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Posted: 11 years ago

Awesome one.. So Khushi is not feeling good about the baby:) feel bad for arnav about his feeling for the baby for not experiencing the parenthood:
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesum update...👏👏
Its Scaryyy...What will be khushi's reaction after knowing the truth... 🥺
My Poor Arnav...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Love this update so much, I am not good with commenting, so all I can say is that loved it so much that I have read this chapter 3x just in the past 24hrs... Cannot wait for the next chapter..


You have an amazing talent, when I read your story it makes me feel like I am connected to the characters..

You portray arnarv and khushi's emotion so well that I sometimes feel like i am watching a live episode of some real life series.

Amazing... Waiting for more.
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Posted: 11 years ago


We can sure Wait.. for TVK.. update...It's always worth it.
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Posted: 11 years ago

So again late bt finally I am here as soon as I complete reading the update..

This was a awesme bt a bit sensitive update... many unknown factors were reveled as to say about pregnancy..

dii.. I really appreciate ur efforts that u put down each and every bit of req. information with the logistics of the situation. It makes it more realistic and give a diff. stand to stand and think... from single single moments to the slightest changing uneasiness in thoughts... everything is a perfect .. a perfect dish with all ingredients with fine proportions and output as a tremendous serve...

dii... u have a grt sense of humour plus the way u keep maintaining the positions of characters as still holding the passion to overcome the worst is just top of all what I can say.

Once again I ll say,Dii ... this is the bestest piece of work I am reading...

Dii for you:

Jeena mujhe ata tha par ye rang maine kabhe na jeeya tha

The riste saare mere aanchal mei kabhe aisa kuch na mehsooos kiya tha

Hote the wafa aur saza mere bhe khayalo mei kahe naa kahe

Par aise kaaynaat mei bana jaha na dekha tha

Hai har umang yaha ek naye ate savere se

Mahekte hai har kali murjhae jo raat mei the

Hai aapka bhe ana mehfil mei mere kuch aisa he

Khile hai udaas chehre ab aapke ane se he...

Nw coming to the update:

First again a ques. Nagging my brain coz.of feelings I feel after reading this update.. will Arnav be anytym in future can make love to her lady... as today the distress I feel in him made me think so??? As seeing the lady doc. Touching her make him uneasy... laying his lady on bed and seeing her pains, he still without his own concern gt in the web of that night.. and that is smething that make him what he nvr wanted to.. a weak man.

Arnav is really a wonder to be noted as I love hw well he got connected with the kid.. the feeling is so pure hi smile his eyes speaking of the love and wen he is called as a father by god... dii it was so well written ... a new emotion added in their life and so touchy...

I thought earlier things are simple sometimes bt here its always more of complications waiting on their way..

Arnav helplessness... his fears... his shattering figure... his life gtng weak and many othr were very well written... in different set of situations...

He is a man who knw how to handle the situation to which no one can earn a hand near by him... this is coz, of the grand character u have created.

Arnav is all on his way to gt all about pregnancy .. hw he care and stand by her give a spl. Feeling to Khushi.. m sure of that ... as smetym doing smething spl. Is not necessary being by someone's side is everything...

Gosh dii.. u are scaring ..by mentioning so much about pregnancy... by god is it so scary???... nw I can feel hw Arnav must be feeling as reading that section of her tests made Goosebumps gt their places active on my body.

Khushi .. she is just the best ... aww the feelings wen she adore her man that he is with her in this period of tym wer she really require him...just awesme...

Khushi .. as a woman her senses are more active that only the reason hw her inner will is giving her vibes not so good... wen realted to her child.. wer the soul is so pure and innocent then also hw she feel like not so connected... hope she start feeling that bonding or may be as Arnav said its being new thing so she may be feeling stressed.. but yaa women's sixth sense nvr fail the predictions.. hope she gt her answers as she is Arnav's wife and upon that she is Khushi... I am scared that if she can know about Adi being the person behind Payal.. then hw far she can be behind curtains not knowing about her state..hope she gt her answers soon..

Aww Arnav's possessiveness for Anjali was lovely.. he he too naturally stard to be in this bond without any efforts of his own...this was a nice start btwn the siblings and hope to read more of about them.

Arnav and khushi nok-jhok was like again gtng a life... we really missd it and I love hw they tease one another.. dii such a marvelous update..

Aww... so is the man alive who has used Arnav to beg around in streets and why is Arnav searching him... and o god Adi's case is soon to start ... hope this dnt gt Arnav draggd in it...

So new twist and turns and past is coming on way... hope it dnt effect much of Arshi's life .

Overall as always a super fabulous fantastic and mind blowing update.

Aya na jo ab tak mere is jahaan mei

Pher bhe judne lage ab har saans hai,

Saaya nahe hai tu mera

Pher bhe lagne laga apna mujhe hai,

Khwahishein bhe naye hone lage

Khabar ane ke tere he naye umeed jagane lage hai,

The kareeb hum pehle bhe kise mod par

Ana tera ab hume aur kareeb lane lage hai

na tere surat hai na tera abhe koi wadood hai

pher bhe hone laga kareeb jaise mera he tu hissa hai...

please bear my extremely free flying thoughts... and sorry for delay.. totally tied up.

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awaiting Maha update!!?, is it in a new thread?
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Posted: 11 years ago
dosto aaj na karo maha update ka intzaar ... kyuke kal ki raat hoga khtm ye intzaar..
Edited by arnavini - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful update as always. Sorry for late comment though. Each and every single detail of pregnancy is spectacular. These updates make me remember me the golden days of pregnancy. I really loved it though there were so manyi difficulties associated with that!!
U have captured one more important concept.. A woman's instincts which khushi feels now as there is something wrong abt the feeling of the baby.👏 I greatly believe in that. Once again hats off deepthi
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Posted: 11 years ago
So umm i dont know if u still remember me...well i sorta left IF before u started this FF...but my buddy Meg aka crazy4ArnavSR pleaded me, threatened me (just like i did her when u were writing The Dawn of the Dawn) and so here i am...and i need to mention this with every FF u are getting better and better...if i always wanted to have a printed version of TDoTD now i definitely want to keep this one too...it got an amazing story line...i laughed when they acted all posy n B/W...i cried when they were going through a lot...it was amazing...ve no words left...
SUPERB yaar...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: arnavini

dosto aaj na karo maha update ka intzaar ... kyuke kal ki raat hoga khtm ye intzaar..

Lekin aaj maha update mil jaae
To Zindagi hojae Gulzar 😃

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