A Promise Forever - Virika

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Posted: 11 years ago
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The story starts right after dabbu's wedding. Viren is back in the room ( Jeevika and maanvi's room before their wedding) and Jeevika is outside in the garden thinking about everything that has happened in the past few days: Karan's death, how she almost went to jail, Swamini bua's heart attack and the fight between her and Viren. Even though everything was fine now she couldn't shrug off the feeling she had when she first came to rishikesh that she and Viren
might never get back to how they once were. But she was wrong. They got through it. :)
But Buaji's heart attack had not only created a rift between her and Viren, it had also given her something else to think about.
Slowly she walked into her room and saw Viren standing in front of the mirror in his white kurta fiddling with the buttons. She went and hugged him from behind.
Viren- Kahaan thi tum? Kabsewaitt karr raha hoon.
Jeevika- Bass. Yaheen thi.
Viren could sense that something was wrong. He turned around to face her.
Viren- Jeevika kya hua?
Jeevika- Kuch nahi Virenjee. Bass ek baat kehni thi.
Viren- Kaho.
Jeevika- Swamini buaji ke saath jo hua woh aapke saath kabhi nahi hona chaahiye. You are never allowed to have a heart attack.
Viren never realised the fear Jeevika was living with. The fear of losing him to not just circumstances but also to death
and sickness. She couldn't imagine her life without him and the past few days had reminded her how much she needs him in her life.
Jeevika-Virenjee Aap meri baat sunn rahe ho na? Never ever are you allowed to have a heart attack. Okay?
Viren- Understood.
He cupped her face in his hands and kissed her forehead. Meanwhile hisphonee rang and as he was about to walk over to the bed to pick it up she held his hand to stop him.
Jeevika- You are also never allowed to walk away from me again. Chaahe kuch bhi hojaaye. Humaare beech ya humaare saath. Aap mujhe chodd karr nahi jaa sakte and you are not allowed to ask me to leave either.
Even though she was trying to sounds authoritative her voice was breaking and tears were falling from her eyes.
Viren- Jeevika I am sorry. Maine gusse mein pata nahi kya kya bol diya. Tumse door rehne ke baare mein nain soch bhi nahi sakta. Tum toh meri sunshine ho.
Tumhaari smile dekhe bina meri life bhi toh incomplete hai. Jab tum aas pass nahi hoti ho toh realise hota ki tum meri life mein kitni important ho. Sach tum nahi toh kuch nahi!
And with this he engulfed her in a tight hug never wanting to let her go ...

Another part coming up if you guys like this. Please let me know if you like it I will write the next part too.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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it was an awesome update
loved the whole part
amazing
superb
fantastic
continue soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wrong links have gone to a few people i sent PMs to. I am sorry I shall correct them ASAP!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice Start !
The Fear Jeevika was Having is Quite understood !
Loved This New Virika Scene U added after the wedding!
cont soon :)
nd yeah i recieved the wrong link .. but thankfully i foubd out frm ur post !:)
do pm me the next time u update !! :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res
*Unres*
Loved the update..
Awesome start
Totally amazing
Superb virika scene
Nice story
Looking forward for more
Do continue soon..
Edited by MyKryan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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sorry for unressing too late !
my exams were going on!
the update is fab!!
plz continue soon!

Edited by sweet_aayushi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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continue soon..😊
loved it..!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res will unres soon!
sorry exams goin on!
send me a req plz!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome start
cannot wait to read more
superb
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Posted: 11 years ago
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its really very nice
words are so beautifully written
loved it
do continue
its amazing
will be waiting for next part
update soon

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