Submerged! - ArShi FF:New note P.No 132

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Horizon

@Horizon

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Posted: 11 years ago

#151

Here finally. IS, Loved the crisp narration of the background story. You made sure to peep into ever important character, esp loved Ratna mallick. and your articulation of her inner struggle .

Your DSR seem to give a tough competition to his bade bhai in the looks dept..:)

Loving the utile up and look forward to the next.

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Ipoona

@Ipoona

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#152

Inspired ... Loved it !!! Loved the pace ... The history ... And of course loved where you are taking us ... Please dear writer ... I don't want to speculate where we are going but my Dil mangay one thing ... Hopefully I will get it ... Let me be as cryptic as your tale. Inspired ... Plot thickens ... Mystery deepens ... Truly left at a cliff hanger ... Not once but twice ... I really am hoping for something ... 😃 Love where this may lead us ... Really a magnificent mystery ... Inspired ... Loved it !!

I had not read your note in the end ... Too dry ?? Not at all ... It was easy to read ... Easy to follow ... Succinct yet detailed ... Romance with ASR ... I see a bit of the iceberg ... I am hoping ...

Edited by Ipoona - 11 years ago

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Varsha Dutt

@varsha2KD

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#153

Amazing update...

I am hanging in here in the hopes for Arshi's romance 😆

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InspiredSoul

@InspiredSoul

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#154

My Dear, Dear Readers and Friends,

Once again, I come with a note - to thank all of you for your encouraging and lovely responses! You all have been unbelievably patient with my narration style and pace of the story, and I truly appreciate that!

Here's a promise that I intend to deliver on - Part 4 coming up very soon will have what you desire 😊

Till then, here is something to think about!

A Note To Ponder Upon:

When a budding writer needs some help to up the ante of the epic reveal of her new suspense story - who better to assist than the author of all times, William Shakespeare?

So here is a clue for Part 4! 😉

"What's in a name? That which we call a rose by any other name would smell as sweet". - (Act II, Scene II). Romeo and Juliet

The war cry of my frustrated readers:

"O Romeo, Romeo! wherefore art thou Romeo?". - (Act II, Scene II). Romeo and Juliet.

Patience, patience, my friends - can Romeo be kept away from his Juliet for too long?

Finally, this is what the stubborn, stubborn story teller in me says when it comes to rushing the pace of my narrative: ☢️

"I 'll not budge an inch". - (Induction, Scene I). Taming of the Shrew.

And last but not the least, thank you Ipoona, for being the first one to make sense of the method in my madness 😃 - you know me too well, my soul sister!

"Though this be madness, yet there is method in 't.". - (Act II, Scene II). Hamlet.

See you, my friends, and soon!

Love,

Edited by InspiredSoul - 11 years ago

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SarunNArshi

@SarunNArshi

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#155

yeyy!!!i am the frst one to like and comment.
PLZ PLZ PLZ.get my arshi romance sooon in ur next update.Going by ur note.meri kaamna jald hi poori hone wali hai.;-):-)
Eagerly waiting

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InspiredSoul

@InspiredSoul

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#156

Originally posted by: SarunNArshi
yeyy!!!i am the frst one to like and comment.
PLZ PLZ PLZ.get my arshi romance sooon in ur next update.Going by ur note.meri kaamna jald hi poori hone wali hai.;-):-)
Eagerly waiting

Your wish is my command! 😊