Playing Cupid - SS (part six is up!)

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@ournewboyfriend

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: ilovepyaar
OK, read chapter 1. GIRL, WHAT A UNIQUE CONCEPT! I LOVE IT! Haha Sanyu and Randhir got hit by the cupid! Off to read more! Sorry my review is short, I just wanna desperately read more right now. :'D Okay, I can't believe you actually reviewed every chapter. SAFFI, YOU DEVIL XD

Haha very nicely written. Dance huh? Loved chapter two, but it was too short, so I'm going to keep this short too. >.> Sorry :P Didn't want to start it just yet

Lil, I loved it! I loved everything about it. How the pic of the bus was at the back of the letter and RD not showing Sanyu, and how Sanyu wants to look pretty for RD! Oooh lala, this is getting good! Going to the next chapter now! c: yay. Ofc she wants to look pretty, even my grandma would want to look nice infront of RD

WOW Lil! Loved the manip of Sanyu's dress. Loved the drunk Sanyu, loved the drunk of love Randhir, they're both sooo intoxicated, albeit it being in different ways. Can't wait to see what's happening next! It was a fail manip xD thaaanks. I like drunk Sanyu a lot tbh, I wish I got to see it more often :/

Wow, that was a good chapter and moreover a good story! That was an intense twist - Sanyu is Hedone! =O Wow! Now I know where the Hedone reference for our suitcase ad came from. Randhir is going to save Sanyu, so excited. Wanted to see them play truth or dare though. By the way, you're such a brilliant writer! I loved the way you portrayed drunk Sanyu! I found Thanatos more intense than her maybe being Hedone. xD I love Thanatos. Specially in this story. You're gonna see him a lot c: I purposely skipped T or D, didn't want that here :P thank yooou <3

BIG BIG BIG BIIIG SHOUTOUT TO SAFFI FOR BEING A HELLUVA AWESOME PERSON c:

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@PrussianBlue

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Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Loving this story! Please PM me when you update?

Thanks :D

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purnima209

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Posted: 11 years ago

#73

awsme parts yar i read all in one go...

so interesting...

jaldhi post na nxt part soon...

eagerly waiting...

and pm me pls...

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coolishparul

@coolishparul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: purnima209
awsme parts yar i read all in one go...

so interesting...

jaldhi post na nxt part soon...

eagerly waiting...

and pm me pls...

...👏

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just call me lil.

@ournewboyfriend

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Posted: 11 years ago

#75

Hi. ^_^ Who else loved Thanatos? I sure did. xD Update :3 I don't have a long A/N for this one, so yeah just, go ahead, read it xD

Dedicated to: ilovepyaar aka Saffi who wanted me to update but does not know how much I want her to update...all her works *_* read them, they're awesomesauce. :3

+ + PLAYING CUPID - PART VI + +

"I just wanna sleep, m-move Randhiiir," she slurred, still half drunk. "Move! Let me, s-sleep. . Sleep . ."

She figuratively slept in his arms. Great, Randhir muttered, flowing with sarcasm.

This was going to be a long, long night.

+ + +

"Who are you?" she asked, feeling herself being supported to an upright position.

"Kaustuki?"

"I have no idea what you're saying," a voice, a deep one said to her, "but we are getting out of here."

"Don't take me back to him," she said sluggishly. The person supporting her sighed before throwing her onto a soft cushion. The sound of a car started not long after.

"Where are we going, Kaustu?" she said, closing her eyes tightly as she laid there.

She heard some mutterings similar to, "never doing this again," and "freaking Sanyukta," come from the sides.

Eventually the car came to a hault, and she felt herself being pulled out of the place.

"Kaustuki?" she asked, holding the person's face in her hands. It felt a little rough, but due to her hazy state she didn't notice at all, she was seeing triple, so she closed her eyes again.

"I'm not.." ignoring the voice, her head lolled to the side and her eyes dimmed shut.

She was lifted again by the person, though she could hear more murmurs, "freaking heavy too."

But nonetheless, the person seemed pretty strong and lifted her anyway, supporting her upright. Her eyes remained closed, because suddenly she was tired, too tired.

But after a few moments, she popped her eyes open, due to water droplets suddenly being splashed on her face.

"Agh!" she screamed and got up instantly, only to find a very tired Randhir, black circles under his eyes, looking back at her.

"Ran-Randhir? What," she said, tilting her head to a side.

"Last night, you, um, fell asleep. Uh, in my arms, and, well, I was also kind of.. Tired. So, we, slept in the lab. Yeah, and then when I woke up I, uh, got you here," he managed to complete, his cheeks the color of a deep crimson, though Sanyukta couldn't notice that, of course, since she could barely look at him properly.

"Aha, what is this p-place?" she said and yawned.

"Uh, the classroom? I wouldn't take you to the girls hostel, obviously," he said and rolled his eyes.

"I'm hungr-yyy," she yawned again. Control freak, he muttered under his breath.

"C'mon Randhir, cafeteria," she tried to stand up, but immediately fell down, her knees still weak.

"Wait.." she said while he scooted closer to her for support. "Is he gone? He, Tha-" she stopped in mid-sentence, scared to say his name out. "From yesterday, the godly figure," she explained.

"Who was he? What does he want from you?" Randhir asked instantly, dying to know the answer.

"Later," she showed her palm indicating a pause for now. She does need rest, badly, Randhir thought, seeing her condition.

He was in for much more Sanyukta-sitting, or, at least for the time being.

+ + TO BE CONTINUED .. + +

A/N: :3 Not much in this chapter, but yeah I felt like describing what happened after the night.

Speaking of 'what happened', I'll update that soon, hopefullly. >_>

LOVED today's episode though! The lifting, the drunk Sanyukta, everything. So perfect. <3 Can't wait for Monday!

Sorry for the long-ish A/N.

And sorry for the short-ish chapter. xD But I suck at writing long ones, so.

Love,

Lil x

Edited by aciddaisies - 11 years ago

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Saffi Sanam

@ilovepyaar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#76

Haha I loved this! It was so cute how Randhir took care of her and they spent the night together (in a very non - naughty way of course). He's scared of even saying the name too, how cute! Loved the update Lil!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#77

aww...lv n await ur updates
they r cho gud
cnt wait fr next
*wondr whr u get those ideaz frm*

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just call me lil.

@ournewboyfriend

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Posted: 11 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: ilovepyaar
Haha I loved this! It was so cute how Randhir took care of her and they spent the night together (in a very non - naughty way of course). He's scared of even saying the name too, how cute! Loved the update Lil!

Randhir is cute c:

Non - naughty way yes xD I suck at writing mature stuff. >_>

She* xD yeah, after-effects.

Plus, in Greek Mythology, names have power, so :P Thaaanks:)