pen on the table, she smiled and then back hugged his neck and replied " Kya hai na! Main apne pati dev ko yeh yaad dilane aayi thi ki aaj hume dinner pe jana tha!And no doubt pati dev bhool gaye honge" she then looked at his face which was just a inch far as they both smiled.

Randhir leaned in and gave a peck on her lips "Rank no.1 kabhi kuch nahi bhoolta" He replied as he got up from the chair "Mister! Maan lo tum bhool gaye thhe dinner ke baare mein" She replied and proceeded towards the cupboard.

Randhir came towards her and grabbed her waist and lifted her up , "Haan toh tum kya bol rahi thi rank no.1 ke baare mein?" He asked with his killer smirk on. "Rank no.1 hoge tum poori duniya ke liye lekin mere liye tum ghar pe mere pati ho, company mein mere business partner ho aur room mein" She replied leaving her sentence incomplete as he made her sit on the bed "Aur?"He asked naughtily "Aur room mein mere boyfriend ho! Do you get that?" She replied.

"Accha! Mrs.Sanyukta Randhir Singh Shikhawat! Since hum room mein hai toh main tumhara boyfriend hua! So I have the whole right to..." He replied naughtily as he came near her, all ready to have a long night.

KNOCK KNOCK

"Sir aapki gaadi tyaar hai" Said the servant from the other side of the door and then he left, disturbing their moment and leaving Randhir pissed off as he missed a great opportunity and Sanyukta all laughing.

He said"Haaan haaan!! Aur haso!! Ab chalo! Mujhe bahut bhook lagi hai" He continued "Waise tum woh deep blue wali saree peheno acchi lagti ho usme" he then left.

The lovebirds had a great time, having dinner out atleast once a month was like a ritual they followed. Though being married for past 2 years it only seemed as if it was yesterday when he proposed her.They came back and were all ready to sleep(normal sleep).

"Randhir main tumse kuch puchu?" She asked as she folded her saree

"Haan bolo kya hai"He said while working on his laptop

"Randhir, woh..."

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So how was it???

Accha laga??

Ab acche acche comments bhi de do!!!

Edited by MyLiFeMyRuLeS.. - 11 years ago

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Sheron♡

@Sheron18rockerz

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Posted: 11 years ago

Ress 🤣 again first 🤣 🤣

Prologue de wrna meri unressing bhul jaa 😆
Aur issbar mujhe no pm ab dekh maine kaha tha na ress krke chhod dungi 😳

Aur prologue ke bina suggestion maang rhi hai
Hume kya antayami samjha hai
Phle prologue baad mein kuch bhi
Aur mera abhi bhi res hi hai

Ress 😆

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Unressed(finally ):

Main yahain likhun kya prologue ke liye toh dusra ress kr rakha hai yhain balwass karun kya nhi mogambo bura mann jayegi toh fir hain lets give mogambo some suggestions for her "dark" ff name mere dimag mein bohut bure ideas aate hain agr bekaar lage then...

Thats not my fault ok soo...

1.)sandhir ff "dark": love's cruel game
2.)sandhir ff "dark": love can make u do "ANYTHING"
3.)sandhir ff "dark": there is "someone" for you

Aur agr lage ki acche lagenge toh bata dungi tab tak ke liye "stalk" krte rhiye "sheron singh" ko...
Dubara ress

Few yahain dubara paste and copy kr daala

Res!!! 🤣

Edited by Sheron13rokerz - 11 years ago

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Kirti

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Posted: 11 years ago

res.. Sorry to all the writers..

M feeling quite too lazy and tired to unres all my comments today...

I promise to unres all my comments within 1 or 2 days...😭😭

So, apologies for that...

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Unres..

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That seems quite really very interesting...

As far as the prologue is concerned, I just loved it..!!!!!!

Wow, such a spontaneous and disastrous change from a fun loving person to a possessive lover who eventually turns out to be a MONSTER..!!!!!!

And that is exactly what I'll be looking forward to..

What are those unexpected occurrences of events which unfold the dark mysteries of SanDhir??

How is it gonna affect them to that extent??

Looking forward to your ff...

Keep updating..😊

Love ya

Edited by kirtiarora111 - 11 years ago

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Anshika

@MainPareshaan

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Rekha85
INTERESTING!!!!!!!!!!!VERY VERY INTERESTING!!!!!!!!(Vaardhan Style)
I only use this style...for the special ones...which make me think more...coz Vardhaan sir want his students to think more!!!!!!!!
u also made me think more!
I just loved it!
Keep writing!
and Update Soon!
Lazy math hona!!!!!!!!!!
With Love Rekha!

Yaa I'll update soon😃

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Anshika

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008
Tell me one thing kya ge story fb pe bhi posted hai kya????

I have posted the prologue in 1 group

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Anshika

@MainPareshaan

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008
Hmmm I thought I read it thats why I asked

You must have read it on Sandhir cafe !

Hai na?

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Anshika

@MainPareshaan

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Sheron13rokerz
Phli baat tune bohut late update kra
Main ek din aur ruk jaati pr thoda lamba update toh deti
Kherr 😆 joh bhi update dia mast dia

Humesha ladkiyan diary likha krti hain pr tune toh mere bhai se hi diary likhwadaali had hai🤣
Mogu maze aye padhne mein

Agla update jaldi wrna maine *sees left side*
Baalti bhar karele ready rakhe hain*evil smirk*

Chal abhi update jaldi kr

🤣 🤣 🤣

Tujhe hamesha karele ki hi sojhti hai kya??

I'll update soon! Pakka

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