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Posted: 11 years ago
Deeps... very first wanna Hug u🤗... now hug me back😃...
what a superb update yaar... i have no words to describe sucha wonderful epi...

tell me one thing.. have you done any psychology on human emotions...? how could you write so well??

first update the way you started of... Arnav reacting over Adi's body... i was visualizing the complete scene ... the depth you have showed the emotion with your beautiful writing is praise worth👏👏..

and ofcourse his genius brain as Kushi conveyed(...a biggest game-changer-as*hole...)n lol...


back home... the convo with Nani and Anjali was too good.. and Aman had his piece of cake ocouse with a cherry finally...😉😆

Loved DEEPTHI's (Arnavs character )... kaise banaya deepthi tumne... such a outstanding character... Kushi's character is good but Arnavs is too good..

And coming to last update it was breath taking.. of course i was holding my breath throughout..

Beautiful and beautiful Deepu the way u are showing Arnav ... HE took all the BLame on HIM, though he was not at fault.. can someone LOVE so purely in REAL... ??

Today... Kushis restlessness was worth reading.. how much ever we are angry on our beloved ... but we miss and care ... EOD..

and finally...

Arnavs struggle and battling his inner turmoil...I was better on streets, at least no one would have got hurt or were unhappy because of me...This line conveys to what extent he is suffering... yaar itna dard kyon deti ho yaar 😭... why ARNAV... and his decision that She shouldnt know... he want to take every pain and sheild her from everthing... beauty character yaar... im again falling in love... fisrt my hubby... now again... ur created ARNAV...😛

and ... and...

Are WE having a girl or a boy? superb start of discussion after silence ...
the entire convo between ARSHI..-.. i would like to say one word... ETERNAL...

im falling short of words to decribe their emotion which you have conveyed very very very beautifully... NO WORDS...

ab ki baar ARSHI ko milaake bhi RULAADIYAA...😭


Love you deeps... loads of Blessings!!






Edited by abhinavasen - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Totally Fab updt...ohh that mean Arnav was aware abt the reason behind Adis changed behaviour towards him...but Anjali wasnt in the fault...as Aman said Adi was well mature to understand wat is right or wrong...agree that in tender age he followed his sister orders but she was even a kid that time...but later on with the time she understood that Arnav is not a bad person...loved that Aman n Anjali part...awww they r such cute couple...made fr eachother other...god bless them

its not easy fr a Man to accept some1 elses child wholeheartedly...but he did...that really a big deal...he is ready to do anything n everything fr his leady love...that call the pure love...their emotional breakdown was very touchy, Khushi cried 1st time

waiting fr the next...want to see some lovely dovely moments btw Arnav-Khushi n Aman-Anjali...cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Update was too good.
Arnav has known that intially it was anjali's insecureties which took adi against him.
Nani has indeed made the right decision to move in with arnav. Both khushi and him need nani right now.
Aman is indeed the best friend. A constant support which arnav needs right now.
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing work deepthi am speechles after evry updt i got imotional that cant decide hw expres my feeling thankgod adi is dead n i justify arnav action i always amazd aman charctr hats of that man today my respect grw more fr nani last scene brought tear my eys nagar na lage mdre arshi ko atlast kodos to u deepti to justify evry chrctr imotions tanx for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing work deepthi am speechles after evry updt i got imotional that cant decide hw expres my feeling thankgod adi is dead n i justify arnav action i always amazd aman charctr hats of that man today my respect grw more fr nani last scene brought tear my eys nagar na lage mere arshi ko atlast kodos to u deepti to justify evry chrctr imotions tanx for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
fabulous and also well written update...i cried along with arnav-khushi,couldn't stop my tears as i read the end of the chapter...and as arnav said i too feel the same that what Arnav did to Adi,his punishment,his death n all should create no regret...he got what he deserved though i feel he got an easy death.
looking forward for next chap!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesum update...
No words to explain these emotions... I am literally speechless...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved the update!😃
wonder what will happen when Khushi will come to know about Arnav's lies😡
Continue soon!😳😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Now, I have started to accept that Arnav had committed though not cold blooded but a murder. How I wish he wouldn't have, but its easier to said than done 'that man stole his chance of happiness with the woman he loved, who sat back waiting at home for answers, which he couldn't give and showed absolutely not an ounce remorse/guilt for what he had done.' Adi's behavior could blow off any man in his place and this was Arnav, who had always been cruel to the people if they dared to hurt anyone who belonged to him.

Now about Anjali and Adi. Though Anjali had sown the seeds of hatred in the mind of his little brother but, Adi nurtured the seeds and allowed it to grow into a huge tree. He always used wrong means to please his sister who meant the world to him. He had always been dishonest and feed lies to his sister. Anjali was responsible for Adi's hatred but only to some extent not completely. The last stunt he pulled by dragging an innocent woman in his war of revenge, who had nothing to do with all this was his greatest crime.

I was more than sure that Arnav was not going to reveal the truth to Khushi at any cost. But, the reasons were a bit different, as to why he shielded her from the truth.

I was feeling so sorry for Arnav, when he had completely given up on Khushi, the man who was used to winning gave up the woman he loved for numerous reasons for his guilt because he felt he felt he didn't deserve her, for he couldn't bring the answers Khushi asked for. That part just showed how much he loved her, it was as if he was only breathing for her but stayed in the shadows to know she was safe and sound. Khushi was like withering away without his touch, without feeling his presence near her finally gave up the resolve of not touching and not talking till she got answers. That feathery touch was beautifully written. With this update the Arnav of this story has started to grow in me.

I just wish Khushi comes to know about the truth from somewhere before the video tape reaches her it would be better if its from a well wisher like Aman, so that someone is there to handle her.
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Posted: 11 years ago
congratulations celebration... new thread .. congo dii.. hope u add millions of such threads😉😉


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